The Unforgiving (REWRITE)

By CartoonFF

14K 221 60

after his family threw him out, Lincoln ran from home and was never heard from again. 14 years later, Lynn Sr... More

Chapter 1: No Such Luck for The Louds
Chapter 2: Lincoln
Chapter 3: Surrender
Chapter 5: Luna Loud
Chapter 6: Leni Loud
Chapter 7: Libby Loud
Announcment
Chapter 8: Royal Woods

Chapter 4: Entering the Maze

1.8K 30 8
By CartoonFF

For those of you asking about me not finishing the original book

please understand that I had a lot of problems with it and there were more plots that I wanted to explore but I couldn't in the original so I decided to rewrite it and fix a lot of mistakes in the original and I decided to not finish the old and start a new.

Not only that I've been getting a lot of hate for making new stories and not finishing old ones well, please understand that if I screw myself I screw myself! I have been trying to continue and come up with new chapters to old stories! I have but I've been lost... and I'm trying to fix myself if you think you can do a better job, please show me up and I'll gladly quit writing fanfics!

Also, if you are wondering what stories are going to be updated next, well it's gonna be "Back to the Start" my LincolnxMollie

.

.

.

.

Lincoln sat in the living with Walter and Tasha as well as Marshel. While Rita sat with Lola, Lana, Lisa, Lily, and Sam with little Lemmy in her arms. The room was silent.

Lisa looked to her older brother, "It's good to see you Linc-"

"Don't" Lincoln cut her off "Does Sam even know what happened to me? Did Luna or any of you tell anyone?" Lincoln asked

No one said a word, that was until Sam spoke up.

Sam looked up at Lincoln, "Luna did a long time ago..." Sam told him "I know what happened Lincoln and I am so sorry that they did what they did, but-"

"No, you don't get to speak for them, Sam!"Lincoln cried with a shake of his head, "None of them even looked for me!

"That's not true!" Lana cried

"Bullshit!" Lincoln said as he looked at her

"Honey I-" Rita began

"Don't call me that!" Lincoln yelled "You don't get to call me any sweet names or even call me your son! I decided you weren't my mother for a long time just like you decided I wasn't your son the moment you kicked me out of the house!"

Rita gasped as she looked to Lincoln, she then looked to the floor in shame

"What? Did that your feelings? Good" Lincoln said

"Lincoln!" Lily cried

"What!? I can't speak how I feel!? I can't tell them all the horrible things I wanted to say to them!" Lincoln cried "I deserve to be angry! Everything that happened to me happened because of them! because they left me! because they abandoned me!"

" Lincoln, I get that your angry" Lisa said

"I AM NOT ANGRY! I AM IN PAIN! BECAUSE YOU PUT ME HERE!" Lincoln cried in anger but tears fell from his eyes... "The person who was supposed to love me more than everything... and you left me..."

Rita looked at her son and she had no idea what to say to her son. She didn't even know if he should call him that right now. He was right, and he had every right to be angry with her and her daughters. They had abandoned him, they had left him alone in the cold. He was frightened, he was alone. Rita could not form a response.

Lincoln's tears fell more and he just wiped them away and without saying a word, he turned and walked out the front door.

"Lincoln wait!" Lily cried as she chased after him as did Marshel and Tasha. Some of the sisters left the room and went to their rooms, crying or seemingly unfazed by Lincoln's outburst.

Walter sighed and he then looked over to Rita, "I'm sorry about his behavior," Walter told them "But you must also understand that he has every right to be angry"

Rita nodded in agreement, "yes... he does" She told him, "I'm sorry about all of this Mr. Walker, I'm sorry... I must have put you and your wife through so much"

"Yes... Lincoln was a bit of a handful when I first brought him in, he didn't trust me or Tasha, nor did he talk to us about how he felt, it took us a full year to get him to open up" Walter told Rita, "But he's been a blessing truthfully... Lincoln is the light of our lives" He said

Rita nodded with a sad smile on her face, "I only wish we'd realized that" She said

Walter nodded, "I know you must think he hates you, all of you, but Lincoln was the one who asked me and my wife to come with him so he could try and forgive you all because deep down inside, he wants to see you all again and he wants to be a part of your family again, but right now he's not the problem" Walter began "The problem is you and your daughters, he accepted his faults and he's tried hard to move on so he can move on, but what about you? What about your daughters? can you and them do the same so they can move on?" Walter asked

Rita looked at him and gave him a soft yet sad smile, "I don't know... but I and I'm sure my daughters will try" Rita said

Walter smiled, "That's all I ask," he said

"what was he like?" Rita asked Walter "What was his life like after we forced him out...?" She asked

Watler smiled softly at the mother and he nodded, "Lincoln should be the one to tell you, but all I can say is that he was mature for his age... he was always smart and he was loved by a lot of people where we lived," Walter said, "but, he suffered along the way..."

"what happened?" Rita asked

Walter shook his head, "That I can't say... that is for Lincoln to tell you when he's ready" Walter said

Rita nodded and she told Watler that she would call the rest of her daughters about the good news of their brother returning him. Walter smiled and looked around the house and then looked over at the stairway and saw the pictures on the wall. He saw the family photo that had Lincoln in it and smiled softly. This family had a lot to work through and it wasn't going to be easy, but he held hope that Lincoln and the rest of the Louds would make it out of this maze of emotions...

.

.

.

Meanwhile, Lincoln was walking down the sidewalk alone, managing to convince the others that he just needed some alone time to calm himself, he just walked and walked until he arrived at the store he remembered quite well, he had found himself at Flips food and Fuel.

Lincoln looked up at the store and sighed, a wave of nostalgia flowed through him and he wondered what flip had been doing all this time, was he still even working it, or did he sell it off?

Lincoln walked in and when he did, the store still looked the same which brought a smile to his face. The more things change the more things stay the same huh? He walked over to the drinks and grabbed himself one drink and then walked over to the candy bars and grabbed himself a king-size chocolate bar. He then walked up to the counter to pay for his things but no one was there, so he hit the bell on the counter and waited for a few minutes, but no one came so he rang the bell again.

"B-Be there in a second!" Came a feminine voice that Lincoln didn't recognize

Lincoln waited until he heard a crashed and he set his things down and rushed to the back to make sure everything was ok when he did, he saw a box of broken and unbroken glass bottles on the floor, and sitting on the ground was a girl huddled up and her head resting on her knees. She was wearing plain black and white hight-top converse, wore a pair of black ripped jeans, and a short-sleeved forest green shirt, and Lincoln could see half of her name tag but couldn't make out the letters, she had brown semi-short hair in a ponytail and some freckles on her face.

"Are you ok?" Lincoln asked

She quickly looked up at Lincoln and then groaned, "I'm fine I just... ugh, I just been having a bad day" She said as she slowly got up

Lincoln held out his hand to help her up and she took it and he helped her up. They looked at the mess and the girl sighed heavily

"This is gonna take so long to clean" She groaned

Lincoln looked at her, "I could help if you want, I got nothing better to do anyway" Lincoln told her

"Thanks but I really should clean this up myself," She said, the girl then took in a deep breath then let it out and the girl then looked over to him and smiled, and held out her hand, "Sidney Chang, but please just call me Sid"

Lincoln smiled and shook her hand, "Nice to meet you then, Sid" Lincoln said "I'm Lincoln, Lincoln Walker"

"Nice to meet you Lincoln," Sid said with a smile, "So you new to town?" She asked

Lincoln just smiled, "You could say that," he told her "You a Local?"

Sid shook her head, "No, I moved here about 3 years ago" Sid told him "But what brings you here?" she asked

"reconnecting with Family here," He told her "What brought you here?" he asked

"I moved here after a few bad experiences in the city," Sid said

Lincoln nodded, "Well, Why don't we get started on cleaning up this mess?" Lincoln asked

"Oh! Right! haha, almost forgot about that" Sid said bashfully with a smile

Lincoln just smiled at her and grabbed an extra broom to help her clean up the mess and they began to talk more and get to know a little bit more about the other.

.

.

.

A Maze is either a way to freedom or it can be a prison... whichever one is up to you

Continue Reading

You'll Also Like

4.2K 72 8
After the events of the first story, Steve and Lincoln are no longer part of the Loud family. After multiple murders, Steve and Lincoln are willing t...
5.9K 56 16
I Know the Cover is very Terrifying, Fiery, and Fearing; But here is the ring to it though..👇 This Takes Place to the present and All 6 Seasons of t...
1.5K 20 20
Six months after winning the World Tournament,and five days after the dream match with his younger sister Lucy,Lincoln Loud has finally reached his s...
5.6K 58 18
Join Lincoln Loud (a 12 year old boy who lives 10 sisters) and his friends and family in their new adventures in Royal Woods, Great Lakes City and Sc...