KUCH TO HAI TERE MERE DARMIAN...

Von Ssdevan

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This story is based on balveer returns .I am not satisfied by story and characters .So I am writing on my own... Mehr

character sketch
proclaim
A MYSTERIOUS DREAM
DEBANYA MEET
A DILEMMA
A PUNISMENT
A New start
A NEW PAYING GUEST
A FAN GIRL
AN ACCIDENT
The Truth
THE BALVEER
A SUSPENSE
THE SUSPENSE PART 2
TIMNASA ESCAPE
A HIJACK
VIVAN'S PLAN
A KIDNAPPING
MYSTERY MAN ENTRY
MISSION BEGAN
A RIDDLE
DEV IN ANANYA'S COLLEGE
A DANGER AND A DOUBT
24 HOURs
KARMA RETURNS
EK INTEZAR
A BELIEVE AND A BETRAYAL
one step ahead
ANANYA'S TRUTH
A TRAP
Ek Jhalak
A Firing
DARD
KAAL KILVISH
ATTACKS
THE TIMNASA
Ananya and Shaurya Meet
Nursing DABBU
ANANYA'S CONFUSION
A DREAM
Dabbu is balveer
A PUNISHMENT
EK KHULASA
REASON
Ananya's past part 1
A PROMISE
KARELA
DEV'S LIFE IN DANGER
An unknown letter
RESTLESS VIVAN
LORI
STONE STATUES
Dabbu and vivan
SOLVED BUT UNSOLVED
Balveer v/s nakabposh
A NEW ENTRY
Kaal veer
BALVEER RETURNS
Ananya and nakabposh last meet.
A new conspiracy
Dev's jealousy
Baal Pari and Ananya
A Surprise
Dev and Ananya day out
Ananya is in Danger
A New Enemy
Water Problem 1
Vivan Identity Revealed
Water Problem 2
Reunion
INTERCHANGED
Dance party 1
Dance party 2
Dance party 3
MILSA'S CONFESSION
SAWAL
Confusion
Jhalak 2.O
DATE
A wish
Angry Ananya😠😠
Voting
Dev's past part 1
Baal veer's past 1
CoversπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ™πŸ™
Attack on Pari lok
Timnasa and Balveer Fight
UNCONSCIOUS DEV
Kaal Sastra
Veer Diwas
THREE MAGICAL WORDS
DREAM GIRL
Realisation
Its Birthday
Birthday Party
Shaurya
MAR JAU YA JI LU JARA
And Its not over yet
ITS BACK

Someone's Arrival

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Ananya went to her room after a tiring day i.e.her birthday .(birthday hai ki khatam hi nhi hota😌)
She stands in front of mirror to remove earrings.While removing her earrings she look at her own reflection in the mirror and remembers Dev song in the party which makes her cheek red.
Ananya-"Dabbu ki bato se mujhe itna fark kyu par rha hai.koi fark nhi per rha ab agar koi aise tarif karega to ......Its natural .So stop overthinking.
She look at the sketch of nakabposh which is hanging .she pick up the sketch and remembers Ray's party and his behaviour toward her.

Ananya-"Maine kabhi nhi socha tha ki tum mujhe itna believe karoge ki mujhe apna face dikha kar apna secret bta doge,kabhi nhi socha tha aise bate karoge jaise aaj kal karne lga ho(she remembers Ray's flirting talks) mujhe to khush hona chahiye na .Phir mujhe wo khushi kyu nhi hoti jo sirf tumhari ek jhalak se hoti thi.(she remembers the times when she see nakabposh)
Tumhare na hone per bhi jo tumhari maujudgi ka ehsaas tha ab wo tumhare sath hone per bhi kyu nhi hota. Kyu tumse wo connection feel nhi ho pata.
Her eyes filled with tears remembering those time when he meets him frequently.
Ananya-"tab  tumhare bare me  janti nhi thi   phir bhi tum jane pehchane lagte the ab tumhare bare me janti hu phir bhi Anjane se lagte ho .

In vivan' s room

Dev come after washroom and look at vivan who is sleeping peacefully. He noticed that Whole day Vivan was happy but sometimes gets lost in his thoughts specially with karuna ji.He thought to talk him about it .He sleep beside him and kiss his forehead lovingly .

In kaal lok
Timnasa is standing in front of sarvkaal .
Timnasa-"Kaise ho Sarvkal .
Sarvkaal -"Bahut dino baad ayi ho Timnasa "
Timnasa-"wo kya hai na sarvkaal mai thora vyast thi apni agli chaal chalne me .Tumhe to pta hi hoga maine vivan ke man me sandeh ka kaisa beej dala hai jo jald hi per(tree ) ban jayega jo mujhe bahut hi mitha fal (fruit)dega
Flashback starts
Vivan is playing in school during recess when he saw Timnasa  standing behind a tree .He went near her
Timnasa-"kaise ho vivan?aur karuna kaisi hai"
Vivan-"O timmy aunty ,Agar meri maa ko harm karne ke bare me socha bhi na to mai tumhara wo hal karunga jo tum soch bhi nhi sakti"

Timnasa-"tumhari maa ke bare me to maine puchha hi nhi.per agar puchh bhi leti to tum kya bologe tumhe to khud nhi pta ki tumhari maa kaun hai"

Vivan-" lagta hai partner ke lautne ka shock kuch jyada jor se lga hai '

Timnasa-"sadma to tumhe lagega vivan ye jan kar ki jise tum ab tak apni maa samjh rahe the wo karuna tumhari maa nhi hai. Usne to bas tum per taras kha kar tumhe apne ghar me jagah di hai

Vivan-"tumhe kya lagta hai Timnasa mai tumhari inn baato ne aa jaunga"

Timnasa-"meri bato per yakin na ho to khud pta lga lo .Tumhare pass bhi to shaktiya hai "
Saying this she disappear from there.
Flashback end

Sarvkaal -"per uss fal(fruit) ko khane ke liye tum jivit hi nhi bachogi"
Saying this he starts laughing making Timnasa'face pale

Timnasa(in mind)-"Agar uss ladki ne mujhe dokha nhi diya hota to aaj mai uss chupi shakti ko khatam kar chuki hoti.per koi baat bhi uss shakti tak pahuchne ka jariya tum hi banogi Ananya."
Somewhere

Bambaal-"uss ladki ke karan tum apna asli maqsad bhul rahe ho Ray.
Ray-"No Mr.B wo apka aim hai naki mera .Mera Aim to Ananya hai .

Baambal-"Aur mere maqsad ko pura karna tumhari jimedari hai. Tum iss waqt sinkai jaa rahe ho jaha tumhe Birba ke sath mil kar humari agli yojna per kaam karna hai"
Ray-"But Mr .B...
Bambaal(sternly)-"Abhi"

In morning
Ananya's sleep is distrurb by a phone call. S
Ananya-"hello.......aap . Itne dino baad yaad ayi hai apko meri wo bhi abhi .

Someone (who is on phone)-"aisi baat nhi hai
Ananya-"I am just joking .Kya kaam tha

Someone-"mera transfer mumbai ho gya hai.Raksha Bandhan ke baad office join karna hai"
Ananya-"per Raksha Bandhan to kal hi hai na"
Someone-"ha,issliye mumbai me ek ghar chahiye. Tumhare jaan pehchaan me koi hai jisse ghar le sakte hai."
Ananya-"Itni jaldi.(thinking) mere friend ka ek ghar hai Usi society me jaha mai rehti hu.wo abhi uss ghar me nhi rehta . Aap kaho to mai usee baat karti hu.
Someone-"ha thik hai baat kar ke btana "

Ananya go to Dev room
Ananya-"Dabbu tum apna ghar rent per doge"
she explains everything to Dev
Dev(dramatically)-"ok waise bhi jab tak meri memory nhi aa jati mai issi ghar me hu na
Ananya-"wo kal hi shift karenge"

So how was the chapter?
Devanya moment spoil nhi karna tha issliye  evil sides ko nhi likha.
Thora boring hai Manage kar lena.

Kya hai Timnasa aur bambaal ki agli chal ?
Kaun BN aa raha hai
















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