KUCH TO HAI TERE MERE DARMIAN...

By Ssdevan

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This story is based on balveer returns .I am not satisfied by story and characters .So I am writing on my own... More

character sketch
proclaim
A MYSTERIOUS DREAM
DEBANYA MEET
A DILEMMA
A PUNISMENT
A New start
A NEW PAYING GUEST
A FAN GIRL
AN ACCIDENT
The Truth
THE BALVEER
A SUSPENSE
THE SUSPENSE PART 2
TIMNASA ESCAPE
A HIJACK
VIVAN'S PLAN
A KIDNAPPING
MYSTERY MAN ENTRY
MISSION BEGAN
A RIDDLE
DEV IN ANANYA'S COLLEGE
A DANGER AND A DOUBT
24 HOURs
KARMA RETURNS
EK INTEZAR
A BELIEVE AND A BETRAYAL
one step ahead
ANANYA'S TRUTH
A TRAP
Ek Jhalak
A Firing
DARD
KAAL KILVISH
ATTACKS
THE TIMNASA
Ananya and Shaurya Meet
Nursing DABBU
ANANYA'S CONFUSION
A DREAM
Dabbu is balveer
A PUNISHMENT
EK KHULASA
REASON
Ananya's past part 1
A PROMISE
KARELA
DEV'S LIFE IN DANGER
An unknown letter
RESTLESS VIVAN
LORI
STONE STATUES
Dabbu and vivan
SOLVED BUT UNSOLVED
Balveer v/s nakabposh
A NEW ENTRY
Kaal veer
BALVEER RETURNS
Ananya and nakabposh last meet.
A new conspiracy
Dev's jealousy
Baal Pari and Ananya
A Surprise
Dev and Ananya day out
Ananya is in Danger
A New Enemy
Water Problem 1
Vivan Identity Revealed
Water Problem 2
Reunion
INTERCHANGED
Dance party 1
Dance party 2
Dance party 3
MILSA'S CONFESSION
SAWAL
Confusion
Jhalak 2.O
DATE
A wish
Angry Ananya๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ 
Dev's past part 1
Baal veer's past 1
Covers๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™
Attack on Pari lok
Timnasa and Balveer Fight
UNCONSCIOUS DEV
Kaal Sastra
Veer Diwas
THREE MAGICAL WORDS
DREAM GIRL
Realisation
Its Birthday
Birthday Party
Someone's Arrival
Shaurya
MAR JAU YA JI LU JARA
And Its not over yet
ITS BACK

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In Dev's House
Vivan,Baal veer ,Ananya and Baal pari  along with Fairies ,Dooba -Dooba and saurya are present.(Dev ka ghar secret meeting house ho gya hai,😌)

Dev(to ananya)-"Tumhari zid per mai ye voting karwa kar raha hu .Agar majority ko tumhare veer lok ane se koi aapti nhi hogi to tum veer look chal sakti ho"(Democracy hai😄)
Ananya is going to jump in happiness but dev hold his hand .
Dev-"lekin lekin agar majority tumhare khilaf gaya to tum apni zid chor dogi.manjoor hai"
Ananya-"ye achha hai promise tum karo aur use puri karne ke liye condition bhi tum hi rakho"

Dev(Sternly)-"ha ya na"
Ananya-"ok "
Dev-"Jo chahte hai ki Ananya veer lok aye wo ananya ki taraf chale jaye aur jo...
Before Baal veer can complete his sentence Vivan run toward Ananya. and before he can continue Baal pari also go toward Ananya and behind him one by one rest fairies and dooba dooba also go toward her.
Baal veer is looking them going toward her with open mouth 😲.Now,only saurya is in his Side. After a moment Saurya look towards Baal veer sheepishly 🐅and then taking slow steps she also go toward Ananya.🚶🚶🚶.

After some time Baal veer also come toward Ananya while rubbing his head like a child .
Ananya (shouting)-"yipeeeee "
Everyone close their ears .Ananya starts jumping and going to hug Dev in excitement but stop herself.
Dev look at her and then at her arms which is some inches away from his shoulder.
Ananya who is standing like statue as she realized what she is going to do , follow gaze of dabbu and then put her Arm back.
Everyone is looking them. After sometime Ananya hugs vivan and baal pari.
Ananya-"that means mere veer lok aane se kisi ko koi chai patti nhi hai"

Everyone-"chai patti  ☕"
Ananya-"Dabbu ne hi to kha tha"
Dev-"are chai patti nhi aapti .kisi ko koi aapti nhi hai"
Ananya-"whatever"
Dev"aapki Hindi bilkul aapke maa ki English ki tarah hai"
Ananya rolled her eyes.
Ananya-"to veer lok chale "

Baal pari-"Aise hi veer lok thori le jayenge aapko"
Ananya(pointing towards her dress)-"Mai aise veer lok nhi aa rahi hu pari maa .Maine veer lok ane ke aaj hi special shopping ki hai "

Dev and vivan look at each other at her statement.
Vivan-"Matlab aapko pta tha ki aap veer lok aa rahi ho"
Ananya(casually)-"ha"
Vivan look at Dev whose reaction is like ab se isse 2 km dur hi rahunga .Vivan chuckles at his reaction.
Baal pari-hum kapro ki baat nhi kar rahe hai"

Baal veer-"to phir hum Ananya ko veer lok kar kyu nhi jaa sakte"

Yet,he denied to take her veer lok but he also want to show her his house and want to see her reaction on seeing the beauty of veer lok.

Baal pari-"Baal veer ananya itni khash hai .Veer lok ane ka samay bhi kuch khass hona chahiya"

Ananya-"matlab?
Baal pari-"do dino baad veer lok ka sabse bara mahotsav ,veer diwas hai. Aap humari mukhya atithi(chief guest ban kar Baal veer ke sath ussi din veer lok me aayega."

Baal veer smile disappear hearing the name of veer diwas .
Masti pari-"per baal veer to kisi varsh veer diwas me veer lok nhi Ate "

This is a shock for baal pari as Once Baal veer was the happiest person on the eve of veer diwas .She looked at baal veer with questioning eyes .

Dooba-Dooba-"wo tab ki baat hai jab Baal pari humare sath nhi thi .Iss varsh to baal veer humare sath veer diwas jarur maneyga.samghe ki nhi samghe

Baal veer(sternly)-"nhi  Dooba -Dooba mai veer diwas ke din veer lok nhi aaunga.(looking at vivan)vivan tum Ananya ko lekar veer lok chale jana "
He turn around to left from there.
Baal pari-"Baal veer,Aap apne janam din ke utsav me samil nhi honge.

Baal veer-"mera janam din Meher ke sath ata hai maa .Veer diwas to bhawishawani ke liye manaya jaata hai"

Saying this he left from there .The worst day is of his life going to come in just two days and again bringing the pain ,unbearable pain. But he has to face this with great fortitude.

Baal pari can understand his pain after all she is his mother but she can't do anything.She also left from there leaving Ananya ,Vivan and fairies with innumerous questions.
Only person who can answer their questions is Dooba Dooba.


S

o how was the chapter?
Why Baal veer doesn't celebrate his birthday.
Precap-bta du ya phir rehne du?



.rahne deti hu .

.ok hint- Balveer's past 1

.

.Ab hint de hi diya to bta deti hu.



Precap-"BAAL VEER'S PAST 1
pehle hi bta diya tha😜🤪
























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