KUCH TO HAI TERE MERE DARMIAN...

By Ssdevan

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This story is based on balveer returns .I am not satisfied by story and characters .So I am writing on my own... More

character sketch
proclaim
A MYSTERIOUS DREAM
DEBANYA MEET
A DILEMMA
A PUNISMENT
A New start
A NEW PAYING GUEST
A FAN GIRL
AN ACCIDENT
The Truth
THE BALVEER
A SUSPENSE
THE SUSPENSE PART 2
TIMNASA ESCAPE
A HIJACK
VIVAN'S PLAN
A KIDNAPPING
MYSTERY MAN ENTRY
MISSION BEGAN
A RIDDLE
DEV IN ANANYA'S COLLEGE
A DANGER AND A DOUBT
24 HOURs
KARMA RETURNS
EK INTEZAR
A BELIEVE AND A BETRAYAL
one step ahead
ANANYA'S TRUTH
A TRAP
Ek Jhalak
A Firing
DARD
KAAL KILVISH
ATTACKS
THE TIMNASA
Ananya and Shaurya Meet
Nursing DABBU
ANANYA'S CONFUSION
A DREAM
Dabbu is balveer
A PUNISHMENT
EK KHULASA
REASON
Ananya's past part 1
A PROMISE
KARELA
DEV'S LIFE IN DANGER
An unknown letter
RESTLESS VIVAN
LORI
STONE STATUES
Dabbu and vivan
SOLVED BUT UNSOLVED
Balveer v/s nakabposh
A NEW ENTRY
Kaal veer
BALVEER RETURNS
Ananya and nakabposh last meet.
A new conspiracy
Dev's jealousy
Baal Pari and Ananya
A Surprise
Dev and Ananya day out
Ananya is in Danger
A New Enemy
Water Problem 1
Vivan Identity Revealed
Water Problem 2
Reunion
INTERCHANGED
Dance party 1
Dance party 2
Dance party 3
MILSA'S CONFESSION
SAWAL
Confusion
Jhalak 2.O
A wish
Angry Ananya😠😠
Voting
Dev's past part 1
Baal veer's past 1
CoversπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ™πŸ™
Attack on Pari lok
Timnasa and Balveer Fight
UNCONSCIOUS DEV
Kaal Sastra
Veer Diwas
THREE MAGICAL WORDS
DREAM GIRL
Realisation
Its Birthday
Birthday Party
Someone's Arrival
Shaurya
MAR JAU YA JI LU JARA
And Its not over yet
ITS BACK

DATE

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Dev looks toward the Pillar and he just keep looking at her .
Pink dress which she wore is touching the ground and its colour matches with her cheeks. Her black eyes with big  eyelids are contrasting the colour of her white skin. And top of that anklet and 🎀 ribbon is in addition.

(Imagine it in white colour).
yes,She is Ananya's pet dog Pichku .
.He remembers all the letters which he got ,Ananya explanation that letter is written by a friend of his admirer and Of course Ananya's teasing .Dev slowly turn his head toward Ananya who is trying her best to supress her laughter and to give a serious look. Dev taking a step toward her.
Dev(calmly)-"to ye hai wo jis se tum mujhe milwane layi thi."😌😌
Ananya nodded yes  taking a step backward and making  most innocent which she can make.
Dev(again taking a step toward her)- haa .To iski  friend jo letter likh rahi thi wo....(pointing a finger toward her).
Ananya again nodded yes taking one step backward.
Dev(taking one step forward)-"haa.matlab itne dino oh! nhi  matlab mahino se mujhe jo (stressing each word)  irritating letter aa rahe the wo tumne likhe the"😌😌
Again she nodded yes taking a step backward.
Dev-"matlab itne dino se mai jo itna frustrated tha wo tumhare karan tha?
Ananya again nodded.
Dev-" haa aur cheery on the top tum khud mujhe tease kar rahi thi (stressing each word) usi letter  ko  lekar jo tumne hi likha tha.
Ananya(innocently)-"mai to bas pichku ki help kar rahi thi .She really likes you .
Dev looks  around for a second and then starts chasing Ananya who is laughing and Again tom and Jerry chase starts . .While poor pichku is watching them not understanding anything. After sometime,it also starts running behind Dev.
Watching this Ananya stops and starts laughing holding her stomach while Dev also stops  wandering why she stops suddenly .Then Ananya point toward Pichku who is running toward  him.
Dev(angrily)-ha ha Very funny.
She tries to  control her laughter by keeping hand on her mouth 🤭.But again bursts into laughter looking at pichku which is rubbing its back on his legs .This time Dev also starts laughing 🤣😂😂😅😅😆😁😄😄.

After sometime both are lying on the floor holding their stomach and Still laughing.
Dev(between his laughter)-kaha se lati..😄....  ho aise....😆😆 ideas .
Ananya-" waha se jaha.... se tum nhi la sakte"
Dev-"kaha se"
Ananya-"Dimaag se jo tumhare pass nhi hai"
Dev-"Tumhe mujh per thori bhi daya nhi ayi Aisa prank karte hue"
Ananya(dramatically)-"ye prank hi tumhara punishment tha"
Till now both are lying on the floor facing the sky full of stars
Dev-"Kaisa punishment"

Ananya"Mujhse apni identity chhupayi uska punishment."
Dev"Ek min. tumhe mere bare me pta chalne se pehle se mujhe letters aa rahe the."
Ananya"to tumhe kisne kaha ki mujhe tumhari identity kaal lok me pta chi"
Dev"matlb.tum...
Ananya"mai pehle se janti thi Ki tum kaun ho. Tumhe bhi aur tumhare drame ko bhi "
This is surprising for Baal veer. Now he understands why was she not shocked when she first saw him as balveer.
Ananya-"Tit for tat dabbu. jaise  khud baal veer ho kar mere samne anjan bane rahe waise hi maine bhi kiya."

Dev(in mind)- Baal veer hu pta chla to aisa badla liya jabki baal veer ban kar to isse mila bhi nhi tha. TO JAB PTA chalega ki mai hi Nakabposh hu to kya  karegi"🙄😦😨😰
Dev-"tumhe kaise pta chla aur kab?
Ananya-"Timnasa ne mujhe cooking ki training nhi di hai .
Then she explains him how she got to know that he is baal veer.
Ananya -" Ab tumhari queery khatam ho gayi ho to maine tum dono le liye special date plan kiya hai."
Dev-"hum dono means...mai aur pichku?
Ananya(giggling )-"yes"
Dev also laughs.
Dev-"Okkk.(picking pichku in his arms) But pichku is a male na.
Ananya starts laughing hearing this .
Ananya(between her laughter)-"puch ...😄😄..to aise rahe ho...😂😂😂 ..jaise female hogi 😁😁
...to ...to ..tum shadi 😌😌 ....shadi kar loge🤣🤣.
Hearing this Dev also laughs on his foolishness.
Ananya-"waise pichku female dog hai"🤣🤣.

In Dev's house.
Dev enter in the house with pichku in his arms .Ananya stops him on the entrance .
And stands in front of him
Ananya(dramatically)-"Welcome to our restaurant sir.
Dev-"Oooo Restaurant !ok thank you mam.
Ananya-"your table is in this way sir.
Dev -"thank you.
Dev like a gentleman pull the chair and make pichku sit on it and sit on the other chair.
Ananya-"sir aap  kya order karna pasand karenge .
Dev(looking at pichku)-"Aap ko kya khana hai. My lady .
Ananya giggles seeing him treating pichku like  his Date while Dev is also  smiling inwardly.
Dev-"menu me kya hai"
Ananya-"sir, Aapke liye especially humari world 's best chief Ananya ke hatho ka special Gujrati thali .aur mam ke liye special Dog food."
Saying this she left from there and bring his dinner.
Dev looks at her.
Dev-"tumne  apne hatho se  bnaya hai?"
Ananya-"nhi tumhare hatho ko rent per liya tha .
Dev -"tum bhi khao na"
Ananya-"Don't worry Aaj wholesale me khana bnaya hai .Tumhare khane ke baad bhi  meri liye bach jayega.
Dev-" baitho na"
He makes her sit on the chair beside him.And put a spoonful in her mouth.

Teekhi teekhi adaa se teri

Chatakne lage, atakane lage iraade mere

Lehki lehki laton se teri

Ulajhane lage, sulajhane lage

hain waade mere (x2)

Dariyaa na sahi tu chaahat ka

De de na mujhe bas ik qatra

Tinka-tinka mere dil ka

Karta hai tujhse duaa..

Meri mannat tu, tujhko hai tujhse maanga

Meri mannat tu, tujhko hai Maula maana (x2)

Meri mannat tu..

Meri mannat tu..

Meri mannat tu...

They both are eating from same plate Dev is just hearing her non stop talks .Somewhere he also knows that this is her attempt to lift up her mood and yes She is quite successful.

Aankhon mein laakhon ishaare tere

Palkon mein aaja chhupa loon mere

Apni nazar ka main tika karoon

Sabki nazar se bachaa loon tujhe

Chhup chhup ke chanda jo taade tujhe

Mud-mud ke taare jo taake tujhe

Cheer ke raaton ki aawaargi

Til til jalaa doon main aage tere

Meri mannat tu, tujhko hai tujhse maanga

Meri mannat tu, tujhko hai Maula maana

Meri mannat tu, tujhko hai tujhse maanga

Meri mannat tu, tujhko hai Maula maana

Meri manat tu, meri mannat tu.

Life is slowly becoming more easy due to her.And unknown to him,His innumerous wounds is slowly healing .And May be one day Her care ,her affection and HER FRIENDSHIP heal him completely in same manner as he is doing.
TWO WOUNDED HEARTS HEALING EACH OTHER. 


So how was the chapter?
Waise jaise  Devanya has(laughing) rahe the waise mai bhi has rahi thi aap logo ke comments padh kar .zara, Ritwika what not?😜😜🤪🤪😂😅😅😅😅😜😜🤣🤣🤣
















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