KUCH TO HAI TERE MERE DARMIAN...

By Ssdevan

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This story is based on balveer returns .I am not satisfied by story and characters .So I am writing on my own... More

character sketch
proclaim
A MYSTERIOUS DREAM
DEBANYA MEET
A DILEMMA
A PUNISMENT
A New start
A NEW PAYING GUEST
A FAN GIRL
AN ACCIDENT
The Truth
THE BALVEER
A SUSPENSE
THE SUSPENSE PART 2
TIMNASA ESCAPE
A HIJACK
VIVAN'S PLAN
A KIDNAPPING
MYSTERY MAN ENTRY
MISSION BEGAN
A RIDDLE
DEV IN ANANYA'S COLLEGE
A DANGER AND A DOUBT
24 HOURs
KARMA RETURNS
EK INTEZAR
A BELIEVE AND A BETRAYAL
one step ahead
ANANYA'S TRUTH
A TRAP
Ek Jhalak
A Firing
DARD
KAAL KILVISH
ATTACKS
THE TIMNASA
Ananya and Shaurya Meet
Nursing DABBU
ANANYA'S CONFUSION
A DREAM
Dabbu is balveer
A PUNISHMENT
EK KHULASA
REASON
Ananya's past part 1
A PROMISE
KARELA
DEV'S LIFE IN DANGER
An unknown letter
RESTLESS VIVAN
LORI
STONE STATUES
Dabbu and vivan
SOLVED BUT UNSOLVED
Balveer v/s nakabposh
A NEW ENTRY
Kaal veer
BALVEER RETURNS
Ananya and nakabposh last meet.
A new conspiracy
Dev's jealousy
Baal Pari and Ananya
A Surprise
Dev and Ananya day out
Ananya is in Danger
A New Enemy
Water Problem 1
Vivan Identity Revealed
Water Problem 2
Reunion
INTERCHANGED
Dance party 1
Dance party 2
Dance party 3
MILSA'S CONFESSION
Confusion
Jhalak 2.O
DATE
A wish
Angry Ananya๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ 
Voting
Dev's past part 1
Baal veer's past 1
Covers๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™
Attack on Pari lok
Timnasa and Balveer Fight
UNCONSCIOUS DEV
Kaal Sastra
Veer Diwas
THREE MAGICAL WORDS
DREAM GIRL
Realisation
Its Birthday
Birthday Party
Someone's Arrival
Shaurya
MAR JAU YA JI LU JARA
And Its not over yet
ITS BACK

SAWAL

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Devaki ji is thinking about Ananya and Dev and about their chemistry .She noticed Ananya's happiness when she was with him. How much she was hurt because of that undisciplined boy Ray and how Dev cheered her up and how much she was happy .
Devaki(to Ananya)-"Karuna ji ka beta kitna achha hai na.(She doesn't know ki Dev unka beta nhi hai).

Ananya-"wo to hai mamma .Bahut cute hai.
Devaki(excited)-"hai na .ek dum handpump.
Ananya- Handpump!! you mean to say handsome?ha handsome to wo hai"

Devaki -"aur kitna bahadur hai. Timnasa se bhi nhi darta"
Ananya-"nhi darta?Aisa hai jo timnasa ko dra de.are mumma timnasa ke plans ki to band bja deta hai.

Devaki"tujhe pasand hai?"
Ananya"Bahut"
Devaki"to mai baat karu karuna ji se "
Ananya-"ok karlo.
Devaki-"sach?😄
Ananya-"ha mamma .Per mujhse puchne wali kya baat hai?agar aap  baat nhi karogi to earth per comfortable kaise feel karogi. You should interact with people.
Devaki is not able to understand  English words .She just lost in her imagination.
While Ananya noticed Vivan who just comes from veer lok. He is looking serious . Leaving her mom in her dream world, she goes in Vivan's room.
In vivan's Room
Vivan is sitting silently on his bed.
Ananya-"what happen vivi?Dabbu ne punish kiya kya?
Vivan-"wo kya punish karenge .unhe to khud hi punishment mil rahi hai😟"

Ananya"punishment mil rahi hai ?kaisi punishment ?kaun ker raha hai use punish?aur Kyu?
Vivan-"Situation Punish kar raha hai unhe didi.
Ananya"vivi just come straight to the point."

Vivan explains Ananya about the happenings of dance party.
Vivan-"Partner uss lady se confess karwa hi rahe the tabhi....

Flashback starts
Milsa is killed by someone.Balveer look toward the direction from where that power come and become shocked to see person in front of him⚡⚡⚡⚡

Balveer-"Maa .Aap.Maine aapse bahar rehne ko kaha tha .Phir aap yaha?Aur ye apne  .Apne aisa kyu kiya?
Baalpari turning her back toward Balveer
Baalpari-"Baalveer jisne apko hani pahuchane ki kosis ki hum use jivit kaise chor dete"
Balveer noticed her fear in her sound.
Balveer-"per maa usse hume  bahut jaankari mil sakti thi aur ab...

Baal pari-"hume maaf kar dijiye balveer hum apne krodh ko rok nhi paye"
Baal veer-" maa apke iss galti ne mujhe phir se dhram sankat me laa kar khara ker diya hai .Mai apka beta hone ke sath veer lok ka sanchalak bhi hu. Aur apne jo kiya hai wo ek apradh hai. Issliye ab mujhe majburan ..

Words refused to come from his mouth.
Balveer-"aap...apko ..saja dena hoga .Agle 7 dino tak aap apne hi mahal me kaid rahengi aur.....aur uss ...uss dauran aap kisi se bhi nhi milengi.
Baal pari(in mind)-"hum koi bhi kaisi bhi saja ke liye taiyaar hai Balveer per hum aapke samne sach nhi ane de sakte. Chahe iss sach ko chupane ke liye hume kuch bhi kyu na karna pare.

She don't know why but she was feeling that something very bad was going to happen That's why she came in the prison where she witnessed that her intuition is not wrong. And finding no other way she used this way.

Baal veer(in mind)-"mai janta  hu maa ki apke iss kadam ke pichhe koi aur wajah hai. Sayad mere un SAWALO ka jwab jo aap mujhe dena nhi chahti
.per apko ye nhi karna chahiya tha maa .Nhi karna chahiye tha.

Flashback end
Vivan-"Mai to soch bhi nhi sakta didi apni hi maa ko punishment dete waqt partner per kya gujri hogi."
Ananya-"wo hai kaha iss waqt"
Vivan-"Veer lok me"

She can understand his situation .Somehow she can feel her pain .She knows upcoming week is going to be very difficult for him .How can a son be relaxed when his mother is going through a punishment but she promise herself she will not let him upset.She don't how but she will distract him from his pain.

So how was the chapter?
Why Baal pari killed Milsa?
What will Ananya do?
Balveer kin sawalo ki baat kar raha  hai?

One More thing Maine bas 'hero gayab mode on 'se Character ka naam liya hai.
No one from that serial is going to include in this story.









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