KUCH TO HAI TERE MERE DARMIAN...

By Ssdevan

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This story is based on balveer returns .I am not satisfied by story and characters .So I am writing on my own... More

character sketch
proclaim
A MYSTERIOUS DREAM
DEBANYA MEET
A DILEMMA
A PUNISMENT
A New start
A NEW PAYING GUEST
A FAN GIRL
AN ACCIDENT
The Truth
THE BALVEER
A SUSPENSE
THE SUSPENSE PART 2
TIMNASA ESCAPE
A HIJACK
VIVAN'S PLAN
A KIDNAPPING
MYSTERY MAN ENTRY
MISSION BEGAN
A RIDDLE
DEV IN ANANYA'S COLLEGE
A DANGER AND A DOUBT
24 HOURs
KARMA RETURNS
EK INTEZAR
A BELIEVE AND A BETRAYAL
one step ahead
ANANYA'S TRUTH
A TRAP
Ek Jhalak
A Firing
DARD
KAAL KILVISH
ATTACKS
THE TIMNASA
Ananya and Shaurya Meet
Nursing DABBU
ANANYA'S CONFUSION
A DREAM
Dabbu is balveer
A PUNISHMENT
EK KHULASA
REASON
Ananya's past part 1
A PROMISE
KARELA
DEV'S LIFE IN DANGER
An unknown letter
RESTLESS VIVAN
LORI
STONE STATUES
Dabbu and vivan
SOLVED BUT UNSOLVED
Balveer v/s nakabposh
A NEW ENTRY
Kaal veer
BALVEER RETURNS
Ananya and nakabposh last meet.
A new conspiracy
Dev's jealousy
Baal Pari and Ananya
A Surprise
Dev and Ananya day out
Ananya is in Danger
A New Enemy
Water Problem 1
Vivan Identity Revealed
Water Problem 2
Reunion
INTERCHANGED
Dance party 1
Dance party 2
Dance party 3
SAWAL
Confusion
Jhalak 2.O
DATE
A wish
Angry Ananya😠😠
Voting
Dev's past part 1
Baal veer's past 1
Covers😃😃🙏🙏
Attack on Pari lok
Timnasa and Balveer Fight
UNCONSCIOUS DEV
Kaal Sastra
Veer Diwas
THREE MAGICAL WORDS
DREAM GIRL
Realisation
Its Birthday
Birthday Party
Someone's Arrival
Shaurya
MAR JAU YA JI LU JARA
And Its not over yet
ITS BACK

MILSA'S CONFESSION

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By Ssdevan

Baalveer enters in the prison of veer lok where Fairies with Baal pari and vivan is trying to make Milsa confess.

Baalveer-"kuch pta chla"
Vayu pari-"nhi baal veer humne puri kosis ki per
Milsa-tum chahe kuch bhi kar lo mai tumhe kuch nhi batane wali"
Baalveer looks at fairies . understanding his signal they leave(instead of jwala pari) from there while Vivan and Baalpari is surprised seeing this.
Baalveer-"Vivan, Maa aap dono bhi pariyo ke sath jaaiye.
Baal pari-"per kyu Baal veer?"

Jwala Pari-" kyuki baaki pariyo ki tarah aapka bhi dil bahut komal hai aur vivan abhi chota hai .Issliye aaplog yaha ka drishya nhi dekh payenge.
Baal veer-"Maa apko jana hoga .

Baal pari and vivan leave from there.

Baal veer sit in front of Milsa putting his one leg on another.
Baal veer-"ek antim mauka de raha hu.Jo swal pucha jaa raha hai uska sach sach jawab de do.

Milsa-"nhi diya to kya kar loge tum."

Balveer(in dangerous tone)-"Achho ke liye mai bahut achha hu per tum jaiso ke liye (leaning forward) tumse bhi jyada bura hu."

Milsa-"kya karoge ?Maar daloge?"

Baal veer -"nah! Baal veer maut jitni asan saja nhi deta"
He looked at jwala pari who close her mouth with her magic.
He takes out a sharp weapon and take her hand.With one attack he remove her one finger from her hand making her shiver due to pain.
Baal veer-" ek sawal ek jawab.Aur agar jwab ane me 5 sec se jyada der hua to ek ek kar ke tum tukro me batne lagogi"
Baal veer-"Tumhara naam"
Jwala pari allow her to speak
",Milsa"
Baal veer-"kaha se ayi ho "
"sinkaai"
"Dharti per ane ka maqsad kya tha"
"Tumhe dundna"
"wajah?
She remains silent for sometime .Balveer take the weapon near her another finger.
"Dansh ke prayog ko pura karne ke liye"
"Dansh kaun hai ?aur kaun sa prayog"
Before she can speak anything something come with speed of light and attack on her due to which she died.

After Sometime
Baal veer enter in his palace and taking slow steps he went in her bedroom and stand in front of family Photo of Joshi Family.
He take the photo in his hand and slowly touch it remembering old time

Dev-"Pareshaniya pehle bhi thi ab bhi hai .uljhane pehle bhi the ab bhi hai.Per dard ,dard pehle nhi tha per ab hai. Kyuki pehle aap sab mere sath the . (touching photo of Manav and Mehar)tum dono ke sath khel kar apne sari pareshaniya bhul jata tha.
He remember that time when he used to work in a tea stall and he had to deliever tea and biscuits in the office of his father  .How his father protected him when shop owner wad becoming angry on him because fairies had eaten some biscuits.How shop owner said"paise kaun dega tera baap" and he said yes..(touching photo of his father)aapke hone se aisa lagta tha papa jaise jivan me kitni bhi pareshani aa jaye chahe aap dhal ban kar mere samne khade ho. Mana ki aap hatho me hathiyar le kar ladte nhi the per apka hona hi kaafi tha .(touching photo of his mother)Aapke hatho ki malish se meri sari thakan utr jati thi"

He hugs the photo .
Dev(crying)-"thak gaya hu maa.Phir se sar per malish kar do na.Aa jao na Maa.
He sits down totally broken.

Dev-"kyu?kyu mai aap sab se dur ho gaya?kyu? kyuuuu?

So how was the chapter?
Who killed milsa?
Who is dansh?
Why Balveer is so much devastated?

Baalveer ka cruel roop kaisa laga?
However scene is copied from a movie.
Can you guess the movie?

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