KUCH TO HAI TERE MERE DARMIAN...

By Ssdevan

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This story is based on balveer returns .I am not satisfied by story and characters .So I am writing on my own... More

character sketch
proclaim
A MYSTERIOUS DREAM
DEBANYA MEET
A DILEMMA
A PUNISMENT
A New start
A NEW PAYING GUEST
A FAN GIRL
AN ACCIDENT
The Truth
THE BALVEER
A SUSPENSE
THE SUSPENSE PART 2
TIMNASA ESCAPE
A HIJACK
VIVAN'S PLAN
A KIDNAPPING
MYSTERY MAN ENTRY
MISSION BEGAN
A RIDDLE
DEV IN ANANYA'S COLLEGE
A DANGER AND A DOUBT
24 HOURs
KARMA RETURNS
EK INTEZAR
A BELIEVE AND A BETRAYAL
one step ahead
ANANYA'S TRUTH
A TRAP
Ek Jhalak
A Firing
DARD
KAAL KILVISH
ATTACKS
THE TIMNASA
Ananya and Shaurya Meet
Nursing DABBU
ANANYA'S CONFUSION
A DREAM
Dabbu is balveer
A PUNISHMENT
EK KHULASA
REASON
Ananya's past part 1
A PROMISE
KARELA
DEV'S LIFE IN DANGER
An unknown letter
RESTLESS VIVAN
LORI
STONE STATUES
Dabbu and vivan
SOLVED BUT UNSOLVED
Balveer v/s nakabposh
A NEW ENTRY
Kaal veer
BALVEER RETURNS
Ananya and nakabposh last meet.
A new conspiracy
Dev's jealousy
Baal Pari and Ananya
A Surprise
Dev and Ananya day out
Ananya is in Danger
A New Enemy
Water Problem 1
Vivan Identity Revealed
Water Problem 2
Reunion
INTERCHANGED
Dance party 1
Dance party 3
MILSA'S CONFESSION
SAWAL
Confusion
Jhalak 2.O
DATE
A wish
Angry Ananya๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ 
Voting
Dev's past part 1
Baal veer's past 1
Covers๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™
Attack on Pari lok
Timnasa and Balveer Fight
UNCONSCIOUS DEV
Kaal Sastra
Veer Diwas
THREE MAGICAL WORDS
DREAM GIRL
Realisation
Its Birthday
Birthday Party
Someone's Arrival
Shaurya
MAR JAU YA JI LU JARA
And Its not over yet
ITS BACK

Dance party 2

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By Ssdevan

Ananya is pacing left and right in make up room waiting  for Ray .While Devaki ,Karuna ,vivan and Dev are there just talking randomly.
"Hi Handsome"Greeted one of the college girl to Dev
Dev-"hello."
"my name is Natasha maine uss din dekha how you break ambulance door.Macho man ha"Said Natasha
Dev-"Thank you"
Natasha "Hi Ananya

"Hi Natasha"She replied faintly.
Natasha"what happen?any problem?
Ananya"Nhi kuch khaas nhi .but tumhari performance thi na abhi"
Natasha"Ha per mai apna naam withdraw kar rahi hu"
Ananya"kyaaa?per kyu?"
Natasha"you know mera BF Vicky .Jiske sath mai dance karne wali thi .He ditched me.ab song couple dance ka hai mai akele to perform nhi kar sakti na."

Ananya(in mind)-"Oh no!agar issne dance nhi kiya to mujhe karna hoga .last performance mera hi to hai.No no no Ananya think something.

Her eyes fall on Dev and she smiles looking at him .Dev look left and right to  see the person whom she is giving full smile and found that there is no one and she is looking at her.
Dev(in mind)-ye iski smile mujhe danger alarm kyu lag raha hai ."

Ananya-"tumhe couple dance karna hai na .Vicky nhi na sahi kisi aur ke sath kar lo.
Dev stands up horrified understanding her intention .
Dev(in mind)-"cut le beta Dev.Iske irade thik nhi lag rahe.😨💀💀

Natasha-"ha per itni jaldi kaun milega .
Dev slowly tries to exit from there but Ananya hold his coat's coller.
Ananya-"ye hai na .Ye banega tumhara partner.
Dev-"mujhe dance nhi ata"
Natasha-"ha aur isse to steps bhi nhi pta"
Ananya-"Don't worry he is a quick learner .hai na dabbu"

Dev nodded no.
Ananya-"and most important he loves to help .Chalo practice start karte hai .

Dev stands in boxing position
Ananya-"tum dance kar rahe ho ya boxing.

Ananya helps him to stand in dancing position.
Ananya-"ab ek hath kamar per"

Dev put his hand on his waist .
Ananya-"stupid apne nhi Natasha ke "

Dev looks at Natasha and then at Ananya who signal him to go head .
He nervously smiles and put his hand 5 cm away from Natasha's waist.
Natasha-"what is this?
Dev-"ab pose to dance wala ho hai na "
Ananya smiles inwardly sensing that he is uncomfortable.
Ananya-"ok thik hai .Ab aankho me dekho .
He looks in Ananya's eyes sweetly making her nervous.
Ananya-"meri..ankho me nhi natasha ki anakho me.
Dev looks in her eyes making his  eyes wide open.
Ananya-"ankho me dekhne bola hai .darane nhi . Normally dekho.
Ananya plays the song . Sometimes Dev put his leg on Natasha's leg, sometime he move round instead of Natasha . sometimes he collide with the object lose his balance.
Natasha-"aise dance karne se to achha hai mai dance hi na karu.
Saying this she left from there.
Ananya-"ab mai kaya kru .Ray ka to kuch pta nhi hai"
Devaki-"jo chla gaya uske pichhe mat bhago .aankhe kholo aur jaago.Dev hai na natasha nhi to tum Dev ka sath dance kar lo "

Dev &Ananya-"mai aur iske sath .No never.
Dev(in mind)-"pehle to ray ko partner banaya aur ab wo nhi hai to mai yaad aa raha hu."

Dev-"Iss afat ki bla ke sath dance karne ki kla mujhme nhi hai.

Ananya-"to tumhare sath dance karna bhi kise hai. Mai kisi donkey ko apna partner bna lungi per tumhe nhi😠"

Dev-" Oo issliye Ray ko partner banaya  hai.But sorry to say apka partner apko chor ker chla gya"

"Not that soon Dev"said Ray coming from behind making Ananya smile.

Ray"mai pichhe hatne walo me se nhi hu .Let's.go Ananya humara turn hai.

Saying this he extend his hand toward Ananya .Ananya holds his hand happily. Ray with Ananya went to stage but not before giving a look to Dev😼😼😼

So how was the chapter?

Precap-Dance party 3









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