KUCH TO HAI TERE MERE DARMIAN...

By Ssdevan

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This story is based on balveer returns .I am not satisfied by story and characters .So I am writing on my own... More

character sketch
proclaim
A MYSTERIOUS DREAM
DEBANYA MEET
A DILEMMA
A PUNISMENT
A New start
A NEW PAYING GUEST
A FAN GIRL
AN ACCIDENT
The Truth
THE BALVEER
A SUSPENSE
THE SUSPENSE PART 2
TIMNASA ESCAPE
A HIJACK
VIVAN'S PLAN
A KIDNAPPING
MYSTERY MAN ENTRY
MISSION BEGAN
A RIDDLE
DEV IN ANANYA'S COLLEGE
A DANGER AND A DOUBT
24 HOURs
KARMA RETURNS
EK INTEZAR
A BELIEVE AND A BETRAYAL
one step ahead
ANANYA'S TRUTH
A TRAP
Ek Jhalak
A Firing
DARD
KAAL KILVISH
ATTACKS
THE TIMNASA
Ananya and Shaurya Meet
Nursing DABBU
ANANYA'S CONFUSION
A DREAM
Dabbu is balveer
A PUNISHMENT
EK KHULASA
REASON
Ananya's past part 1
A PROMISE
KARELA
DEV'S LIFE IN DANGER
An unknown letter
RESTLESS VIVAN
LORI
STONE STATUES
Dabbu and vivan
SOLVED BUT UNSOLVED
Balveer v/s nakabposh
A NEW ENTRY
Kaal veer
BALVEER RETURNS
Ananya and nakabposh last meet.
A new conspiracy
Dev's jealousy
Baal Pari and Ananya
A Surprise
Dev and Ananya day out
Ananya is in Danger
A New Enemy
Water Problem 1
Vivan Identity Revealed
Water Problem 2
Reunion
INTERCHANGED
Dance party 2
Dance party 3
MILSA'S CONFESSION
SAWAL
Confusion
Jhalak 2.O
DATE
A wish
Angry Ananya๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ 
Voting
Dev's past part 1
Baal veer's past 1
Covers๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™
Attack on Pari lok
Timnasa and Balveer Fight
UNCONSCIOUS DEV
Kaal Sastra
Veer Diwas
THREE MAGICAL WORDS
DREAM GIRL
Realisation
Its Birthday
Birthday Party
Someone's Arrival
Shaurya
MAR JAU YA JI LU JARA
And Its not over yet
ITS BACK

Dance party 1

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"Hi Ananya " said Ray who is standing on entrance waiting for them.
Ananya"Oo Hi."
Ray-"I advice you Ananya not to enter in the college"
Ananya-"kyu?
Ray-"itni mehnat se college ko decorate kiya hai .tum ander jaogi to tumhare samne ye sara decorations fika per jayega.
Ananya smiles at him while rest other including Ananya's mom didn't like it.
(,Dev ka reaction likhne ki jarurat hai kya)

Ray-"mujhe apni family se introduce nhi karogi"
Ananya-"Ye meri mumma hai.Ye karuna aunty jinke ghar me mai PG hu.Ye khushi hai karuna aunty ki pyari se beti and ye vivan hai aunty ka beta as smart as naughty be"
Ray looking at Dev(as vivan).
Ray-"hi Bro"
Dev(as vivan)-"hello"
Ray-" I hope tum bhi yaha apna koi talent dekhaoge"
Dev(as vivan)-"ha maine dance me part liya hai"
Vivan(in mind)-aapne ?
Ray-"great😈

After sometime
Dev is continuously in contact of fairies while keeping safe distance from Ananya as he doesn't want to call him didi.
"partner sirf dance karne do na,please🥺"this is 5th time vivan is requesting him but as always he denied.
"Balveer hume yaha kuch mila hai" he received a message from masti pari.They explain him everything.
Baalveer-"Bahut achhe pariyo.Ab hume bas intezar karna hai"Saying this he give his victory smile.😏

At the same time
Bambaal-"sab kuch waisa hi ho raha hai jaisa hum chahte the .
Milsa-"bas ab thori hi der me vivan stage per jayega"
Ray-"correction lady M.vivan stage per jane ke liye nilkelega to per stage per pahuch nhi payega"
Bambaal -"Milsa kaam.khatam karne ki jimmedari.tumhari hai .Mai aur ray sab ke nazar ke samne rahenge.
Milsa-"aap chinta maat kijiye .Aaj vivan urf balveer ko koi nhi bacha sakta"

In hall
Vivan name is announced for next performance .Dev stand to go on stage but vivan hold his hand and looked at him making puppy eyes 🥺🥺🥺 to let him perform. But Dev denies and left .
Vivan-"aaj mai apni life ka sabse bura performance dene wala hu."😟😟😟

Dev as vivan is passing through the corridor to reach on stage when smoke starts coming from somewhere due to which he starts feeling dizzy and finally he falls down becoming unconscious.
After that Milsa come near him and near dev(as vivan) .
Milsa-"achhai ka rakhwala ab burai ki taqat banega"
Saying this she starts laughing.

On the other side
Everyone is waiting for vivan to come on stage .
Ananya-"stage per jane tak ka raasta kya via goa ho kar aata hai jo vivi ab tak stage per nhi pahucha .

Ray(in mind)-"So sorry Ananya.Tumhara vivi stage per to nhi aa payega😈"

"sorry sorry wo thora urgent nature's call tha"said vivan who just comes shocking Ray and Bambaal.

Bambaal-"aisa kaise ho sakta hai.?

Ray-"lady M ka to message tha ki vivan humare trap me phas chuka hai to phir ye yaha kaise.

Both Ray and Bambaal go to see Milsa .They reached in the Dean's office and get shocked seeing the scene .Milsa is trapped by Balveer and.fairies .And much to their shock Vivan who is standing in the middle get transformed into someone else.They can't see his face as his back is facing them
They hide themselves behind the door.

Vayu Pari -"Tumhe kya laga jaal tumne bichhaya hai
Dwani Pari-"hume tumhari yojna ke baare me hume pehle se pta tha .

Masti pari-"jaal humne bichhaya tha .aur tum iss jaal me phas chuki ho"

They all take Milsa and disappear.
Ray angrily punch on the door due to which it break.
Ray-Dammmit Mr.B. That means Vivan mera lil. brother nhi hai.agar hume dad ka message time pe mil gaya hota to aaj humlog yaha fool ki tarah khade nhi hote."

Baambal-"sabr Ray sabr .Tumhare pita
ki maut kab hui ye humme se koi nhi jaanta aur kuch dino pehle hi hume tumhare pita ka likha khat hume mila aur tab hume pta chla ki tumhara ek chota bhai hai.Aise me hum me se koi bhi ye andaza nhi laga sakta tha ki wo bachha Baalveer nhi hai"

In hall
Dev sits beside Ananya who is watching vivan's performance.
Ananya(looking at stage)-"kya khichdi pak rahi hai tum dono me.
Dev(looking at stage)-"kaisi khichdi"

Ananya"Don't try to act smart"
Dev"I am smart"
Ananya"Dabbu youuu"
Dev"Anu meeee"
Ananya looks at him angrily.
Dev(looking at stage)"mana mai smart hu , Charming hu , handsome hu .per mujhe tum baad me bhi aaram se dekh sakti ho abhi vivan ka performance dekh lo😜"
Ananya angrily look at stage.
Vivan performance gets over .
Ananya is looking here and there tensed.
Dev-"kise dhund rahi ho"
Ananya-"Ray ko.abhi jo performance hone wali hai uske baad humara hi turn hai.

So how was the chapter?

Precap-"Dance party 2





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