KUCH TO HAI TERE MERE DARMIAN...

By Ssdevan

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This story is based on balveer returns .I am not satisfied by story and characters .So I am writing on my own... More

character sketch
proclaim
A MYSTERIOUS DREAM
DEBANYA MEET
A DILEMMA
A PUNISMENT
A New start
A NEW PAYING GUEST
A FAN GIRL
AN ACCIDENT
The Truth
THE BALVEER
A SUSPENSE
THE SUSPENSE PART 2
TIMNASA ESCAPE
A HIJACK
VIVAN'S PLAN
A KIDNAPPING
MYSTERY MAN ENTRY
MISSION BEGAN
A RIDDLE
DEV IN ANANYA'S COLLEGE
A DANGER AND A DOUBT
24 HOURs
KARMA RETURNS
EK INTEZAR
A BELIEVE AND A BETRAYAL
one step ahead
ANANYA'S TRUTH
A TRAP
Ek Jhalak
A Firing
DARD
KAAL KILVISH
ATTACKS
THE TIMNASA
Ananya and Shaurya Meet
Nursing DABBU
ANANYA'S CONFUSION
A DREAM
Dabbu is balveer
A PUNISHMENT
EK KHULASA
REASON
Ananya's past part 1
A PROMISE
KARELA
DEV'S LIFE IN DANGER
An unknown letter
RESTLESS VIVAN
LORI
STONE STATUES
Dabbu and vivan
SOLVED BUT UNSOLVED
Balveer v/s nakabposh
A NEW ENTRY
Kaal veer
BALVEER RETURNS
Ananya and nakabposh last meet.
A new conspiracy
Dev's jealousy
Baal Pari and Ananya
A Surprise
Dev and Ananya day out
Ananya is in Danger
A New Enemy
Water Problem 1
Vivan Identity Revealed
Reunion
INTERCHANGED
Dance party 1
Dance party 2
Dance party 3
MILSA'S CONFESSION
SAWAL
Confusion
Jhalak 2.O
DATE
A wish
Angry Ananya😠😠
Voting
Dev's past part 1
Baal veer's past 1
Covers😃😃🙏🙏
Attack on Pari lok
Timnasa and Balveer Fight
UNCONSCIOUS DEV
Kaal Sastra
Veer Diwas
THREE MAGICAL WORDS
DREAM GIRL
Realisation
Its Birthday
Birthday Party
Someone's Arrival
Shaurya
MAR JAU YA JI LU JARA
And Its not over yet
ITS BACK

Water Problem 2

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Vivan-"ab age kya patner"

Dev-"vivan agar hum inka dimaag padh paye to hum inke bachhe ki tasvir  bana payenge"

Ananya(sarcastically)-" aur phir hum pure earth per uss tasvir le kar ghumenge aur logo ko dikha kar puchhenge ki ye baccha jo ab bada ho gaya hai kya apne dekha hai isse. Right.
Dev-"wrong .Hum uss tasvir se uske present ki tasvir banayenge aur pariyo ke help se(stressing each word)magic ke help se usse dhundenge"

Ananya-"Ooo"
Vivan-"per hum usske bachpan ke photo se abhi ki photo kaise banayenge"
Dev-"veer lok chalo btata hu"

In veer lok

Dev is standing in front of a big circle(jaisa  circle me show m milsa ki pic ayi thi)
Baal pari-"ye to natkhat pari ka aviskar hai na"
Dev-"ha maa."
Vivan-"Natkhat pari kaun hai?
Balveer and Balpari remember the time spent with natkhat pari.
Balveer-"bad me btata hu vivan."

Saying this he put photo in it.
Balveer-"ab kuch hi ghanto (hours) me ye tasvir ban jayegi

In vivan' house
Ananya-"kya hua?pta chla?
Dev-"kuch der me pta chal jayega'
Ananya-"Per tab tak to thirsty baby earth ka.sara pani pi jayenge.
Vivan-"don't worry didi .humne temporary solution kar diya hai"

Dev-wo bachhe abhi vivan ke banaye ek shield me hai jaha wo kuch nhi kar payenge .per hum unhe jyada der tak nhi rok sakte"

"kise nhi rok sakte"asked karuna who just entered.
Ananya-"Global warming aunty.Hum agar aise hi nature ko le kar careless rahe to global warming ke effect ko nhi rok payenge"
Dev(whisper to vivan)-"agar world best lier ka award hota to winner yahi hoti"
Vivan chuckles at his comment .
Karuna-"ye letter tum dono ke liye aya hai.
Dev-"phir se.
Ananya-"ye letter girl ka letter nhi hai "
Dev-"tumhe kaise pta"
Ananya-"hum dono ke liye aya hai wo bhi college se.
Vivan-"kya likha hai"
.college me one week baad Ek Charity event hai.Talent show. And you know what sirf college students hi nhi balki koi bhi iss me.part le sakta hhai"read Ananya excitingly.

Vivan-"mai bhi?
Ananya-"yes"
Dev-"achanak se charity event?
Ananya-"tum college ke trustee ho
jo tumse puch kar event organize karenge.

Vivan-"Didi aap participate karogi ?
Ananya-" yes.I will dance"
Vivan-"to aap aur patner dancing partner ban jao"

Ananya-"tumne kabhi ek donkey aur horse ko partner bante dekha hai"
Dev-"khud ko aise donkey to mat bolo anu.self respect naam ki koi chiz hoti hai"
Ananya-"youuu
Dev-"meeee.
Ananya-"I will never ever make you my partner.
Dev-"partner to tab banunga na jab mai participate karunga.Mai part hi nhi le raha.
Ananya-"Talent show me part lene ke liye Talent hona bhi chahiye na"
Dev-"Talent to mujh me kut kut kar bhara hai"
Ananya-"kuch jyada  hi kut gaya hai.nikalta hi nhi hai"
Saying this she left from there.
Dev(in mind)-"ab to apna talent dikhana hi parega"

Ananya is walking in the street when her legs stop hearing a melodious sound of flute.She follow the sound and saw dev is playing flute whole rest of the society is silently listening.

Ananya is looking at him totally lost.Her trance is broken by the clapping sound of the crowd.
Diwali ji -"kya basuri bajate ho Dev"
Dada ji-"are man khush ho gaya"
Girpare ji-"are humara dev to multi talented hai"
Dev look at Ananya and ask from his  eyes how was that?
Padmini ji-"are Dev to humare colony ka balveer hai"
Ananya stands beside Dev.
Ananya(whispers)-"itna mat ur(fly) jana ki earth per aa hi na pao"

Dev-"uski chinta mat karo .mujhe  asman ko chuna bhi ata hai aur jamin per rehna bhi .tum ye btao kaisa laga?

Ananya-'kuch khas nhi tha"
Dev-" Ab maan bhi lo anu.tumhara chehra bta raha ki you are impressed.

Ananya-"impress aur tumse .in your dream"

After some time
In veer lok.
Baal pari-"vivan kaha hai?
Baal veer-"maa use karuna ji ne rok liya .wo chitr...
Saurya-"kuch pal me puri ho jayegi

They all reach in front of the picture
.Till then picture gets completed.
Balveer-"ye to ...
It was a great shock for everybody.

In vivan's room.
"What happen dabbu? picture complete hui?
Dev who is looking very seriously and  nodded yes.
Vivan"to phir smile kar ke bolo na patner.Ab hume use dhundne jana chahiya."
Ananya is looking at dev who is just standing silently.
Ananya-" kya hua dabbu?koi problem hai?
Dev-" hume kahi bhi jane ki jarurat nhi hai .hum use bahut achhe se jante hai"
Vivan-"kaun hai wo partner?"
Dev looks silently at vivan not knowing how to told.

So how was the chapter?
Kiski photo bani hai veer lok me?

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