KUCH TO HAI TERE MERE DARMIAN...

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This story is based on balveer returns .I am not satisfied by story and characters .So I am writing on my own... Daha Fazla

character sketch
proclaim
A MYSTERIOUS DREAM
DEBANYA MEET
A DILEMMA
A PUNISMENT
A New start
A NEW PAYING GUEST
A FAN GIRL
AN ACCIDENT
The Truth
THE BALVEER
A SUSPENSE
THE SUSPENSE PART 2
TIMNASA ESCAPE
A HIJACK
VIVAN'S PLAN
A KIDNAPPING
MYSTERY MAN ENTRY
MISSION BEGAN
A RIDDLE
DEV IN ANANYA'S COLLEGE
A DANGER AND A DOUBT
24 HOURs
KARMA RETURNS
EK INTEZAR
A BELIEVE AND A BETRAYAL
one step ahead
ANANYA'S TRUTH
A TRAP
Ek Jhalak
A Firing
DARD
KAAL KILVISH
ATTACKS
THE TIMNASA
Ananya and Shaurya Meet
Nursing DABBU
ANANYA'S CONFUSION
A DREAM
Dabbu is balveer
A PUNISHMENT
EK KHULASA
REASON
Ananya's past part 1
A PROMISE
KARELA
DEV'S LIFE IN DANGER
An unknown letter
RESTLESS VIVAN
LORI
STONE STATUES
Dabbu and vivan
SOLVED BUT UNSOLVED
Balveer v/s nakabposh
A NEW ENTRY
Kaal veer
BALVEER RETURNS
Ananya and nakabposh last meet.
A new conspiracy
Dev's jealousy
Baal Pari and Ananya
A Surprise
Dev and Ananya day out
Ananya is in Danger
Water Problem 1
Vivan Identity Revealed
Water Problem 2
Reunion
INTERCHANGED
Dance party 1
Dance party 2
Dance party 3
MILSA'S CONFESSION
SAWAL
Confusion
Jhalak 2.O
DATE
A wish
Angry Ananya😠😠
Voting
Dev's past part 1
Baal veer's past 1
Covers😃😃🙏🙏
Attack on Pari lok
Timnasa and Balveer Fight
UNCONSCIOUS DEV
Kaal Sastra
Veer Diwas
THREE MAGICAL WORDS
DREAM GIRL
Realisation
Its Birthday
Birthday Party
Someone's Arrival
Shaurya
MAR JAU YA JI LU JARA
And Its not over yet
ITS BACK

A New Enemy

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As soon as Ananya enters inside the ambulance ,its door amd windows get automatically shut down and it catches fire.
Ray ,Bambaal and Milsa are watching the scene.
Ananya-"Help .koi hai? Ray..help.

Ray-"jitna shout karna hai karo.But Cry or pray nhi chorega Ray"
She gets tired due to shouting continuously but no one is hearing her and who is hearing is not willing to help her. Finally she closes her eyes and whispers

Ananya-"Dabbu .

Dev who is in his classroom hears her voice.He looks outside the window and see the burning Ambulance.He hurriedly stands up and run toward ambulance.
Ray and rest who are waiting for balveer to come gets surprised seeing Dev running toward Ambulance.
Dev-"Anu relax .I am here.
He put water on the fire but it is of no use. At last he break the ambulance door   and save Ananya till then rest of college also come there.(pani to Ray ke irado pe para hai😀).

He supports Ananya and help her to sit and went to bring water as she is coughing continuously.He gives water to her but before she can take it Ray came their and stand in the middle of Dev and Ananya.
Ray(showing fake concern)-"Are you ok Ananya.take it.Pani piyo.

Saying this he takes water from Dev's hand and give it to Ananya making him angry.

At night
Ananya is sitting in her room when Dev comes there and lie on the bed.

Dev-"Agar mujhse milna hi tha to aise hi mil leti na anu . Ambulance me aag lagane ki kya jarurat thi.😜

Ananya-"what the f..first first of all maine aag nhi lagwai aur secondly mai  tumse milne ke liye aag kyu lagaungi"
Dev look at her rising his one eyebrow with a smirk😏🤨 which makes her remember the day when she intentionally struck into the fire to meet balveer making her smile.She look another side to hide her smile from him.
Ananya-"wo to mai ...timnasa ke karan"
Dev-"jal gayi na"
Ananya-" mai Kyu jalu.jale tumhare shirt,tumhare baal.tum ganje ho jao...👩‍🦲👩‍🦲

Dev-"Are mai uss ambulance ke aag se jalne ki baat kar raha tha.Tumhare gale per burn mark hai"

Ananya-"haa wo..
Dev-"ointment lagaya"

Ananya"laga lungi "
He stands up and bring ointment and make her sit .
Ananya-"Dabbu mai lga lungi baad me

Dev-" .janta hu mai tumhe.tumhara baad kabhi nhi ayega."

He sits beside her and remove hair from her neck and start applying ointment.Ananya looks at him through mirror.

Ashqo me jo tha bahe
Aankho me per jo rahe
kuch to hai tere mere darmiyaan

Rishte hai kuch unsune
Sapne hai kuch ungine
lamhe hai kuch bejubaan,
Darmiyaan

Khamosh si baate,
Dev look at Ananya.They both are looking at each other through mirror.
Khamosh si baate(male voice)
aisi mulakate
Ho na sake jo baiya ,
Darmiyaan.
kuch to hai tere mere darmiyaan

Ananya looks down breaking their eye lock .
Dev-"aa...ho..gaya...
Ananya-"hmm...
Ananya  get lost in her own thought .
Dev-"kaha kho gayi ho?
Ananya-"dabbu aaj jo accident hua wo thora ajeeb tha.

"Accident?kaisa accident" asked vivan who just enter in the room.
Dev explains him everything.
Vivan-"Wow!aap log kitni jaldi mujhse baate share karte ho na.Didi aap thik ho na"

Ananya-"Relax vivi .I am fine.but mujhe accident kuch ajib sa lga"

Dev & vivan"Ajeeb lga matlab ?

Ananya-"jab mai ambulance me gayi to uske door aur windows khule the per mere enter karte hi wo band ho gaya.And not only that Ambulance me oxygen cylinders bhi the .jaisi aag thi waise blast ho jana chahiye tha"

Vivan-"kahi in sab ke pichhe Timmy aunty to nhi"
Dev-"nhi vivan ,Ananya ko maine bahut aasani se bacha liya. Timnasa aisi yojna nhi bna sakti.

Ananya-"per wo fire normal nhi thi"
Dev-"jaanta hu .Per iske pichhe timnasa nhi koi aur hai?"

Vivan-"Timmy aunty nhi to aur kaun ho sakta hai"

Dev-"Vivan ye universe bahut bada hai .Aur isme hazaro lok hai.Aur lakho aise log hai ho iss universe per raaz karna chahte.Hume nhi pta kis lok me kaha kaun si burai apna sir utha rahi hai"

Vivan-"iska matlab timnasa ki tarah aur bhi kayi villan honge.

Dev-"ha vivan.

Ananya-"per wo log mujh per kyu attack karenge"

Vivan-"sayad unhe pta ho ki apka connection balveer se hai"
Dev-"ho sakta hai.Aise me do possibilities hai.pehla ki humare new enemy  Ananya ko hurt kar ke mujh par war karna chahta hai aur wo itna anari hai ki usne ye stupid plan banaya.
Ananya-""Aur second possiblity.

Dev-"uska asli maqsad tumhe harm karna nhi hai balki wo tumhare through mujh tak phuchna chahta hai.Sayad use meri identity nhi pta"

Dev thinking something.

Dev-"Vivan tum apne magical powers ka use jitna  ho sake utna kam karna.Aur ho sake to magic use hi mat karna.Kyuki hume identify karne ke kiye unka pass do hi source hai.Ek humara magic aur dusri Ananya.

Ananya-"Don't worry.Mai careful rahungi.

Dev-"ek aur baat kisi bhi kimaat per in naye dushman ke bare me timnasa ko pta nhi chalna chahiye.wo iss baat ka fayda utha sakti hai.

Both noded.

So how was the chapter?
Ek sath do enemies.😲
Ray kyu balveer ko dhund raha hai?🤔




























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