KUCH TO HAI TERE MERE DARMIAN...

By Ssdevan

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This story is based on balveer returns .I am not satisfied by story and characters .So I am writing on my own... More

character sketch
proclaim
A MYSTERIOUS DREAM
DEBANYA MEET
A DILEMMA
A PUNISMENT
A New start
A NEW PAYING GUEST
A FAN GIRL
AN ACCIDENT
The Truth
THE BALVEER
A SUSPENSE
THE SUSPENSE PART 2
TIMNASA ESCAPE
A HIJACK
VIVAN'S PLAN
A KIDNAPPING
MYSTERY MAN ENTRY
MISSION BEGAN
A RIDDLE
DEV IN ANANYA'S COLLEGE
A DANGER AND A DOUBT
24 HOURs
KARMA RETURNS
EK INTEZAR
A BELIEVE AND A BETRAYAL
one step ahead
ANANYA'S TRUTH
A TRAP
Ek Jhalak
A Firing
DARD
KAAL KILVISH
ATTACKS
THE TIMNASA
Ananya and Shaurya Meet
Nursing DABBU
ANANYA'S CONFUSION
A DREAM
Dabbu is balveer
A PUNISHMENT
EK KHULASA
REASON
Ananya's past part 1
A PROMISE
KARELA
DEV'S LIFE IN DANGER
An unknown letter
RESTLESS VIVAN
LORI
STONE STATUES
Dabbu and vivan
SOLVED BUT UNSOLVED
Balveer v/s nakabposh
A NEW ENTRY
Kaal veer
BALVEER RETURNS
A new conspiracy
Dev's jealousy
Baal Pari and Ananya
A Surprise
Dev and Ananya day out
Ananya is in Danger
A New Enemy
Water Problem 1
Vivan Identity Revealed
Water Problem 2
Reunion
INTERCHANGED
Dance party 1
Dance party 2
Dance party 3
MILSA'S CONFESSION
SAWAL
Confusion
Jhalak 2.O
DATE
A wish
Angry Ananya๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ 
Voting
Dev's past part 1
Baal veer's past 1
Covers๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™
Attack on Pari lok
Timnasa and Balveer Fight
UNCONSCIOUS DEV
Kaal Sastra
Veer Diwas
THREE MAGICAL WORDS
DREAM GIRL
Realisation
Its Birthday
Birthday Party
Someone's Arrival
Shaurya
MAR JAU YA JI LU JARA
And Its not over yet
ITS BACK

Ananya and nakabposh last meet.

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Dev enters in Ananya's room who is sleeping peacefully .He sits beside her and look at sleeping angel.He slowly removes hair from her face .
Dev(in mind)-"Agar blessing ka koi roop hota to wo bilkul tumhari tarah hoti. Aisa lag raha jaise mere sare achhe kaam ke badle mai tumse mila hu. Thanks Anu mujhe meri maa se milwane ke liye. Thank you very much.

He stands up to leave when his eyes fall on the paper in Ananya's hand .He takes the paper.It was nakabposh's  sketch.
Dev-"Nakabposh ko jane se pehle ek baar Ananya se milna hoga.
He went near the letter box which is given by nakabposh .He takes the letter box and keeps a letter in its place.
In the morning
Ananya is getting ready for the college when she realised that letter box is missing .She reached there and found a letter by nakabposh in which he ask her to meet .A very big smile appear on her face reading his letter.

She come out from her room and collide with someone .
Ananya"dabbu.tumhara dimag band hai ye to pta hai but at least ankhe to khol ke chalo "
Dev"bina dekhe tum chal rahi thi mai nhi .waise itni jaldi me kaha jaa rahi ho"
Ananya"tumse matlab.per tum kaha jaa rahe ho "
Dev"same to you.tumse matlab"
Ananya"by the way pari maa kaisi hai?"
Dev"thik hai unka veer snan ho chuka hao aur ab wo veer lok me hai."

vivan"oh!sorry lagta hai ki aap dono koi secret discuss kar rahe the mai bad me ata hu"
Ananya-"Nhi vivi hum kya secret discuss kar sakte hai?"
vivan-"kya pta?aap dono mujhe kuch btate kaha ho"😠😠
Dev and Ananya look at each other understanding his anger.
Ananya"vivi mai tumhe nhi bta sakti thi timnasa ko pta chal jata
Dev"ha!
Vivan-"to patner ko kaise btaya?"
Ananya-"maine isse kuch nhi btaya"
Vivan-"to inhe kaise pta"
Dev-"nakabposh se"
vivan-"aur nakabposh ko kisne btaya"
Ananya(smiling nervously)-"wo maine....

vivan-"dekha 😠😠
Dev chuckles looking at Ananya's face
Vivan -"Aap kya has rahe ho partner .Aapne bhi mujhse itni badi baat chupayi .Mujhe to ab tak puri baat bhi  nhi pta hai"

Dev-"chote exam ke questions bina bataye hi set kiye jate hai"
Vivan"matlab"
Dev(placing hand on his shoulder)-"ye tumhara exam tha Chote .Mai dekhna chahta tha ki agar tum per mera guidence na ho to tum apni shaktiyo ka kaise use karte ho aur difficult situation ko kaise face karte ho.aur mujhe ye kehte hue bahut khushi ho rahi hai ki tum iss exam me pass ho gaye ho.Tumne mere absence me khud ko aur veer lok ko bhi bahut achhe se sambhala. Tumne na keval apni responsibility ko samjha per use bahut achhe se nibhaya .I AM PROUD OF YOU CHOTE

Balveer's word really make him happy.He happily hug him.
Vivan"maine apko bahut miss kiya"
Ananya-"I am also here.
Vivan hugs Ananya also.
Vivan-"I love you both
Dev-"me too"
vivan & Ananya-"what!
Dev-"I love you too vivan"
Ananya-"to thik .I love you too vivi
Vivan-"per mujhe abhi tak puri baat nhi pta"
Balveer explains about chupi shakti and also about Ananya.
Vivian-"Ab ye bhi bta dijiye nakabposh kaun hai"
Balveer-"band muthi lakh ki .khul gayi to khak ki.iss raaz ko raaz rahne do .Aur ab tum school niklo"
Ananya-"mujhe bhi late ho raha tha bye"

In a deserted place
Ananya is waiting for nakabposh.She heard his bike sound.
"ek khubsurat ladki ko wait karwana tumhe achha lagta hai kya?next time mai late aaungi aur tumhe wait karwaungi"Complain Ananya but nakabposh is silent .
Ananya-"what happen?
Nakabposh-"aaj mai ane ke liye nhi balki jane ke liye aya hu"
Ananya(smiling)"maltlab"
Nakabposh-"bahut hi heavy heart je sath tumse ye kehne aya hu ki aaj humari Last meeting hai .Ab mujhe jana hoga hamesha ke liye"

Ananya is not able to believe her ears.
Ananya(tears start forming in her eyes)-"jana hoga matlab.aise kaise jana hoga(smiles)tum mazak kar rahe ho right"

He doesn't want to hurt her but he has no other option .
Nakabposh-"nhi Ananya .I am not joking. Balveer wapas aa chuka hai issliye ab mujhe jana hoga"
Ananya-"ye kaisa logic hai tum dono sath nhi reh sakte aur tumhe to chupi shakti ko bhi dhundna hai na"
Nakabposh-"ab wo kaam balveer kar lega.mujhe jana hoga.I can't take risk"
Ananya-"tumhe  to kisine dekha bhi nhi hai .Tum mask ke bina to mujhse mil sakte ho na.
Nakabposh-"try to understand .mai abhi apni identity reveal nhi kar sakta.
Ananya-"mere samne bhi nhi"
He just look at her and turns back when she hold his hand.
Ananya-"bas thori  der ruk jao na"🥺

Dil charkhe ki ik tu dori
Dil charkhe ki ik tu dori
Sufi iska rang haaye

Ismein jo tera khwaab piroya
Ismein jo tera khwaab piroya
Neendein bani patang

Dil bharta nahi
Aankhein rajjti nahi
Dil bharta nahi
Aankhen rajjti nahi
Chaahe kitna bhi dekhti jaaun
Waqt jaaye main rok na paaun

Tu thodi der aur thehar ja sohneya
Tu thodi der aur thehar ja
Tu thodi der aur thehar ja zaalima
Tu thodi der aur thehar ja…

Tears starts rolling down on her cheeks .He gently wipes her tears. Her tears are making him weak and he can't afford it .He close his eyes tightly and gently remove his hand  and left from there .Ananya keep looking at him with teary eyes till he disappear.

Unknown to them third person is also there.
Somewhere

"Ek good news hai Mr. B .Balveer tak pahuchne ka way mil gaya .I mean to say mil gayi.

"ah ha"

so how was the chapter ?
kaun balveer tak pahuchna chahta hai ?









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