KUCH TO HAI TERE MERE DARMIAN...

Ssdevan द्वारा

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This story is based on balveer returns .I am not satisfied by story and characters .So I am writing on my own... अधिक

character sketch
proclaim
A MYSTERIOUS DREAM
DEBANYA MEET
A DILEMMA
A PUNISMENT
A New start
A NEW PAYING GUEST
A FAN GIRL
AN ACCIDENT
The Truth
THE BALVEER
A SUSPENSE
THE SUSPENSE PART 2
TIMNASA ESCAPE
A HIJACK
VIVAN'S PLAN
A KIDNAPPING
MYSTERY MAN ENTRY
MISSION BEGAN
A RIDDLE
DEV IN ANANYA'S COLLEGE
A DANGER AND A DOUBT
24 HOURs
KARMA RETURNS
EK INTEZAR
A BELIEVE AND A BETRAYAL
one step ahead
ANANYA'S TRUTH
A TRAP
Ek Jhalak
A Firing
DARD
KAAL KILVISH
ATTACKS
THE TIMNASA
Ananya and Shaurya Meet
Nursing DABBU
ANANYA'S CONFUSION
A DREAM
Dabbu is balveer
A PUNISHMENT
EK KHULASA
REASON
Ananya's past part 1
A PROMISE
KARELA
DEV'S LIFE IN DANGER
An unknown letter
RESTLESS VIVAN
LORI
STONE STATUES
Dabbu and vivan
SOLVED BUT UNSOLVED
Balveer v/s nakabposh
A NEW ENTRY
BALVEER RETURNS
Ananya and nakabposh last meet.
A new conspiracy
Dev's jealousy
Baal Pari and Ananya
A Surprise
Dev and Ananya day out
Ananya is in Danger
A New Enemy
Water Problem 1
Vivan Identity Revealed
Water Problem 2
Reunion
INTERCHANGED
Dance party 1
Dance party 2
Dance party 3
MILSA'S CONFESSION
SAWAL
Confusion
Jhalak 2.O
DATE
A wish
Angry Ananya😠😠
Voting
Dev's past part 1
Baal veer's past 1
Covers😃😃🙏🙏
Attack on Pari lok
Timnasa and Balveer Fight
UNCONSCIOUS DEV
Kaal Sastra
Veer Diwas
THREE MAGICAL WORDS
DREAM GIRL
Realisation
Its Birthday
Birthday Party
Someone's Arrival
Shaurya
MAR JAU YA JI LU JARA
And Its not over yet
ITS BACK

Kaal veer

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Ssdevan द्वारा

"Dabbu"said Ananya in her sweetest voice making Dev chuckle inwardly as he knows the reason of her sweetness. 😇
"Bolo Anu"he also replied in same tone.😇
Rest of the family members mouth became o shaped hearing them talking sweetly.😲😯
Ananya"Aaj saam ko tum mere sath movie dekhne chaloge ."
Now this is another level shock for them. They look at Ananya who is standing in their right with same expression.
"Nhi, actually mai movies nhi dekha"replied Dev sweetly.😇
Everyone look at Dev who is standing in their left with same expression.
"Tum movies nhi dekhte?"asked Ananya with surprise.
"Nhi"said Dev like before .
Ananya"To aaj dekh lo na"
Dev"Per aaj saam ko Mai busy hu"
"Tumhe kya kaam hai?"asked Ananya with fake smile as now she starts losing her patience.
Dev"Jana hai"
Ananya"Kaha"
Dev"Nindra Devi ki god(lap) me"
Ananya doesn't understand his words.
Dev"Matlab sone Jana hai?"
"Saam ko kaun sota hai Dabbu"asked Ananya controlling her anger.
Dev"Mai sota hu"
Ananya"To aaj mat Sona"
Declv"Mai apna schedule fix Kar Chuka hu.Aur..."
"Now that's enough. "Said Ananya angrily moving towards him "Ambani ho ,PM ho ,CM ho,dhoni ho Jo apna schedule change nhi Kar sakte.5 bje tak ready ho jana samjhe"😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠

In the evening
Dev and Ananya are walking on a deserted road.
Dev"yaha kaun sa cinema hall hai?yaha to dur dur Tak koi bhi nhi dikh raha"
Ananya"Chalo to sahi Dabbu"
They reached near a big black circle.
Dev and Ananya enter inside the circle and they reached kaal Lok.Dev looks at timnasa and her chamchas .
Dev(pretending to be frigten)"ye ...ye to wo Timnasa aur....chidimar.hai.
Bhaymar"Bhaymar"

Timnasa"bahut khub Ananya.Tumhe nhi pta tumne kitna bada kaam kiya.
Dev pretends to be in shock.
Dev"ye ..ye tumhe Kyu sabasi de rahi hai Anu.Kya kiya hai tumne"
Bhaymar"ha timnasa .tum iss ladki ki tarif Kyu kar rahi ho"
Timnasa-"wo issliye bhaymar kyuki Ananya mere liye kaam karti hai aur isne abtak jo kiya hai aur aage Jo karegi wo koi aur nhi Kar paya.
Ananya look at Dev who is looking at her with shock .She doesn't know whether he knows about her or not.

Ananya"Bhayrani Kya Mai apse kuch mang sakti hu"
Timnasa nodded yes.
Ananya (pretends to be excited)"actually bhayrani Maine kaal Lok ke bare me suna to bahut hai per kabhi dekha nhi hai.agar apki permission ho to Mai PURA kaal Lok ghumna chahti hu"
Timnasa"thik hai .tum PURA KAAL Lok ghum Shakti ho"
Ananya and Dev smiles inwardly .
Ananya (in mind )"Thanks Timnasa.Iss din ke liye Mai kab se wait Kar rahi thi"

Flashback starts
Ananya"ha nakabposh! pari ma ko free karwane ka ek tarika ha
Nakabposh-"kaisa tarika?"
Ananya-"kuch time pehle Timnasa ne ek weapon ke bare information lane ke liye mujhe ek library me bheja tha jaha sare magic aur uska Tor likha that.wahi mujhe timnasa ke spell ka bhi tor mila"
Balveer is not able to believe his ears .He is slowly losing hope to see his mother .There is a way to bring his mother back.
Ananya"kaal Lok me ek waterfall hai agar uss waterfall ka pani pari ma ke uper parta hai to wo timnasa ke spell se Bahar aa jayegi"
Nakabposh"kaha hai wo waterfall?"
Ananya"jaha timnasa ne Mr. Fire ball ko rakha hai uske pichhe hi wo waterfall hai.
Nakabposh"Mr. Fire ball?🤔
Ananya"ha wo big se fire ball hai Jo bolte hai.unka naam aa..Sr
Nakabposh"Sarvkaal?
Ananya"ha tum jante ho unhe"
Nakabposh"yes per wo jaha hai waha koi waterfall nhi hai"
Ananya"hai.Secret door ke pichhe hai"
Nakabposh'Oo.mai abhi uss jagha per jakar..
Ananya"nhi waha timnasa ke permission ke bina koi nhi jaa sakta.issliye to Mai uske good book me bani Hui hu taki wo khud mujhe waha Jane ki permission de"
Nakabposh"aur tumhe lagta hai ye possible hai"

Flashback ends.

Timnasa produces smoke around Dev due to which he becomes unconscious.
After some time Timnasa make him wear black cloth and take him for kaal snan.She successfully completed the ritual.Dev is lying unconscious on floor .
On the other side Ananya enters in

the restricted place which is sensed by timnasa.
Timnasa"kaal Pari tum iss per Nazar rakho mai aati hu"
Timnasa turns to leave but suddenly Vivan  with fairies come in front of her.
Vivan"swagat nhi karoge humara?"
Timnasa (sweetly)-"karenge zarur karenge per hum nhi tumhara swagat tumhara pyara balveer aa...nhi humara kalveer karega.
Saying this she moves one side so that Vivan can see unconscious balveer lying behind her.
Vivan"Kya kiya hai tumne patner ke sath?"
Kaal Pari"wahi Jo hum tumhare sath karna chahte the.per balveer ne kabhi hone nhi Diya"
Bhaymar"Tumhara pyara balveer ab burai ka rakshak kaal veer ban Chuka hai"
Vivan"nhi Aisa nhi ho sakta jisne mujhe acchaai ka Rasta dikhaya wo khud burai ka sath kabhi nhi de sakta"

Timnasa is again going to leave when she heard the roar of kalveer.She turns around and saw kalveer is standing in front of her.




So how was the chapter?
Flashback"chapter -Reason" ka part hai
Precap-"nhi bataungi"

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