Tears Of Destiny

By krishna_Inkelstain

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She was sister of almighty yet had to go through may hurdles. Her life was not a bed roses but it was bed of... More

Disclaimer
cast
Asthetics
Curse
Vrithika
Kala pradarshan
First meet
Vritika vs bheem
Festival Night
Fear & Feelings
Locked in a room
Gurudakshina
Wars
Coronation
Confrontation
Agony and Pain
Teaser
Past
Shakuni's plan
Escaping
Aftermath
Lanka
New characters added
New characters
Swayamvar
New Beginning
Shock or Surprise
Awaited
Draupadi-Pandavs
Return
Shakuni tho gaya
Music to one's ears
Dream or Reality?
Murder plan
Harsha
New story
Indraprasth - 1
Indraprastha - 2
Arjun
Dwarka
Subhadra-Arjun
A Vow and A Promise
Rajasuya Yagna

Drifting apart

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By krishna_Inkelstain

Yudhisthir pov

When I saw her in arena , I was mesmerised by her valour and courage I didn't knew when my subconscious mind was filled with her thoughts, the first glimpse of her face made me fall to hard for her.

I didn't know that I could feel attracted to someone till I have met her , she is fierce, bold ,talks whatever that is on her mind in short complete opposite of mine. First I was shocked to know that my pitamaha was close to someone else other than us he loves her so much, that is evident in his eyes may be more than us some relations doesn't need be blood related they are bonded by hearts.

I like the way she cares for her sister the same way I care by brothers but somewhere she doesn't like us especially mata don't know why maybe we disrespected her friend . Speaking of her friendship I adore their friendship a lot they care for each other and share everything with each other but I even envy their friendship because I never got a friend like her the way she takes care of her loved ones and takes stand for them.

That day when bheem challenged vritika I thought that was her foolishness she did so but when I saw her beating bheem like dust near feet I was amazed again I fell for her so hard and she had the authority to even shout of pitamaha. That night what I saw made my heart broke I saw her embracing karn I don't know why but I couldn't bear the sight .

Her talks, her care her attitude her pride made me fall in love with her so deep but when ever I see her with karn I pains in my heart, after the war we apologized to her wholeheartedly then I got to know more about her , the most mischievous person she is teases her brothers and sister pranks them at the same time loves them so much ,this is another side of her which we didn't know.

When mata had kept our marriage proposal in front of mamishree I was on cloud 9 I think mata sensed my love towards her but something changed pitamaha's and Krishna's expressions they were tensed I didn't know why but they were unhappy with this

We immediately ran towards mata , before pitamaha could speak to them we heard vritika there she was so furious after knowing all this her eyes were full red , the way she spoke with her mother made me and all in the rude manner made all of a bit shocked but we got to know the reason behind this she had gone through so much is the reason of her behaviour now .

She lost trust on her family only then how could I expect her to trust us. And the fire which rose after her departure wasn't talking name to decrease that's when I saw karn leaving in trance but the fire didn't effect him. May be it was his emotions towards her which were so pure that it didn't have any affect of fire.

After sometime I got to know that she fainted when I went to see her I saw karn , pitamaha were talking something which grabbed all of our interests he mentioned how he found her no matter why he loves her so much today I got to know, we went away to talk with later Subhadra was totally broken and karn was drowning in guilt

Balram and Krishna were expression less as if they knew all this. Even Ashwatthama and all Kauravas were so sad for her Duryodhan was able to make place in her heart which I was trying to he and Ashwatthama considered her as sister

When mahamantri sahadeva narrated the past we were numb she faced so much yet didn't break till now but today that the respect I have for her increased a lot

I don't know why I felt to ask her about the marriage proposal whether a 1% chance also I didn't want to leave it when I asked her whether she loves someone

I didn't want to listen Karn's name from her mouth but what she said broke me more . I don't know whether I can handle this pain or not after that we decided to leave to Hastinapur Kauravas and Ashwatthama wanted to stay there only so pitamaha permitted them though he wanted to stay to but we had works here . I don't know whether I could move on from her or not

Karn pov:
I don't know it pained in my heart when she said that her marriage was fixed something inside me broke , I didn't know why when I discussed it with ashwa he said that I was in love is he even serious this was the first thing that was in my mind but when he said clearly that will I be able to lose her again then my answer was hell no!!

Duryodhan was hell bent to murder that Mayank , we had to stop him or else we don't know when he would go and beat that person even I was feeling the same but when ever I tried to talk her about that Mayank she would shoo me away saying one thing or the other

Subhadra , Krishna and Balram decided to stay back we all got along well all of them helped me to rule and fix the problems of the country we would go out disguised and enjoy so much and learn more things I all this I got to know I fell for her so much I fell in love with her every moment she laughs the every moment she does something unique, after her break down she more free with all of us I could see her old self back

Ashwatthama, Krishna vriti and Duryodhan were in one team to play pranks on all and the most who are there targets are yuyutsu , Balram, me and dushasan others are silent spectators of all this

Mata Asti and Mata prapti are so sweet they are literally pampering all of us like their own children they never let me feel absence of radha ma, she promised me that she will come and stay once everything gets settled here .

And the most pampered from all of us is Duryodhan and dushala mainly vritika is spoiling all of them , Duryodhan is now more connected to vritika that sometimes he and Subhadra have a fight to grab her attention, Ashwatthama and Balram fight with each other saying that they are best brothers in mean time me and Krishna silently grab vritika and exit

One month passed away like this Subhadra , Krishna and Balram wanted to go back to Dwarka. Vritika didn't want to go so she stayed back , in all this I liked her company so much that it became my habit and addiction but I thought if she loves that Mayank then I will sacrifice my love

End of pov

Vritika was standing near the balcony of her room she experienced some one behind her turned to see her brother Krishna was standing there with no expressions on his face the usual smile which he has was missing

"What happened Bhaiya why are you a bit abnormal" she asked

"Do you love Mayank vriti or just wanted to fulfil the promise given by asur guru" he asked her in stern voice

"Bhaiya from few years I was constantly been said that I am going to be wife of Mayank and what Gurudev did was to protect me then I can't oppose him now saying no to his decision" vritika said in a monotonous tone

"Really don't you think this will ruin your life for whole, living with someone who doesn't love you and leaving behind the person whom you love more than anything" he said in the same tone

Vritika was shocked listening to Krishna 'love' is something she wanted to be away from but unfortunately destiny had another plans made her fall in love with her best friend even she knew that he to had feelings for her but she chose to stay mum

"Don't open your mouth this much wide I know you love karn I am your brother I can say it by seeing in your eyes but there is something I want to know from you what are you planning there is something cooking in your mind or else you wouldn't have send letter to ganga putr stating your departure from here to patal Lok" he asked her trying to extract more information from her , shock expression on vritika's face turned into smirk

"Bhaiya I am your sister don't you have some amount of trust on me that I will never let things happen which I don't want to then how can you think I will do something like this I have told that I won't break this marriage but I haven't told you that this marriage will happen" vritika flipped her hair said this with attitude

A big smile cracked on Krishna's face "I knew it you will do something like this but can't you tell karn he would go through heart break now I pity him" Krishna said dramatically

"Oh my drama queen Bhaiya I want to tell him but it will ruin my whole plan which I made for that Gandhar naresh you don't worry I will handle him" she said with a smile on her face Krishna immediately hugged tightly and left from there

After departure of Dwaraka siblings now Ashwatthama and even Kauravas were asked to be present in their respective kingdoms before going vritika placed a bomb on their head

"Even I have to go gurupita has sent a letter stating that maharaj mahabali wants Mayank and my marriage to be done as fast as possible" she said making all of them frown Duryodhan and Ashwatthama were ready to behead that Mayank once and for all but somehow controlled themselves for vritika

"I will kill that Mayank mitr how dare he take away by bhabhi Shree from me don't stop me today I will kill him with my bare hands" Duryodhan growled

"Even I won't stop you this time mitr suyo I will come with you how dare they will take away my sister from me" Ashwatthama paced to and fro thinking of the plan to abduct Mayank and kill him

"Bhrata mitr Ashwatthama first let mitr karn tell his feelings to her then we can do something like abducting bhabhi Shree or kill that Mayank" dushasan said making them calm

Karn was in deep thoughts didn't know what to do whether to stop her or let her go

"Mitr if you don't say your feelings today to my sister I am going to kill you before that Mayank" Ashwatthama yelled at once making karn out of his thoughts

"I don't want to ruin our friendship ashwa if she loves him then i think it's better for me to go away from her" karn said making all of them hit their heads

"Oh bhrata karn can't you see her love for you in her eyes it's evident that she loves you so much but is bound by her promise just go and talk with her" dushala tried to knock some sense in him

"Imagine karn can you see her laughing and being happy with someone else can you imagine her smile are not for you but for that Mayank can you imagine her holding hands with him and roaming in the streets which should be your place think karn think can you see her carrying someone else's marital symbols on her being some one else's wife will you be able to did that" Ashwatthama said to make karn realise what he is losing

Karn was imagining all that he couldn't stop his tears immediately strode himself towards vritika's room seeing her packing her things he recalled what Ashwatthama said he couldn't stop himself and pulled he towards him

"What happened Radhey you seemed to be disturbed" she asked seeing his face

"Because I can't act like you and hide my emotions vriti" he said with a hard voice clutching her shoulders coming dangerously close to her

"You are leaving me again vriti" karn said with tears in his eyes

"You know it from starting right now why all this" vritika knew what he was implying to but couldn't reveal it to him now no she can't go weak

"Because I want to be selfish this time I don't want you to leave me" he said touching his foreheads with hers

"Why Radhey"  her voice was trembling she was feeling weak she didn't want to fall weak infront of him not now no
"Because I love you dammit" he confessed their proximity was making her knees going weak she didn't know whether she will collapse at this moment but gathered herself and Fred from his grip and turned another side

"But I have to leave Radhey it's getting late" her voice was breaking she decided not to loose this time but karn was adamant to he wanted to know her feelings Now itself

He knew she was trying to control herself some push may be sufficient for her to blurt it out he just went near her again and slipped his hands on her bare waist sending shivers in her body she closed her eyes feeling his unusual touch . He pulled her close placing his chin on her shoulder lips were touching to her ears making her forget everything except his touch

"Don't hide your feelings from me vriti just blurt it out don't keep that in your heart for long priye" he whispered in husky voice making her heart beat fast her chest was unevenly going up and down he made her face him she was still closing her eyes tears were making her way down her cheeks

He bent down , his hot breath was pricking her skin and proximity was making her crazy she lost her control totally on her self, her body was not holding back . He wiped her tears and placed his finger on her chin and moved it a bit up

"Look at me vriti" his voice was more like a command which she obeyed. She opened her eyes to look into his eyes which were carrying pain , love and possessiveness and more desire she lost it she lost the game of hiding secrets from him

His look was piercing her black charcoal orbs which were showing her vulnerability and helplessness , which was carrying love for him he was happy but wanted to listen it from her he wanted her to say she loves him

"I am waiting priye for your answer let your heart out the consequences we will face it together" he said and continued

"If you are thinking about breaking the promise then I will talk with your Gurudev make him understand or I will talk with that Mayank please don't do this to yourself or me I can't bare another separation from you I will d.." before he could continue his lips were sealed he eyes were widened he didn't know how react her lips were on his he became totally numb but slowly drifted into the kiss

Their lips were moving in sync he pulled her more close by her waist her hands reached his hair grabbing it and moving according to the flow soon enough they parted their ways breathing heavily controlling their heart beat karn slowly opened his eyes to see his love breathing heavily looking at him with utmost care and love she moved again towards him near his ears brushing her lips with his ears

"Don't make it hard to leave you Radhey , just wait for my call this all what I can say to you now" she moved back and was going away but he caught her hand pulled her again into hug

"Will you come back to me" he asked her in breaking voice she smiled and broke the hug caught his hands in her's

"If I am dense darkness then you are like the golden morning
If you're the sparkling firefly and I'm like the dark dense forest
If I'm lost traveller you are my abode
They how can I not return back home Radhey" she said with a smile which made him smile like a maniac

"But this time you are going to come and get me . you have to find me wait for my call till I set everything right and if you succeed in this then no one in this world can again separate us" she said vanishing into air slowly

"Our separation is necessary but our milan is destiny no one can change it" saying so she went away with a hope to meet again and stay with him forever

Karn was smiling like a crazy person when he said this to Ashwatthama and Duryodhan they were dancing like idiots
"Now we don't need the plan of killing that Mayank or abduction one to" dushasan yelled

"What??" Karn was confused by their talks

"Woh bhrata actually we have planned to kidnap that Mayank or bhabhishree during wedding so that wedding gets canceled if you are not succeeded in confessing even possible kill him but now all bhabhi will take care we can happily go back to Hastinapur" Vikarn said softly making karn hit his head seeing his friends and brothers wild plans

To be continued::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

That's it for today

Precap: Shakuni evil plan  abhi kuch der vritika kayab hojayegi bad mein dike gi jab time aye

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