KUCH TO HAI TERE MERE DARMIAN...

By Ssdevan

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This story is based on balveer returns .I am not satisfied by story and characters .So I am writing on my own... More

character sketch
proclaim
A MYSTERIOUS DREAM
DEBANYA MEET
A DILEMMA
A PUNISMENT
A New start
A NEW PAYING GUEST
A FAN GIRL
AN ACCIDENT
The Truth
THE BALVEER
A SUSPENSE
THE SUSPENSE PART 2
TIMNASA ESCAPE
A HIJACK
VIVAN'S PLAN
A KIDNAPPING
MYSTERY MAN ENTRY
MISSION BEGAN
A RIDDLE
DEV IN ANANYA'S COLLEGE
A DANGER AND A DOUBT
24 HOURs
KARMA RETURNS
EK INTEZAR
A BELIEVE AND A BETRAYAL
one step ahead
ANANYA'S TRUTH
A TRAP
Ek Jhalak
A Firing
DARD
KAAL KILVISH
ATTACKS
THE TIMNASA
Ananya and Shaurya Meet
Nursing DABBU
ANANYA'S CONFUSION
A DREAM
Dabbu is balveer
A PUNISHMENT
EK KHULASA
REASON
Ananya's past part 1
A PROMISE
KARELA
DEV'S LIFE IN DANGER
An unknown letter
RESTLESS VIVAN
LORI
STONE STATUES
SOLVED BUT UNSOLVED
Balveer v/s nakabposh
A NEW ENTRY
Kaal veer
BALVEER RETURNS
Ananya and nakabposh last meet.
A new conspiracy
Dev's jealousy
Baal Pari and Ananya
A Surprise
Dev and Ananya day out
Ananya is in Danger
A New Enemy
Water Problem 1
Vivan Identity Revealed
Water Problem 2
Reunion
INTERCHANGED
Dance party 1
Dance party 2
Dance party 3
MILSA'S CONFESSION
SAWAL
Confusion
Jhalak 2.O
DATE
A wish
Angry Ananya๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ 
Voting
Dev's past part 1
Baal veer's past 1
Covers๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™
Attack on Pari lok
Timnasa and Balveer Fight
UNCONSCIOUS DEV
Kaal Sastra
Veer Diwas
THREE MAGICAL WORDS
DREAM GIRL
Realisation
Its Birthday
Birthday Party
Someone's Arrival
Shaurya
MAR JAU YA JI LU JARA
And Its not over yet
ITS BACK

Dabbu and vivan

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Ananya"mujhe pta hai tum balveer ho"
(Dev's reaction likhne ki jarurat hai Kya?)
😨😲😲😲😱
Ananya"I mean to say that balveer bhi tumhari tarah hi Dabbu hoga" 😉😋
He got relaxed hearing this.but soon get angry
"Tum ye kaise keh sakti ho?said Dev annoyed😠

Ananya"Tum to aise react Kar rahe ho jaise tum sach me balveer ho"

"Mai?n..nhi mai..mai koi balveer nhi hu "He become nervous
"Relax Dabbu,tum Kya ho mai achhi tarah janti hu"😎 saying this Ananya sits on the bed.Dev also sit beside her.
Dev "By the way tum achha ga leti ho, tumhari voice bilkul wo secret singer anahita ki tarah hai"
Ananya"Anahita ki voice anahita ki tarah nhi rahegi to kya tumhari rahegi"(okay our Anu sorry Dev's Anu is a secret singer Anahita too)
Dev-"Matlab tum Anahita ho"
She nodded casually.Dev looks at her for some time and then starts laughing.He lies on bed holding his stomach
Dev(between his laughter)-"tum...😃😃😃..Anahita😃😁😂to Ananya kaun hai"
Ananya (throwing a pillow at him) secret singer . secret Matlab samajhte ho"😠😠😠
He is still laughing and nodded yes.
Ananya-"Tumhe Kya lagta hai mere pass paise kaha se ate?
Dev(sarcastically)-"singing se ati hogi Anahita ji"
Before Ananya can say anything Vivan comes there making Dev And Ananya serious
Ananya-"what happen Vivi.Tumhara plan work kiya?
Vivan look at both of them sadly .
Vivan-"Kar Gaya"
Dev and Ananya look at each other sadly But soon realize that plan works.
Vivan takes out a stone from and touch the statue of Khushi.As soon as it touches Khushi , Khushi becomes normal.
Khushi-"mai yaha kaise aayi mai to raste me thi na .
Dev -"ha ha tum raste me thi aur raste me behosh ho gayi thi.Chalo mai tumhe juice deta hu"
Dev takes Khushi with him.After their departure
Ananya-"Great Vivi.Now tell me tumne ye kaise kiya"
Vivan (sits on bed with attitude)-"batata hu
Flashback starts:-
Vivan reaches kaal Lok with fairies where bhaymar with timnasa,kaal Pari and tauba tauba is waiting for him.
Bhaymar"Ayo Vivan.Hum Tumhara hi intezar Kar rahe the."
Vivan(pleading)"mujhe thik Kar do bhaymar iske badle tum Jo kahoge mai karunga"
Bhaymar (looking at timnasa proudly)-"tumhe kuch khass nhi karna hai bas nakabposh ko pather ka banana hai"
Vivan-"thik hai tum jaisa kahoge mai karunga (with attitude)Kuch aisa hi Socha tha na tumne.Teen chijo ko kabhi underestimate mat karna.I,me and myself"
He touches tauba tauba who turn into stone
Kaal Pari"tumhe Kya lagta hai tauba tauba ko hamesha ke liye pathar ka bna Diya"
Timnasa"Tum sayad bhul rahe ho Tauba tauba ko think Karne ka tarika humare pass hai"
Vivan-"achhi tarah yaad hai timmi aunty per isse thik to tab Kar payogi jab tum me se koi thik bachega.
Kaal Pari"akele tum hum sab ko pather ka bana doge.Tum dusre ko banaoge to tisra use thik Kar dega"
Fairies"akele nhi"
Saying that one of them touch timnasa while others touches kaal pari.They both slowly starts turning into stone.
Vivan-"wo Kya hai na bhaymar humare yaha Prasad akele nhi khaya jata"
Vivan moves toward bhaymar.Bhaymar tries to escape from there but gets surrounded by fairies.
A fairy touches bhaymar and he slowly starts converting in statue.
Vivan"ab batao bhaymar Kya hai iska upay"
Flashback end
Ananya-"omg Vivi .smart ha.
Vivan (moving his hand in hair)-"bachpan se.agar unme partner ki maa nhi hoti na to mai pakka sab ko statue bana Kar chor deta'
Ananya"partner Matlab ?balveer ki ma"
Vivan(sadly)-"ha .KAAL PARI PATNER KI MAA HAI"
This was a shock for Ananya⚡
Vivan-"I know Didi shocking hai na actually wo Baal Pari hai Jo timnasa ke bas me hai.Mai bhaiya ko bhi sab bta ker ata hu.
Saying this he runs toward Dev who just come .
Ananya (in mind)-"Dabbu Pari ma ka beta hai.per Pari ma ka to keval ek hi beta hai aur wo Dabbu hai!iska Matlab
Vivi Dabbu ka.......Aur Kya Dabbu ko apne aur Vivi ke rishte ke bare me pta hai?"
She looks toward the duo admiring their bond with tear of happiness in her eye.She takes her mobile out and click their photo.No one knows the game plan of destiny .She looked at them wandering what is the next plan of destiny.

So how was the chapter?
Kaisa laga Vivan ka plan?
Aur Kya hai Dev aur Vivan ka rista?

Also kaisa laga Anu ka anahita Wala truth

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