KUCH TO HAI TERE MERE DARMIAN...

By Ssdevan

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This story is based on balveer returns .I am not satisfied by story and characters .So I am writing on my own... More

character sketch
proclaim
A MYSTERIOUS DREAM
DEBANYA MEET
A DILEMMA
A PUNISMENT
A New start
A NEW PAYING GUEST
A FAN GIRL
AN ACCIDENT
The Truth
THE BALVEER
A SUSPENSE
THE SUSPENSE PART 2
TIMNASA ESCAPE
A HIJACK
VIVAN'S PLAN
A KIDNAPPING
MYSTERY MAN ENTRY
MISSION BEGAN
A RIDDLE
DEV IN ANANYA'S COLLEGE
A DANGER AND A DOUBT
24 HOURs
KARMA RETURNS
EK INTEZAR
A BELIEVE AND A BETRAYAL
one step ahead
ANANYA'S TRUTH
A TRAP
Ek Jhalak
A Firing
DARD
KAAL KILVISH
ATTACKS
THE TIMNASA
Ananya and Shaurya Meet
Nursing DABBU
ANANYA'S CONFUSION
A DREAM
Dabbu is balveer
A PUNISHMENT
EK KHULASA
REASON
A PROMISE
KARELA
DEV'S LIFE IN DANGER
An unknown letter
RESTLESS VIVAN
LORI
STONE STATUES
Dabbu and vivan
SOLVED BUT UNSOLVED
Balveer v/s nakabposh
A NEW ENTRY
Kaal veer
BALVEER RETURNS
Ananya and nakabposh last meet.
A new conspiracy
Dev's jealousy
Baal Pari and Ananya
A Surprise
Dev and Ananya day out
Ananya is in Danger
A New Enemy
Water Problem 1
Vivan Identity Revealed
Water Problem 2
Reunion
INTERCHANGED
Dance party 1
Dance party 2
Dance party 3
MILSA'S CONFESSION
SAWAL
Confusion
Jhalak 2.O
DATE
A wish
Angry Ananya😠😠
Voting
Dev's past part 1
Baal veer's past 1
CoversπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ™πŸ™
Attack on Pari lok
Timnasa and Balveer Fight
UNCONSCIOUS DEV
Kaal Sastra
Veer Diwas
THREE MAGICAL WORDS
DREAM GIRL
Realisation
Its Birthday
Birthday Party
Someone's Arrival
Shaurya
MAR JAU YA JI LU JARA
And Its not over yet
ITS BACK

Ananya's past part 1

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By Ssdevan


Ananya"Bahut time pehle mai ek problem me phas gayi thi.Mai waha se bhaag rahi thi tabhi maine pari ma ko dekha.Mai daur ker unke pass gayi .
Flashback starts.
(Brackets me ananya ka narration hai)
It was a dark night. Whole world  is sleeping.Ananya was running continously in a deserted road.Her breathes are uneven and she is totally wet with  sweat. Her upper arms is bleeding and hair is  totally meessed up. She collides with someone.She looked at that person and saw her pari ma is standing in front of her(pari ma ko dekh kar mujhe aisa laga jaise desert me kisi pyase ko cold drink mil gaya ho)
Ananya" thank god pari ma mujhe aap mil gayi.She can hear some footsteps approaching toward her.
Ananya"Pari maa aap please mujhe bacha lo .wo log.."
(wo mujhe aise dekh rahi thi jaise wo mujhe nahi janti.Mai unke look se confuse thi.per phir unhone ne mere sar par hath rakh kar kaha)
Kaal pari"tum chinta mat karo aur chalo mere sath"
(Mai unke sath chali gayi .Wo mujhe ek bahut hi weird se circle se ek jagah le gayi.waha charo taraf andhera tha. waha ka land ,air sab kuch ajib sa suffocating tha.Mujhe waha bahut dar lag raha tha .Sab kuch darawna tha.pari ma ek jagah ruk gayi.maine dekha waha mere alawa 2-3 aur ladki hai . Kuch waqt baad ek old lady ayi jo aur bhi jyada darawni thi.usne unme se ek ladki ke sar par hath rakha aur kuch hua jiske baad wo ladki bahut jyada old lagne lagi aur wo lady young ho gayi.Kuch samay baad wo ladki mar gayi.Mai uss waqt ek teenage girl thi jise  balveer ke siva magical world ke bare me kuch bhi nhi pata tha.Mai bahut jyada dari hui thi.Uss lady ne mujhe dekha .wo thori der tak mujhe ajib tarah se dekhti rahi)
Lady"bahut khub kaal pari.Iss ladki ki khubsurati lene ke baad mujhe aur kisi ladki ki jarurat nhi paregi.

"pari ma hum kaha aa gaye hai?ye kaun hai?yaha kya ho raha hai ?pari maa please yaha se chaliye na yaha se."she requests looking at that lady and when she turn around it seems like earth is not below her feet.Baal pari is in standing in kaal pari form.
Kaal pari"jaogi to tum jarur ladki per yaha se nahi balki  duniya ko chor kar hamesha ke liye"
She throw her at that lady's feet.
Kaal pari"lo timnasa aaj tumhari khoj khatam hui"
Timnasa"ruko kaal pari tum hume kuch pal akela chor do"
Kaal pari leaves from there leaving behind a very scared Ananya
Timnasa"tum yaha se jana chahti ho na "
Ananya nodded yes shivering in fear.
Timnasa"To phir mere ek sawal ka sach sach jawab dena.Tum Baal pari ko Kaise janti ho"
Ananya"Mai kisi Baal pari ko nahi janti"
She slap her on her cheek due to which she fall on the ground.
Timnasa"tumhe pariyo ke bare me kya pta hai"
Ananya(crying)"mujhe kuch bhi nhi pta.Please mujhe pari ma ke pass jane do"
She pulls her hair making him cry in pain.
Timnasa(angrily)"tumhe pariyo ke bare me nhi pta to phir kaal pari ko pari ma kyu bula rahi ho?kaise janti ho tum unhe"
Ananya(angrily)"wo koi kaal pari nahi hai. wo meri pari ma hai"
Timnasa"kaise janti ho tum use?
Ananya"usse tumhe kya?mujhe pari ma ke pass jane do"
Timnasa"tum kisi pari ko nhi janti?
Ananya"nhi"
Timnasa"aur kaal pari ko janti ho?"
Ananya"maine kaha na wo koi kaal pari nahi hai. wo meri pari ma hai aur wo koi pari nhi hai.Mai unhe aise pari maa bulati hu"
She said crying bitterly .

Timnasa(in mind)"lagta hai baal pari iss ladki se apni pehchan chupa kar milti thi.Per kyu?

Timnasa"tumhari pari maa ab kaal pari hai ladki.wo mere was me hai.aur wo wahi karti hai jo mai kehti hu."
Ananya"look mai tumhe last time warn kar rahi hu.mujhe aur pari maa ko jane do warna mai balveer ko bulaungi"
Timnasa starts laughing loudly
"balveer ko bulaogi,bulao.Kitni bhi koshish kar lo balveer nhi ayega"
(Maine balveer ko bahut baar bulaya per wo nhi aya.)
Timnasa"tum janti ho ladki ,tumhari kismat bahut achhi hai .Tum kaal pari ko janti ho issliye ab mai tumhe marungi nahi.kyuki tum jinda reh kar mere jyada kaam aa shakti ho.Per sawal ye hai ki mai tumhara kya karu?.
She pretends to think.
Timnasa"umm tumhe kaal pari ki tarah apne was me kar lu.umm nhi phir wo pariya jaan jayegi ki tum per timnasa ki burai ka saya hai.Hai ek kaam kar sakte hai .Mai abhi tum per ek jaadu karungi.phir tum behosh ho jaogi.aur jab tumhe hosh aayega tab TUMHE APNE PICHHLI ZINDAGI KE BARE ME KUCH BHI YAAD NHI HOGA.AUR PHIR TUMHARA DIMAG EK SADE PANNE(EMPTY PAPER) KI TARAH HOGI JIS PER MAI JO CHAHU WO LIKH SAKTI HU.
Flashback end
Ananya"phir timnasa ne koi magic kiya per uska magic galat ho gaya mujhe uss magic ke baad bhi sab yaad tha.
Nakabposh"TIMNASA KA MAGIC GALAT HO GAYA!!!"

Balveer(in mind)-"timnasa ka magic kaise galat ho shakta hai?vivan bhi Ananya ki memory nhi mita paya tha.
Ananya"kaha kho gaye?
Nakabposh"Nothing.tum continue karo"
Ananya"Ok .to timnasa ka magic work nhi kiya per mai janti thi ki agar ye use pta chala to ya to mujhe mar degi ya phir dubara magic karegi.Aur tab sayad wo work kar jaye.Issliye jaisa timnasa ne kaha tha maine waisa hi act kiya.Timnasa ne mujhe btaya ki mai ek orphan hu aur wo meri guardian hai.Usne mujhe earth per ek aam ladki ki tarah rakha per wo khud mujhe training deti rahi.mujhe logo se dosti karne ya without reason baat karna mana tha.mai bhi uska believe jitne ke liye uss ki baat ko pathar ki line samajh kar follow karti thi.
Starting me 24×7 wo mujh per nazar rakhti thi.aur jab usse yakin ho gaya ki mere man me uske liye tumhi mere mandir,tumhe meri puja,tumhi devta ho wali feelings hai to usne mujh per nazar rakhna band kar diya.
Aur phir ek din usne mujhse BN me mission per bhej diya.story over"


So how was the chapter?
Ye age churane wala most of the pariyo ki kahani me rehta hai.hai na.




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