A diamond hidden within the g...

Door Spiky314

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Imagine a alternate world where the mario universe has a modern feel to it, and is full of action. Full of se... Meer

A diamond hidden within the gray line introduction
Chapter 1: Uneasy ground towards a new beginning.
Chapter 2: New experience.
Chapter 3: The best first day. Part one.
Chapter 4: The best first day. Part two.
Chapter 5: Unique reunion between childhood friends.
Chapter 6: Max's ballsy stunt and his new room.
Chapter 7: Examining a new room and a new morning.
Chapter 8: The phone call leading to concern.
Chapter 9: Magical emergency.
Chapter 10: Pivotal memories, and a challenge issued by roy and morton.
Chapter 11: Handicap battle and mike's request.
Chapter 12: Wholesome bond.
Chapter 13: Kamek's reveal and a wholesome encounter.
Chapter 14: Tutelage for max.
Chapter 15: Bizzare encounter.
Chapter 16: Strange memories and a agonizing temporary transformation.
Chapter 17: Bowser's reveal and max's bombshell.
Chapter 18: Updating mike on what's going on and a clever idea.
Chapter 19: Subtle guidance and the arrival of the magishadow.
Chapter 20: Unavoidable choice.
Chapter 21: Mike's reveal and larry's suspicion.
Chapter 22: Tense trip, max's prowess against the odds and marx's surprise.
Chapter 23: The return of fawful and a bloody sacrifice.
Chapter 24: Roy's rage max's acceptance and fawful's blunder.
Chapter 25: Brutal fury, a undeserving end and a strange name.
Chapter 26: The encounter within the darkness, the dollhouse and the barn.
Chapter 27: Seconds make a difference, and max's awakening.
Chapter 28: Max's surprise and reveal leading to kamek's realization.
Chapter 29: Rising emotions.
Chapter 30: Mike's grief and rylie's arrival.
Chapter 31: Uncanny likeness, roy's emotional turmoil and familiar eyes.
First a/n
Chapter 32: New feet to stand on.
Chapter 34: Touching reunion and a hilarious memory.
Chapter 35: Unexpected media, the offer, lemmy's idea and marx's gift.
Chapter 36: Strange but useful gift, unintended melancholy and max's grief.
Chapter 37: Uraveling the bandages and max's new shades.
Second a/n.
Chapter 38: Comforting support and marx's advice.
Chapter 39: Scattered puzzle pieces and the second visit.
Chapter 40: Candymaker's arrival and wrath, and the key to the first vision.
Chapter 41: First vision and larry's curiosity.
Chapter 42: Mad dash for home, and larry's helpless horror.
Chapter 43: Silent admiration.
Chapter 44: Recapping events, and important clues part one.
Chapter 45: Recapping events and important clues part two.
Third a/n.
Chapter 46: Heated conversation and future uncertainty.
Chapter 47: Unique revealations.
Chapter 48: Max's brief trip down memory lane and the intense encounter.
Chapter 49: Puzzling questions and a nightmare's beginning.
Chapter 50: Nightmare's mercilessness and a unexpected assist from the shadows.
Chapter 51: Prideful avoidance, and bowser's gift.
Chapter 52: The airship, mike's gift and a familiar face.
Chapter 53: Reporter's lucky day, the clown copters and marx's prediction.
Chapter 54: The view from the sky and jasper's recording for later.
Chapter 55: Bowser's airship and surprising information.
Chapter 56: Song of the past, and mike's challenge to max.
Chapter 57: Max vs mike, unexpected result and the ominous feeling.
Chapter 58: Bowser's castle and a ominously creepy encounter.
Chapter 59: A wholesome moment and the grand tour.
Chapter 60: Raw emotions, max's rememberance and ludwig's reveal.
Chapter 61: The burning question and the dread that knocks.
Chapter 62: The encounter and the dark power's wrath.
Chapter 63: Chilling words, thunderous vengeance and digging deeper.
Fourth a/n.
Chapter 64: Bombshells and revealtions. Part one.
Chapter 65: Bombshells and revelations. Part two.
Chapter 66: Kooky's letter, mike's heartache and max's wisdom.
Chapter 67: family ties and junior's turmoil.
Chapter 68: Tyson's theories and offer.
Chapter 69: A haunting feeling and the second vision inside the dollhouse.
Chapter 70: Kooky's surprise and rememberance of the past.
Chapter 71: Max's crazy ideas and bowser's offer to mike.
Chapter 72: Junior's frustration, ludwig's realization and a partial memory.
Chapter 73: Rite of passage, max's mask and unexpected visitors.
Chapter 74: New outfit, intense meeting, improvised name and a familiar smell.
Fifth a/n.
Chapter 75: candymaker's return and the whisper only they hear.
Chapter 76: Kylie's new assignment and helpless horror.
Chapter 77: Marx's warning, subject change and a unexpected reunion.
Chapter 78: Unforgtten memory, nate's secrets and max's first mission.
Chapter 79: Personal family matter.
Sixth a/n:
Chapter 80: Max's return, the burning scar and zöhm's words.
Chapter 81: Nate's letters and gifts and the starlight crystal's purpose.
Chapter 82: Mixed reactions and the box.
Chapter 83: The box's contents, kooky's history lessons and a week to prepare.
Chapter 84: Preparations and max's encounter leading to unexplained guilt.
Chapter 85: Conflicting emotions, mike and marx's worry and max's theory.
Chapter 86: The starlight saber's history and mike's silent theory.
Chapter 87: The saber's ignition and special training.
Chapter 88: The rematch and bowser's phone call.
Seventh a/n:
Chapter 89: Jasper's interview and the phone call with a familiar voice.
Chaper 90: Recap, aftermath and the same stare.
Chapter 91: Unspoken guidance and mike's phone call.
Chapter 92: Old yet familiar and max's unintentional hilarity.
Chapter 93: Ghostly encounter and the warning that sets off raw emotion.
Chapter 94: King boo's true form, max's raw emotional speech and admittance.
Chapter 95: Emotional reunion, a haunting revelation and a promise to keep.
Eighth a/n
Chapter 96: Shouting match and max's verbal admittance.
Chapter 97: Memory lane, the letter, emotional response and mike's explanation.
Chapter 98: A father's assurance and a familiar smell.
Chapter 99: Mike's realizations and bowser's speech before the encounter.
Chapter 100: Unexpected surprise, marx's return and zöhm's sudden appearance.
Chapter 101: Candymaker's departure, family bond and raw tension.
Ninth a/n
Chapter 102: Baron's thoughts, brotherly confrontation and nate's text.
Chapter 103: Max's change.
Chapter 104: A scarf's legend and arrival at the gate of the abyss.
Chapter 105: The eventual meeting and max's crazy entrance and unmasking.

Chapter 33: Unique discovery and a familiar number.

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-Narration-

"This has to because of the concealment spell, right?" Iggy blurts out to kamek, while max was about to figure out how to take his shell off until he heard iggy's comment.

"What the hell is a concealment spell?" Max asked, having never heard of such a spell, which made kamek facepalm with a groan. "Real smooth, Iggy..." Junior says with a growl. "While i wish to answer your question in full once you get home, i can at least give a short version. It has done something to your body that is highly unique. While you are now a koopa, it would seems that your body is also human-like." Kamek explained. "Human-like?" Lemmy asked, tilting his head in confusion. "Well, that does explain why max looks so different." Morton says with a nod. "Yet it leaves a lot more questions..." Ludwig commented. "It also makes max look cool!" Larry quickly says with a chuckle, while morton chuckles.

-Ludwig pov-

I detest the fact that these secrets seem have unobtainable answers. It leaves me surprisingly intrigued with max and now with roy. Both are twins even though they are quite different, but their mother is the one that has secrets that are slowly coming to light. It would also mean that they have the same father...hm..I liked it better when i only had junior to deal with!

-Morton pov-

I have always looked up to roy for a long time. Now i find myself looking up to max too! I can only imagine what max is capable of now.

-Larry pov-

The fact that max looks the way he does now is just..amazing! All of the koopa kingdom will see max as the talk of the kingdom! I think the darklands will too once they see him.

-Max pov-

I have no idea what a 'concealment spell' is, nor do i know why everyone else knows about it, but if it's the cause of me feeling the worse pain i have ever felt, then i'm glad that i ain't no longer bound by it.

-Narration-

"Well? Are you gonna put your shirt on, or what?!" Junior asked impatiently. "Hold on! I'm trying to figure out how to take my.." Max began to say, before putting his hand on the outer part of his shell, and the moment he nudged it with a bit of a push, it slowly comes off and falls harmlessly on the hospital bed, but to everyone else, they don't see front part of his shell "..Off. Huh..." Max finished as everyone, even kamek, looked shocked. "Ok, this is weird..." larry says in surprise. "Where's the other part of his shell?!" Morton demanded. "Wow, just when we think we have seen it all..." Wendy mutters. "Oh my, this is unlike anything i have ever seen...if max had a full shell, then him putting on a shirt while he's bandaged up would have been difficult since he's got no idea how we put clothes on." Kamek says as he looks at max's back, seeing that it's not showing any signs of any kind of abnormally aside from the obvious. "Tell me. Do you feel uncomfortable in any way?" Kamek asks max.

-Max pov-

I was half expecting to feel uncomfortable, but...that wasn't the case at all. "No. I just feel half naked." I answer, leaving everyone shocked while put on my shirt, and put my shell back on, which didn't make my new shirt feel uncomfortably tight in the slightest. "Right, this is both amazing and weird..." Ludwig remarks. "Now i wonder what's under those bandages..." Morton says. "Same here!" Says iggy in agreement.

-Ludwig pov-

This is not normal...max is unlike any koopa i have ever met. Then again, that spell max was under clearly caused this uniqueness to bestowed upon max...i would much rather hear the long version from kamek.

-Roy pov-

What the hell man...if he was any other guy, i'd have a field day with him! Then again, i probably still can. Heh..i can only imagine what i can pull. And yet...i can't get over the fact the me and max have the same mom. That..that's gonna take me awhile to accept.

-Lemmy pov-

I never knew that max could look so unique! Shouldn't that be a good thing..?

-Junior pov-

Even dad needs his shell on! But max? He could walk around without it on, and it doesn't bother him! This is kinda like some kind of super hero shit, which i uh..watch on tv sometimes, except none of us are heroes!

-Wendy pov-

I can hardly bring myself to say anything....max is just...amazing. Oh, my friends need to see him, and there's no telling what the rest of the kingdom is gonna think! Re-hee-hee-hee, it'll be like, so amusing to see the looks on everyone else's faces!

-Narration-

"Well, i'm ready to go. Ain't y'all?" Max asked  while looking down at everyone. "YES! Finally..." Junior yells out as max grunts a bit. "At least this soreness won't be forever..." max mutters as everyone starts walking out with max looking at the door number for a moment.

-Max pov-

"237...where have i seen that number before?" I wondered to myself. The floor felt cold to my my feet, which i expected as much. I will definitely need to get used to this though, because wearing shoes won't be much of an issue for me now, unless it's on occasion, or if i wanna get some custom made shoes. As for that number...why does it feel like the number 237 has some sort of important meaning? Is it perhaps, a lucky number? "Max! You coming?" I heard larry say which knocked me out of my thought process."Yeah, i'm coming!" I say to him and slowly walk out into the hallway.

-Narration-

Unbeknownst to everyone there, marx is watching the entire thing from afar, and is happy to see that max is walking out, but noticed that max is bandaged up. "My, he certainly got banged up by fawful. I am just glad that he's alive." Marx says to himself. "And now? The real fun can begin, and ancient history will reveal to max about the other guy and this..xac and cheese guy. You know what? I'm just gonna call him bob." Marx mutters to himself. He is more curious about how max will react to his gift that he gave him, and had a feeling that his reaction will be for shits and giggles.

Meanwhile, max walked slowly with the koopalings and junior while anyone who saw max, looked at him in awe. "That's max? I thought he was a human..." He heard someone say. "Wow. He's tall, and looks like roy...for some reason." He heard another say, which he was hardly expecting to hear. He just wondered how mike would react to seeing him, not knowing that not only has mike seen what he looked like, but rylie was also waiting to see him who now had no idea what max looked like now.

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