KUCH TO HAI TERE MERE DARMIAN...

By Ssdevan

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This story is based on balveer returns .I am not satisfied by story and characters .So I am writing on my own... More

character sketch
proclaim
A MYSTERIOUS DREAM
DEBANYA MEET
A DILEMMA
A PUNISMENT
A New start
A NEW PAYING GUEST
A FAN GIRL
AN ACCIDENT
The Truth
THE BALVEER
A SUSPENSE
THE SUSPENSE PART 2
TIMNASA ESCAPE
A HIJACK
VIVAN'S PLAN
A KIDNAPPING
MYSTERY MAN ENTRY
MISSION BEGAN
A RIDDLE
DEV IN ANANYA'S COLLEGE
A DANGER AND A DOUBT
24 HOURs
KARMA RETURNS
EK INTEZAR
A BELIEVE AND A BETRAYAL
one step ahead
ANANYA'S TRUTH
A TRAP
Ek Jhalak
A Firing
DARD
KAAL KILVISH
ATTACKS
THE TIMNASA
Ananya and Shaurya Meet
Nursing DABBU
ANANYA'S CONFUSION
A DREAM
A PUNISHMENT
EK KHULASA
REASON
Ananya's past part 1
A PROMISE
KARELA
DEV'S LIFE IN DANGER
An unknown letter
RESTLESS VIVAN
LORI
STONE STATUES
Dabbu and vivan
SOLVED BUT UNSOLVED
Balveer v/s nakabposh
A NEW ENTRY
Kaal veer
BALVEER RETURNS
Ananya and nakabposh last meet.
A new conspiracy
Dev's jealousy
Baal Pari and Ananya
A Surprise
Dev and Ananya day out
Ananya is in Danger
A New Enemy
Water Problem 1
Vivan Identity Revealed
Water Problem 2
Reunion
INTERCHANGED
Dance party 1
Dance party 2
Dance party 3
MILSA'S CONFESSION
SAWAL
Confusion
Jhalak 2.O
DATE
A wish
Angry Ananya๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ 
Voting
Dev's past part 1
Baal veer's past 1
Covers๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™
Attack on Pari lok
Timnasa and Balveer Fight
UNCONSCIOUS DEV
Kaal Sastra
Veer Diwas
THREE MAGICAL WORDS
DREAM GIRL
Realisation
Its Birthday
Birthday Party
Someone's Arrival
Shaurya
MAR JAU YA JI LU JARA
And Its not over yet
ITS BACK

Dabbu is balveer

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By Ssdevan

Dev is watching Ananya who is pacing left and right as it's time of Karuna's arrival but vivan is still not here.

Ananya"ye vivi abhi tak kyu nhi aya?

" vivan kaha se nhi aya ananya?"asked Karuna who just return.Dev and Ananya looked at each other nervously.

Ananya"wo.. aunty..wo washroom washroom se nhi aya

Karuma"ha to isme itna pareshan hone wali kaun si baat hai"

Dev"wo nasta thanda ho raha hai na"

Ananya"ha"

Karuna"koi baat nhi mai fresh ho kar aati hu to garam kar dungi"

Karuna come after sometime and went toward Vivan's room but is stopped by Dev and Ananya.

Ananya"aap vivan ke kamre me nhi jaa sakti"

Karuna"kyu?"

Dev-"wo kamre me nhi hai"

Ananya"wo change kar raha hai"

Both speak at same time

Dev"wo change kar raha tha per abhi kamre me nhi hai.

"Kaun kamre me nhi hai patner"asked Vivan coming from room

Karuna"ye to room me hi tha"
Ananya"vivi jaldi chalo nasta thanda ho raha hai"

Before Karuna can ask any thing else Ananya drag vivan toward dining table leaving Karuna astonished.

In vivan's room

Vivan"aap thik ho na bhaiya"

Dev"ha vivan mai bilkul thik hu.wo kal saurya jee ne jo lep diya sare jakhm bhar gaye.

Vivan"kal saurya aye the?"

Ananya" ha vivan.(looking at Dev)aye the na dabbu se milne.usse ointment dene"

Dev"per vivan tumne mujhe bataya kyu nhi ki saurya sher hai.tumhe pata hai unhe dekh kar meri kya halat ho gayi thi..."

Ananya(sarcastically)"ha dar se kaap rahe the"
Dev noticed her tone and way she is looking him but ignores it

Dev"ha vivan tumhe to pata hi hai mai rat se bhi dar jata hu to wo to lion hai"

Ananya(in mind)"kitne drame karoge dabbu
Flashback starts

After dinner Dev slept peacefully.Making sure that he is sleeping Ananya starts searching his house and got a pic of Dev with fairies .she remembers Karuna told her that Dev lives in BN with his sisters.

Ananya(in shock)"iska matlab dabbu BALVEER hai"
Ananya(in exictement)-"iska matlab dabbu BALVEER hai"

She starts jumping in excitement.Dabbu is balveer .Balveer!His first friend.she considers him as her friend from childhood.How happy she was when timnasa told her that she is going on mission to find balveer!She wished that she meet him as soon as she land in Mumbai and her wish comes true she meet him ,her dabbu,balveer.How stupid she is she is leaving with balveer under same roof but still she can't identify him.
She went near dabbu who is sleeping and sits on floor .She holds her hand .

Ananya-"thanks dabbu.Thank you for being my friend.jab mai tumse mili to mujhe aisa laga ki mai hamesha se balveer ke roop me ek aisa hi dost chahti thi jaise tum ho per mujhe kya pata tha ki tum hi balveer ho.Thank you DABBU.
She sleep while thinking about their nok jhok holding his hand.
Flashback end

Precap"A PUNISHMENT

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