KUCH TO HAI TERE MERE DARMIAN...

By Ssdevan

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This story is based on balveer returns .I am not satisfied by story and characters .So I am writing on my own... More

character sketch
proclaim
A MYSTERIOUS DREAM
DEBANYA MEET
A DILEMMA
A PUNISMENT
A New start
A NEW PAYING GUEST
A FAN GIRL
AN ACCIDENT
The Truth
THE BALVEER
A SUSPENSE
THE SUSPENSE PART 2
TIMNASA ESCAPE
A HIJACK
A KIDNAPPING
MYSTERY MAN ENTRY
MISSION BEGAN
A RIDDLE
DEV IN ANANYA'S COLLEGE
A DANGER AND A DOUBT
24 HOURs
KARMA RETURNS
EK INTEZAR
A BELIEVE AND A BETRAYAL
one step ahead
ANANYA'S TRUTH
A TRAP
Ek Jhalak
A Firing
DARD
KAAL KILVISH
ATTACKS
THE TIMNASA
Ananya and Shaurya Meet
Nursing DABBU
ANANYA'S CONFUSION
A DREAM
Dabbu is balveer
A PUNISHMENT
EK KHULASA
REASON
Ananya's past part 1
A PROMISE
KARELA
DEV'S LIFE IN DANGER
An unknown letter
RESTLESS VIVAN
LORI
STONE STATUES
Dabbu and vivan
SOLVED BUT UNSOLVED
Balveer v/s nakabposh
A NEW ENTRY
Kaal veer
BALVEER RETURNS
Ananya and nakabposh last meet.
A new conspiracy
Dev's jealousy
Baal Pari and Ananya
A Surprise
Dev and Ananya day out
Ananya is in Danger
A New Enemy
Water Problem 1
Vivan Identity Revealed
Water Problem 2
Reunion
INTERCHANGED
Dance party 1
Dance party 2
Dance party 3
MILSA'S CONFESSION
SAWAL
Confusion
Jhalak 2.O
DATE
A wish
Angry Ananya😠😠
Voting
Dev's past part 1
Baal veer's past 1
Covers😃😃🙏🙏
Attack on Pari lok
Timnasa and Balveer Fight
UNCONSCIOUS DEV
Kaal Sastra
Veer Diwas
THREE MAGICAL WORDS
DREAM GIRL
Realisation
Its Birthday
Birthday Party
Someone's Arrival
Shaurya
MAR JAU YA JI LU JARA
And Its not over yet
ITS BACK

VIVAN'S PLAN

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By Ssdevan

Kaal lok members came to know about missing trigger and as usual they doubt on  innocent Dev.

But before they can attack on Bharat nagar Vivan with fairies came there.

Vivan-"kya hua Timny aunty?kuch dund rahi hai kya?mai apki help kar du"saying this he saw trigger to Timnasa

Timnasa(smiling)-"kya baat hai vivan akele aye ho mujhe rokne?balveer kis bil me ja chupa hai?"

Vivan-"chuho se ladne ki liye lion nhi ata hai.Tumhare liye unka student hi kafi hai.

After a long fight .Timnasa took the trigger and start the bomb.

Timnasa-"apni dharti aur apne logo ko alvida keh do vivan.Ab ye bas kuch pal ke mehman hai.

Saying this timnasa left from there

Vivan( with smile)-" life me timmy aunty ki firki lene se jyada fun kisi chij me nhi.unhe kya pata ki jis trigger ke liye unhone ne itna fight kiya wo to keval real trigger ka  ek  duplicate copy hai

Pani pari-"aur ab hum saurya ka diya suraksha kavach yaha laga dete hai taki timnasa dubara ye chal na chal paye

IN KAAL LOK

Bhaymar-"ab tak to dharti ke nishani bhi nhi bachi hogi.
Timnasa look at earth with her power and get a big shock.
Kal pari-"ye kaise ho sakta hai?

Tauba tauba-" are kaise kya ho sakta hai ?pehle balveer humari yojnayo ko mitti me milata tha tab tak to thik tha .per ab vivan bhi bhayrani ko dhul chata kar gaya.

(Iske baad tauba tauba ka kya hua hoga ye likne ki jarurat hai kya?)

Timnasa-"ye keval  vivan ka kam hai ya phir isme balveer bhi samil hai?

Kalpari-" uski yadast sach me jali gayi hai Timnasa varna wo hume dekh kar sant nhi rehta.aur usne ek bar bhi apni shaktiyon ka prayog nhi kiya"

Bhaymar(laughed)-"iska matlab wo ab ek aam insan ban chuka hai."

Timnasa-"ab to ye pata lagana hi hoga ki sach kya hai?

In bharat nagar

Ananya is going to her college and she saw a rickshaw standing near BN gate
Ananya-"bhaiya,aap global college chaloge?
Dev-"bhaiya , global college ke pass chaloge?
Dev and Ananya asked at same time .
Ananya"o hello"
Dev-"hello"

"Kitne chipku ho tum.jaha jati hu waha chale ate ho .last birth me lizard the kya"

"Ye to mai tumhe bhi bol sakta hu "

"YOU".

"ME"

"Tum mera pichha karte hue mere  college tak aa rahe ho aur...

"Mai tumhara pichha nhi kar raha hu mujhe tumhari college ki pass wali office me ye lunch box dena hai"

"To kisi aur auto me jao kyunki isme mai ja rahi hu"

"Auto me do logo ke baithne ki jagah hoti hai"

"But mujhe tumhare sath  auto share nhi karna hai."

"To tum koi aur auto dundh lo"

"Isse pehle maine kaha tha chalne ko"

"Humne sath me kaha tha'

"Ok fine sath me kaha tha.per mujhe college jane ke liye late ho raha hai to mai issi auto me jaungi"saying this she sits inside the auto.

"Late apko 8 baje tak sone ki wajah se ho raha hai meri wajah se nhi.mai  iss auto se hi jaunga"Saying this he also sits inside the auto before Ananya can say anything .

"Tum dusri auto...." She can't complete her sentence as driver start the auto.Ananya looks at the back of Driver with worried filled eyes

"oh no!" She thinks looking at Dev." ye dabbu koi bat sunta kyu nhi hai? Ab mai kya karu?"

"Kya hua?" Said Dev noticing Ananya's pale face." chehra to aaise banaya hai jaise auro nhi tumhari property share kar li hai' He joked but she didn't answers him and look outside,her eyes set on passing scenery but her mind pondering over unknown misery.

A journey which already has started is not going to end soon.

So how was the chapter?

Do you like vivan's plan?

WHY ANANYA WAS WORRIED?

WHERE DOES THIS JOURNEY LEAD?
ok I gave you a hint-"it lead to someone entry

I know nuclear bomb plan is copied from show but this is a show based story and I want ananya in the missions of balveer so I write this.

I think that tracks in this show is very good but they didn't show it in right way.


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