KUCH TO HAI TERE MERE DARMIAN...

By Ssdevan

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This story is based on balveer returns .I am not satisfied by story and characters .So I am writing on my own... More

character sketch
proclaim
A MYSTERIOUS DREAM
DEBANYA MEET
A DILEMMA
A PUNISMENT
A New start
A NEW PAYING GUEST
A FAN GIRL
AN ACCIDENT
The Truth
THE BALVEER
A SUSPENSE
TIMNASA ESCAPE
A HIJACK
VIVAN'S PLAN
A KIDNAPPING
MYSTERY MAN ENTRY
MISSION BEGAN
A RIDDLE
DEV IN ANANYA'S COLLEGE
A DANGER AND A DOUBT
24 HOURs
KARMA RETURNS
EK INTEZAR
A BELIEVE AND A BETRAYAL
one step ahead
ANANYA'S TRUTH
A TRAP
Ek Jhalak
A Firing
DARD
KAAL KILVISH
ATTACKS
THE TIMNASA
Ananya and Shaurya Meet
Nursing DABBU
ANANYA'S CONFUSION
A DREAM
Dabbu is balveer
A PUNISHMENT
EK KHULASA
REASON
Ananya's past part 1
A PROMISE
KARELA
DEV'S LIFE IN DANGER
An unknown letter
RESTLESS VIVAN
LORI
STONE STATUES
Dabbu and vivan
SOLVED BUT UNSOLVED
Balveer v/s nakabposh
A NEW ENTRY
Kaal veer
BALVEER RETURNS
Ananya and nakabposh last meet.
A new conspiracy
Dev's jealousy
Baal Pari and Ananya
A Surprise
Dev and Ananya day out
Ananya is in Danger
A New Enemy
Water Problem 1
Vivan Identity Revealed
Water Problem 2
Reunion
INTERCHANGED
Dance party 1
Dance party 2
Dance party 3
MILSA'S CONFESSION
SAWAL
Confusion
Jhalak 2.O
DATE
A wish
Angry Ananya😠😠
Voting
Dev's past part 1
Baal veer's past 1
CoversπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ™πŸ™
Attack on Pari lok
Timnasa and Balveer Fight
UNCONSCIOUS DEV
Kaal Sastra
Veer Diwas
THREE MAGICAL WORDS
DREAM GIRL
Realisation
Its Birthday
Birthday Party
Someone's Arrival
Shaurya
MAR JAU YA JI LU JARA
And Its not over yet
ITS BACK

THE SUSPENSE PART 2

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By Ssdevan

While their  journey , Dev tried his best to stop Ananya but nothing worked and they reach their destination.

Dev(telepath)-"shaurya ,aap vivan se kahiye ki apko iss pate per timnasa ki urja ka abhas hua hai aur jald hi use yaha bhejiye.

"tum yahi ruko mai isse de kar ata hu/ati hu"both said at same time.

"Kyun mai kyun ruku? tum ruko"again both said at same time .

Ananya keep her hand on Dev's mouth .He stops abruptly feeling her velvety soft hand on his lips.

"'tum ye paper yaha tak  laye ho ab baki kam mai karungi." She speaks but he found it hard to process her words because his mind is captured by the strange fluttering feeling that he is feeling in his Stomach.

She remove her hand , leaving a tingling feeling  where her touch still lingers .

"nhi galti mujse hui hai to sudharunga mai hi" He said not allowing any fleeting thought to take place in his mind.

"Tum koi baat bina argue kiye nhi man sakte " She said .

Dev"Main argue ke bad bhi nhi manuga"

Ananya"Ek paper ko wapas karne ke liye itni jid kyu kar rahe h?"

Dev"Ye bat to mai tumse bhi puch sakta hu"

Ananya"Main andar ja rahi hu that's it .paper do mujhe. "

"Nhi andar to main hi jaunga"saying this Dev walk towards the door.

At same time inside the house

Kaal pari-"iska matlab Balveer ki yaadast sach me ja chuki hai.

Timnasa -"uss per yakin karna murkhta hai kaalpari aur timnasa murkh nhi hai.issliye hume jald se jald yaha se nikalna chahiye.waise bhi humara kam ho  chuka hai ....

Suddenly they heard a loud voice near their door

"Dabbuu"

Bhaymar watch from window and saw Balveer is standing near the door ,his one hand on the door knob

Outside the house

Dev is going to open the door suddenly Ananya shouted.

"Dabbuu"she came toward him .He immediately turns back alarmed from sudden screaming , ready to defend her from the unknown danger

"how dare you?tumne mujhe thori der pehle kya kaha tha?" She said striding towards him.

He looks herself puzzled not able to understand anything.

"Tumne mujhe Miss pune reject kehne ki himmat kaise ki ?" She speaks .

"what!!" He speaks not able to believe that she has screamed like that just for this.

"itni jaldi kyu puch rahi ho ANU.  2-3 saal baad puchti."Replied Dev sarcastically.

Ananya-"wo tab maine notice nhi kiya tha.per tumne mujhe pune reject kyu bulaya"

"pune walo ne reject kar diya to Miss pune reject he bulaunga na"said Dev with smile  and open the door.Behind him Ananya also enters in the house .There was no one inside.

Ananya-"lagta hai koi nhi hai.chalo chalte hai"

Dev-"are ruko to anu pehle dekh to lene do"

Dev was looking for Timnasa in the house and timnasa and her chamchas are hiding from him while Ananya is standing near door.  Her eyes fall on  Timnasa and her chamchas trying to escape from door.

Tauba Tauba(panicking)-"uss ladki ne hume dekh liya .
Hearing his sound,  Dev came there.

"pakad liya " Dev said and Timnasa face becomes pale

".mai aapko kab se dundh raha tha .apko ye paper wapas karne the." He said  "per Anu tumne inhe dekha to mujhe bataya kyu nhi" He added looking at Ananya.

"wo main tumhe batane hi wali thi per  usse pehle ye tingu bol pada"said Ananya signalling at Tauba-tauba

Timnasa(whisper)-"jab tak ye iss ladki se ulgha hai tum ye leker yaha se niklo bhaymar.

Timnasa give him a bag to Bhaymar .Bhaymar nodded, taking the bag and slipped away from sight of Dev. He tiptoed behind Dev's back .At the same time Dev's eyes fall on a man tied with rope and his mouth was stuffed with cloth. Dev takes two step back due to fear and collides with Bhaymar as a result the bag fall from his hand but before it can hit the ground Dev caught it.

"ye kaun hai ?aur apne inhe bandh kyu rakha hai?" He asked

Bhaymar-"wo bag mujhe wapas do.

"nhi pehle aap mujhe bataiye apne inhe kyu bandh rakha hai." He said putting the bag behind him." warna mai police ko bulaunga."

Timmasa-"bahut hua tumhara khel .ab iss khel ko khatam karna hi hoga"

Saying this she attack on Dev with her magic at the same time Dev bent down.

Dev-"o sorry wo mera shoe lace khul gaya tha.Aap kya keh rahi thi.aap koi game khel rahi hai?agar aisa hai to mai bhi khelunga aur jitunga bhi"(uff! Ye mashumiyat.)

Timnasa again attack on Balveer till then Vivan enters and stop Timnasa with his magic.

"vivan tum yaha.?" He said looking at him with shock but then his eyes travels towards his dress"aur tum fancy dress me ja rahe ho kya?

Vivan-"nhi bhaiya, mai yaha apko dundhe aya hu"
Flashback starts
Karuna told vivan about Dev and some time later saurya give Dev's message to vivan.
Flash back end.

"vivan tumhare hatho se to lazer nikalta hai.WOW!!" He said looking at him with fascination" per kaise?"He asked looking confused.

(kitna masum hai humara balveer)

"bhaiya ye lazer nhi hai magic hai." Vivan tries to explain

"magic!" Dev exclaimed loudly in surprise" tumhare pass magic hai vivan!!

"ha hai." Ananya speaks walking towards him" Balveer ki tarah vivan bhi superhero hai.

"matlab ye log bhi superhero hai!" Dev said looking at Timnasa.

(masumiyat overloaded)

Ananya-"superhero nhi supervillan hai aur superhero and supervillam ke fight me normal logo ko nhi ana chahiye ."
Saying this she hold his hand and drag him behind some boxes and signal him to sit .

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