KUCH TO HAI TERE MERE DARMIAN...

By Ssdevan

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This story is based on balveer returns .I am not satisfied by story and characters .So I am writing on my own... More

character sketch
proclaim
A MYSTERIOUS DREAM
DEBANYA MEET
A DILEMMA
A PUNISMENT
A New start
A NEW PAYING GUEST
A FAN GIRL
AN ACCIDENT
The Truth
THE BALVEER
THE SUSPENSE PART 2
TIMNASA ESCAPE
A HIJACK
VIVAN'S PLAN
A KIDNAPPING
MYSTERY MAN ENTRY
MISSION BEGAN
A RIDDLE
DEV IN ANANYA'S COLLEGE
A DANGER AND A DOUBT
24 HOURs
KARMA RETURNS
EK INTEZAR
A BELIEVE AND A BETRAYAL
one step ahead
ANANYA'S TRUTH
A TRAP
Ek Jhalak
A Firing
DARD
KAAL KILVISH
ATTACKS
THE TIMNASA
Ananya and Shaurya Meet
Nursing DABBU
ANANYA'S CONFUSION
A DREAM
Dabbu is balveer
A PUNISHMENT
EK KHULASA
REASON
Ananya's past part 1
A PROMISE
KARELA
DEV'S LIFE IN DANGER
An unknown letter
RESTLESS VIVAN
LORI
STONE STATUES
Dabbu and vivan
SOLVED BUT UNSOLVED
Balveer v/s nakabposh
A NEW ENTRY
Kaal veer
BALVEER RETURNS
Ananya and nakabposh last meet.
A new conspiracy
Dev's jealousy
Baal Pari and Ananya
A Surprise
Dev and Ananya day out
Ananya is in Danger
A New Enemy
Water Problem 1
Vivan Identity Revealed
Water Problem 2
Reunion
INTERCHANGED
Dance party 1
Dance party 2
Dance party 3
MILSA'S CONFESSION
SAWAL
Confusion
Jhalak 2.O
DATE
A wish
Angry Ananya😠😠
Voting
Dev's past part 1
Baal veer's past 1
CoversπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ™πŸ™
Attack on Pari lok
Timnasa and Balveer Fight
UNCONSCIOUS DEV
Kaal Sastra
Veer Diwas
THREE MAGICAL WORDS
DREAM GIRL
Realisation
Its Birthday
Birthday Party
Someone's Arrival
Shaurya
MAR JAU YA JI LU JARA
And Its not over yet
ITS BACK

A SUSPENSE

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By Ssdevan

Balveer saw Timnasa in market but much to his surprise she is looking like a normal woman of earth.

Dev-"Ananya mai waha se sabji le ker ata hu "

He turn around and fall on cart which start moving and collide with Timnasa due to which Timnasa's bag fall from her hand.

Dev-"sorry aunty wo main fisal gaya aur galti se...sorry..."

(Timnasa is like kato to khun nahi.)

Dev-"are apka to sara saman gir gaya mai madat karta hu"

Timnasa is standing like statue, petrified as Balveer bends down and picks up scattered paper from ground.

"ye lijiye "said Dev while forwading the bag toward her.Timnasa hurriedly take bags and left from there. Dev looks at her retreating figure with a slight smirk. He bends down a pick a paper which is stuck under a stone Or it is better to do that he has slided to Paper under the stone .

"ye tumhare hath me kya hai Dabbu? aur wo lady kaun thi?" Speaks Ananya who jas just come from behind.

Dev-"pata nhi .ye unke bag se gir gaya tha. ghar ka paper lagta hai isper address bhi hai.main isse wapas kar ke ata hum."

"Kyun?"She said instantly.Dev looked at her.

Ananya-"I mean ki tum isse wapas karne jaoge to main yaha akele kaise manage karungi"

Dev-"to tum mera wait karo.pass ka hi address hai mai ata hu"

Dev take his phone and call Karuna and told her everything.

Dev-"agar vivan aye to use bata dijiyega main apko wo adress send kar deta hu.

He said this two to three times.

"ye dabbu vivan ko batane per itna jor kyun de raha hai" Ananya thinks looking at him suspiciously.

Dev-"tum wait karo main aata hu"

Saying this he left .Ananya looks at her retreating figure .Her eyes is reflecting fear and helplessness.

Dev is walking on the road with the paper in his hand while his mind is pondering over the reason of Timnasa disguise ,when he sensed someone presence behind him .The road is sequester and area is not that  crowded much crowded . However he didn't turn back to look at the person, since Timnasa's spy develop doubt on him if he behaves like a alert man. He keep walking for a while deliberately diverting his path towards trees which are planted on both side of trees. He heard the crackling sound of dried leaves and  turns back . Only to find Ananya few steps behind him.

Dev-"tum!tum mera pichha kyun kar rahi ho?

"tum balveer ho kya jo main tumhara pichha karu?" She said walking towards him

"ha hu" thinks Dev rolling his eyes.

Ananya-"main tumhara pichha nhi kar rhi tum mere aage chal rahe ho.

Dev-"main tumhare aage chalun ya tum mere pichhe ek hi baat hai na MISS PUNE REJECT

Ananya-"nhi tum mere aage chal rahe ho matlab mujhe jaha jana tum bhi wahi jaa rahe ho per mujse aage"

Dev"Kaha jana hai tumhe?"

Ananya"Jaha tum ja rahe ho."

Dev"Tum market me rukne wali thi na"

Ananya"Per main waha ruk kar kya karti"

Dev-"shopping"

Ananya-"main akele kyu kam karu?"Aur tum yaha pedo ke pass kya kar rahe ho .Donkey ke saath Saath monkey bhi ho kya jo road ke jagah via tree prefer karte ho."

"Yaha per fal lage the to socha jate jate kha leta hu" Said Dev "Tum market me ruko na thore gole wole khao bekar me kyu itni dur chalogi.Waise hi lakdi jaisi ladki ho. Aaram se shopping karo  "

"Taki tum yaha  fruits kha ke time pass karo aur Sara kaam mai akele karu"  Said Ananya.

Dev-' Are per ..

Ananya-"per war nhi jaldi chalo .Ye papers de kar aate hai phir sabji lenge.Jo karenge saath me karenge"

Dev(in mind)-"Ananya ko apne sath le ja kar usse khatre me nhi dal sakta per usse ane se mana bhi nhi kar sakta .timnasa ke jasus ass pass hi honge. unhe sak ho jayega.kya kru?

"ab kya soch rahe ho chalo"Speaks Ananya and lead the way .Dev follow her reluctantly.

In a unknown house

Bhaymar ,kalpari,tauba tauba is waiting for timnasa.

Bhaymar-na jane timnasa ke dimag me kaun si yojna chal rahi hai ?hume yaha insano ki rup me iss ghar me rehno ko kaha hai aur apni shaktiyon ka bhi prayog karne se mana kiya hai

Kalpari-"hum yaha aise issliye reh rahi hai taki kisi ko hum per sak na ho aur veer lok wale humari shaktiyon ko mehsus(feel) kar sakte h aur hume abhi unse chup kar rehna hai?

Bhaymar-"per kyu?aur timnasa ne iss vaigyanik ko kyun agwa karwaya hai?"

"sabr rakho bhaymar tumhe jald hi pata chal jayega"said Timnasa who just entered.

Tauba tauba-"kya baat hai Bhayrani apka chehra dudh ki tarah safed kyu hai?"

Timnasa-"mujhe raste me wo balveer mila tha.Aur usne mujhe bilkul bhi nhi pehchana"

So how was the chapter?

And Ananya kyun worried thi?

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