You Stole My Heart: Louis Tom...

By lonelyheartluke

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Eleanor Calder. Harry Styles old family friend. What happens when she comes to stay over the summer, and Loui... More

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17- Part 1
Chapter 17-Part 2
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 29
Chapter 30
Chapter 31
Chapter 32
Chapter 33
Chapter 34
Chapter 35
Chapter 36
Chapter 37
Chapter 38
Chapter 39
Chapter 40
Chapter 41
Chapter 42
Chapter 43
Chapter 44
Chapter 45
Chapter 46
Chapter 47
Chapter 48
Chapter 49
Chapter 50
Chapter 51
Chapter 53
Chapter 54
Chapter 55
Chapter 56
Epilogue.
Final Authors Note! xx
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Chapter 52

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By lonelyheartluke

Louis and I are going out with the boys and girls today, bowling and laser skirmish. I had on my light wash skinny jeans, a pink jumper with the word Love going diagonal, navy blue pimosoles, a cream beanie with a pom pom and a grey snood. My hair was down and wavy and I had little make-up on. Alex was going to come but she said something had come up. I hadn't seen her in quite a while, must remember to catch up with her. We jumped into Louis's car and drove off. The boys have rehearsal tomorrow, so I will do something fun I hope. Probably catch up with the girls from Uni, term starts soon. Yeah I'll do that. "What are you thinking about El?" Louis asked me. "What I'm going to do tomorrow with you rehearsing" I said. "Oh yeah, rehearsal" he said. I laughed, Louis can be so forgetful sometimes. About half an hour later, we were still driving. "Louis, how far to go?" I asked. "We should be there soon, unless Harry gave us the wrong direction's". I groaned and no later than 10 minutes, Louis said "Ah this is the place". It looks empty? "Lou, are you sure this is the right place?" I asked. "Yes El, I'm sure" he said with a grin. We jumped out and he took my hand and we walked inside.  "ELEANOR DID YOU KNOW THEY HIRED THE PLACE OUT?" Morgan yelled. "NO I DIDN'T MORGAN!" I yelled back. I looked at Louis and he gave me that perfect smile at him, which nearly caused me to melt. We walked over to everyone and gave them hugs or what not and then Louis and I went over to get our shoes. We got started as soon as Louis and I walked back, the girls and I sharing a lane and the boys sharing a lane. My ball colour was dark blue. Kelsey went first, then Morgan, Perrie, Lauren and then me. When it was my turn, I got a gutter ball. "This game is rigged" I said. "Oh El, it's ok Harry got a gutter ball too" Lauren said. I laughed and went back and sat in my seat waiting for my turn again. When we had finished, in our lane Kelsey won and I got two strikes and over in the boy's lane, Niall won. "Let's eat, I'm hungry" Niall said. I saw Morgan roll her eyes and she said "Niall, your always hungry". "I know but I'm really hungry now". I laughed and we went over to the small café and I got a salad roll and a coke. We sat around talking and eating, until we had finished and it was time for laser skirmish. The teams were,  Louis, Niall, Morgan, Harry and I and then the other team was Zayn, Liam, Kelsey, Perrie and Lauren. We were the red team and they were the green team. "Let's call ourselves, team teletubbies" Louis said. We all burst out laughing and agreed with him. ''WE ARE TEAM TELETUBBIES!" Harry yelled. ''WELL WE ARE TEAM BETTER THEN YOU!" Perrie yelled back. We laughed and then went inside the laser skirmish arena thing. "You are starting in 10 seconds" the overhead voice said. We all ran off in opposite direction's, I went to go and find our base. The arena was pretty cool, with fluoro paint splats all over the wall and walls everywhere. I found our base and saw that Harry was there too.  "Shh, I can hear voices coming" he said. We knelt down in the corner and heard the sounds of peoples feet running. Then suddenly we heard kissing noises and I looked in horror at Harry. I peeked over the base wall and saw Kelsey and Liam in a full on make-out session. "It's Kelsey and Liam" I whispered. "Let's get them" Harry said. I nodded and we crept down off our base and the around the corner to shoot them.  We shot them multiple times before they ran away. 'THAT'S WHAT YOU GET FOR KISSING NEAR OUR BASE!" Harry said high fiving me. I laughed and ran off to shot some more people. I got Zayn a lot, since he was very clueless about this game and Lauren quite a lot too. At the end the score was, 400 to 100. "So who is better now?" I asked them. "This game is rigged, rigged I tell you!" Kelsey said. "Oh come on, you guys didn't even play that much, you were too busy kissing" I said. Kelsey and Liam went bright red and everyone else laughed. "It's not funny!" Kelsey said. She buried her face into Liam's shoulder and I said "Aw I'm sorry Kelsey". She looked up with an evil grin on her face. "Now who's the mean one!" I said. She laughed and I noticed the Louis wasn't talking or laughing or doing anything. "What's wrong Louis?" I asked. "Alex, she is in hospital with cancer according to George who just texted me, she has had it for 6 months and choose not to have treatment".  Louis's blue eyes were filled with tears and I said "Come on Lou, let's go there now". He nodded and I told everyone that we would be back later.

Louis's POV =)

Why didn't she tell us about this? We could've helped her get through it and she just chose to act like nothing was wrong. I was crying by now, she is my best friend she can't just die.  Eleanor drove us to the hospital in silence, tears were filling her eyes as well. Eleanor and Alex grew really close and I knew that the talked on the phone a lot. We got to the hospital and ran in. '' We are here to see Alexandra Lerman" I said.  The lady looked up and gave us a sad smile and said "She is in room 19 loves". We walked down the corridor, I was clutching Eleanor's hand. I saw George, Alex's parents and brother, the rest of Union J and Stan in the room. Alex's green eyes barley open and she had a machine to keep her breathing. They let us in and we sat down, I was next to Stan and Alex was next to JJ from Union J. "Hey guys" Alex said with a small smile. "Hey Alex "Eleanor said. I gave her a small wave and she gave me a smile. "I'm sorry I didn't tell any of you". "Why though, we could've helped" her brother Lachlan said. "Because, it was too bad to fix anyway I didn't want to spend the rest of my life in and out of hospital trying to get better". George was holding her hand, looking at her like he didn't want anything in the world but her. "How long have you had it?" her dad Chris asked. "Since July last year" she said. Her mum was crying softly, holding her husband's hand and Lachlan was looking down into his lap. "I need to give you this" she said. She grabbed a piece of paper that was on the bedside table and she said "Don't read it until I'm dead". "Don't say that Alex" Jaymi said. Alex rolled her eyes and the shut them. She stopped talking for a while and said "You mother fucker's better give me the best funeral ever". We all laughed, even her parents. That's the Alex we know and love. "And Louis, if you don't get married to Eleanor I will kill you from the grave and Jaymi, if you don't get married to Olly, I will kill you from the grave too". We laughed again and Eleanor squeezed my hand. Soon Alex, shut her eyes and then said "I love you all so so much, and George you are the best thing that has ever happened to me, Louis and Stan thank you for being my best friends, Mummy, Daddy and Lachlan, I love you and thank you for being there for me, Eleanor you are an amazing girl and you are so beautiful, Jaymi, Josh and JJ you guys are amazing and I love you, forever". Then the breathing monitor went dead and a beautiful young girl, was gone. We cried for a while, then Stan said "Um can I read the letter?". We nodded and we started to read.

Dear everyone,

I assume if you are reading this you have found it and I have passed away. In that case, I'm very sorry for not telling you. It was better off that you guys didn't know, it would just cause you pain and stress. First off, you better give me the best funeral ever. If you don't, I will come back as a ghost like in Harry Potter and live with you and scare the shit out of you. Mum, Dad and Lachlan, I leave you everything, lol jokes only my money. My room is not to be touched or cleaned, wait no do that it might get spiders in it. Thank you for being the best family any one could ever ask for, I love you so so much. Stan and Louis, thank you for being my best friends for however many bloody years, my partners in crime, remember that time we put the spider in Elise Direcksons desk and we got suspended, that was the best. Louis, you better marry Eleanor or I will kill you. I love you guys heaps and yeah, just thank you for being there for me. Eleanor, I know we didn't know itch other long but you are amazing and Louis loves you heaps. JJ, Jaymi and Josh, you guys are the best and so talented, Union J is going to be huge, I just know because I'm side kick. And George, where do I start with you? Thank you for giving me some of the best months of my life, you are perfect and you have it all. I want you to find someone else, someone that can give you a family and that is healthy. Don't you dare say you can't do it, because any girl would be lucky to have you. I love you so much and by the way, I hid your phone. Sucks to be you, because I can't tell you where I put it. Haha I'm so mean and oh, find another stylist. But she can't be better than me, because then I will feel betrayed. That's all I really have to say and oh, someone better name a kid after me. Because that's what happens and if you don't fuck you all. Ok whoops excuse the language kiddies, you have to read this at my funeral. Anyway, I love you all. SO so so so times 6737373 much.

Lots of love,

Alejeandro xxx

We were all crying now. The realization that Alex, was gone. It's not fair, she was supposed to live her life, marry George and become a fashion designer/stylist. I've never seen anyone cry as much as Lachlan, tears were streaming down his face. Lachlan and Alex were the closest brother and sister you could ever find. This isn't fair. Eleanor gripped my hand harder as we cried. George gave Alex a short kiss on her pale pink lips and brushed the blonde hair out of her face. They were an amazing couple. George lost his girlfriend, Eleanor, Stan and the boys from Union J lost their best friend, Lachlan lost a sister but the worst was that Chris and Marie lost their only daughter. Why do things like this have to happenen?

So, was that sad? I feel like a bad person for killing her. Like omg I cried writing the next chapter!

Anyway, the roles of Liam's, Zayn's and Harry's girlfriends in my new story go to....

Harry- @ eleanorbwilson

Zayn- @zaraiscrazy

Liam- @Degobah

Thanks for entering guys!

Oh my god, Kiss You comes out tomorrow! On my brother's birthday! The little one is turning 10!

http://www.polyvore.com/eleanors_outfit_in_chapter_52/set?id=67550456

Eleanor's outfit ^^ :)

Anyway, hope you liked this chapter, even though it was sad. I think.

Comment and vote <3

Lots of love,

~Alex xx

ZaraisCrazy 

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