Take Me Home - Wimpiekid
Reviewer - tisha650
Cover + Title + Blurb= 3/5
Grammar and Spelling= 10/10
Detail= 10/10
Plot= 9/10
Originality= 5/5 [normally husband's who are force to marriage someone are so depressive about it, but you didn't take that one of idea]
Flow of the story= 4/5
Overall Enjoyment= 4/5
Total= 45/50
The book was incredible even though it's not complete I am still continuing to read it. I would suggest you to change the cover it's a bit too fake. We all know that people have different tastes, if some people won't like the characters on the book covers then they won't be attracted to it. The book cover plays an important role in a book.
I personally didn't like the visuals of the characters, like I told you earlier everyone has different tastes. Well... you can't change anything now because you already started the book. So next time maybe take my little advice.
Thanks
-Tisha