Anokhi dosti apni - Maddam Sir

By Bahaar2811

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it's a fan fiction story based on the TV show Maddam Sir. It focuses mainly on sweet and sour FRIENDSHIP of H... More

Introduction
I Care for u
Haan ho gayi ghalti
manaaun kaese!
note
Inne nakhre....!!
Maan bhi jaao..!!!
saath ye chhoote na...!
tu kho na jaaye..!!
note
Chanda...!
Mohabbatein!
O ri chiraiyya...!
kon mujhe yun pyar karega!
note
Suhaana din...!
Tu hi sukoon..!!
waqt-e-rukhsat..!!
note-sorry!
Kahaan ho tum..!!!
Tum ghana saaya!!
Kuchh to hai...!!!
Dastak?!!!
Milan ki raenaa..!!
Jhilmil...!
Dil khilona nahi..!
Dekho kabhi na aesa kehna!
Mohabbat, ek paheli..!
Note
Ghalat Fehmi...
Blaster Brothers!!!
Makaafaat-e-amal!
note-new story
Rooh bhi!!
Farz!!!
Khone ka hausla nahi!!
Zindagi..!
sorry-note
Wo Raat....!
Subh-e-umeed..!
Yaum-e-naveed!!
Note - Support
Anmol wafaayen!!
Thankyou 💖 - note
Note- Honestly...
Main teri behna..!!
Tu jo rootha...
Khafa Khafa...!
Aaj dosti kar lein..?!!
Roothe yaar ko manaana mushkil...!
Kyun itna hua hai tu khafa..!!
Mujhe tanha kar ke...!!
Tum bhi na...
Naayaab ho tum...!
New shot...
Jashn!!
Kab tak?!!
Kuchh log nibhaate hain aesa..!
Alvida...!
Apna ghar...
Anokhi Shart...!
Ms Malik ki Masti...!!
Teri raat ka fasaana..!!
Mamta!!
Nayi Khushi...!
Aamad-e-bahaar..!!
Note - Recreation
Phir khile phool naya...!
Writer here...
Motherhood...🥰
Surprise ya Shock..?!!
Chhoti si bhool...!
Khaas Uphaar!!
Knock knock..!!
Mohabbat rooth jaaye to...

Agla qadam...

1.3K 129 57
By Bahaar2811

( friends!
I m late again...🤦🤦
Without wasting your time in any bantering, here it is.)

      

     As was sitting on a chair in his room, immersed in his thoughts..
      Vijay  entered...

Vijay: aap ne bulaya , sir..

As: ji! Humein aap se ek zaroori baat karni h Vijay...!

Vijay: kahiye...?

As: ye Bs ka beta Veer, kaesa insaan h..?

Vijay (confused): ye aap kyun puchh rahe hain sir..?

  As narrated everything to him about their meeting with Veer, skipping the part of the story of his past about Jhilmil...

Vijay: Ohh! I see..

   He thought for some time...

Vijay: sir!
    Hum close friends nahi hain, pr phir bhi main use achhe se jaanta hun...
    Itna zaroor keh sakta hun, k wo trustworthy h, us pr bharosa kiya ja sakta hai...
Or uske baap k naam se hat kr dekha jaaye, to wo 1 achha insaan h...

As: hmm...Hume prasannata hui h ye jaan kr... Humein aasha h k hum bht jaldi safal honge...
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    It was 3:00 AM at night.
Team MPT was present in the hall, watching the March past of HM, who was eagerly waiting for KS....!

     There was a knock on the backdoor, and it was opened in less than a second...!

      HM hugged KS overwhelmed..😍

HM: Finally aap aagayin ks! Hum kab se wait kr rahe the aap ka....

KS: hum bhi aane k liye bht excited the Ms!!

Veer: Maddams!
  Saari baatein darwaaze pr hi karni hain kya...
Andar to bulaaiyye..

HM: KS! Chaliye andar ..

    She dragged KS inside, n slammed the door naughtily😜, which could have hit Veer on his nose, if he wouldn't step back immediately...🤣🤣

   It took a moment for Veer to realise what had happened....
 

Veer: arrey... Maddam..! Maddam!
    Aesa kya qusoor ho gaya is bechaarey se jo aapne ise baahar chhod diya...😟😕

   He started banging the door...

  
HM opened the door...

HM ( pretending to be surprised): arey ks! Aap ne bataya nahi , aap inhe bhi saath laayi hain ....!!   
🤣🤣

Veer: Haww...!😮😮😮
Maddam!!!!!

Main... aap ki pyari best friend ko saath laaya hun...!
Jaan par khel kar....😒😒
Aap ko kya pata..., blanket k andar pillows ko aese set karna k koi soya hua dikhe..., Phir guards ko dodge de kr backdoor se nikalna kitna mushkil....
(He was cut in between)

KS:Amaa oo topaa...!
   Sara raasta to tumhara radio band nahi hua...
Ab thoda chup rahoge...???

Veer:😐😐😐Ok!
Ab main kuchh nahi bolunga..😒
Meri aawaaz sunne ko taras jaayenge sab....!

  HM n ks ignored his melodrama, rolling their eyes...

HM: KS! Sab se pehle khana kha lijiye...
Kheer bhi h.. aap ki favourite..!

Veer: Kheeerrr....!!!😍😍😍😋😋

HM n ks turned towards him crossing their arms....

  HM: koi ab kuchh nahi bolne wala tha...😏

KS: koi apni aawaaz sunne ko tarsaane wala tha...😏

Veer: aaa...kaun..?????????
Kisne kaha aesa...??🤔🤔

(He looked here n there)

Main ne to nhi suna...

Umm... Haseena Maddam!
Aap kheer ki baat kar rahi thein....😋😋

  He smirked...

KS: Tumhaare liye nahi h...
   Tumhaari jeb mein chewing gum h na...🤨
Usi se kaam chalaao ...

😜😜

HM: haa...😏
Wo kya kehte hain aap...??
'chewing gum is the love of my life...!!💓'

Veer: 😮😮😟 That's not fair...!!
😔😔
Ye annyaae h...

PJ: arey kya aap dono b... 🤦🤦
Kyu sata rahe hain bechaare bachhe ko ...

   Kitna pyara bachha h...!!

PJ was really admiring his jolly nature n Frank behaviour, free of any arrogance...!

Veer: Awwww..! Thankyou Pushpeee....

PJ: 😏😏 natkhat...!!

   She pulled his ears...

Veer: Aaaahh...! Chhod dijiye PJ....😩... Kaan ukhad jaayega...

    KS n HM were enjoying this bantering...

HM:
Chaliye ab khana kha lijiye ks..!
Saari aap ki favourite dishes banaayi hain hum ne....

KS:🤨🤨😏

HM: umm..mm..matlab.. pj ne..😌

KS: hmmm....
Qk aap ki or kitchen ki dosti k zabardast qisse to ammi humein pehle hi suna chuki hain...😂

HM: Ammi...or koi baat chhupa lein apni laadli se...🤦🤦

Prrr.... Hum ne bhi PJ ki help ki thi...🤟🤟 Puchh lijiye...

SS: haa Maddam!
Or isi chakkar mein haath bhi jala liya Ms ne....

    As usual SS spoke out innocently neglecting HM's pleading gestures...
😂😂

   She glared at santu sharply...

SS:. 😟 sorry Ms! Wo pet dukhta h na...

     HM sighed and prepared herself for a long lecture...!!  😂

   She raised her eyes...,
slowly n sheepishly.... ,
only to find KS staring at her sharply with anger n concern.
Her glare forced her to lower down her eyes again.....n bow down her head too..!!

KS: kahaan par jala h..?

HM: k...kuch nahi hua h ks!
Bas thoda sa...
Santu to aese hi...

KS (sternly):  dikhaaiyye...!!

   HM unwillingly forwarded her hand which had a large enough burn mark on the back of the palm...

KS: santu..! Inhone cream lagaayi thi...??

SS: haa Maddam! Main ne icepack b laga diya tha or cream bhi...

   KS just nodded with her face straightened strictly, avoiding eye contact with HM, which was making HM restless...!

    A layer of tears in her eyes was not hidden from HM...!

HM: KS!  Sorry. 😟

  KS stayed quiet, still holding HM's hand...

HM: KS! Plzz....!

KS: sir !
      Plan discuss karte hain..

HM: ks!!! Suniye na...!

    She held her chin, n turned her face towards herself, forcefully...

HM: Ks! Thodi der k liye to mile hain hum...
Aap saara waqt naaraazgi mein hi nikaal dengi..??

Plz maaf kar dijiye humein...!

     She said with a cute pout...

KS: sahi h... Aap manmaani kijiye..., or hum naaraaz bhi na hon... 🤨

HM:😔😔😔

KS: nahi matlab, jab nahi aata h cooking to kaahein kiya...

Hum nahi hain to bilkul hi careless ho gayi hain aap..😒

 
     HM was just smiling bowing her head down...

Ks: kitna bada ghaav(wound) h...

       Tears streamed down her face, feeling her Ms's pain...

HM:Ks! Plz roiyye to mat...plzzz...

    She wiped her tears...

HM: Veer! Aap inka mood theek kijiye, hum aate hain...

Veer: I I Maddam..!

   Veer saluted...😎😎

.

.

.

After some time, HM was feeding ks, as usually, with her hands...😘

    PJ: Veer beta! tum bhi khana kha lo...

   Veer: no thanks pushpee..!
I was just joking...
Mujhe bhook nahi h ...

Pj: achha kheer to lo na...
Chalo nakhre mat dikhao..

    She handed over the bowl to him, forcefully.., while he was staring at her...

   PJ: kya hua..? Aese kya dekh rahe ho..?

     He smiled n nodded in no...!
His eyes were wet...❤️

Veer: kuch nahi...! Bas, aesa laga k saalon baad maa nazar aa gayi...!❤️❤️

   PJ placed her hand on his head...

Pj: khush raho...!

Veer: Thankyou..!

  He smiled 😊....

Everyone was adoring them...

 
Veer: ok! Ab mudde par Aaein..
    kahiye sir main aap ko kya favour de sakta hun..?

KS: sir ! Girwi ki ladkiyon k saath jo exploitation, jo  zulm hota h, wo sab hum ne apne spy camera mein record kr liya h...

Pr jin ka qarz adaa nahi hota, wo ladkiyaan kahaan jaati hain, iske baare mein kuchh pata nahi chala...

Andar jaane ka humein chance hi nahi mila, or jab mila , to in mister se paala pad gaya...🙄🙄

As: hmm...
Veer! Kya aap is baare mein kuchh jaante hain ....

Veer: nahi sir!
Main ne khud kayi baar koshish ki, pr mujhe kuchh pata nahi chala...
Is baare mein meri maa bhi kuch nahi jaanti thi...
Or mere khayal se chhoti maa bhi nahi jaanti...

  Pr mujhe sure h k mera pita kisi na kisi illegal activity me zaroor involve h

HM: or koi information de sakte ho humein, jis se koi proof mile...

Veer: Maddam!
Mere pita ka 1 private sound proof room h...
Uska lock coded h, or code sirf unhi ko pata h..

Us room me wo aaj tak apne PA Patil sahab k alaawa kisi ko nahi le kr jaate...

   I m sure, k unke har crime me Patil Sahab ka bhi baraabar ka involvement h...

  
Ks: to phir, Humara agla qadam kya hoga sir ??

As: is kamre mein pravesh kijiye..

   Veer ! Aap us lock ka code pata kar sakte hain.?

Veer: I'll try my best, sir!

As: uttam!
To phir ks, aap Veer ki madad se us kamre tak pahonchiye, or dekhiye k kya milta h...

Ks n veer: ji sir!

That's it...
I know that today's part wasn't much thrilling, n a bit boring too...
Still, I hope you like it
Thankyou 😊

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