Tanhaiyan-shraman version

By priyadarshini_198_

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mohhabat nazdeekeon se nahin tanhaiyon se badhti hai Tanhaiyan-a great love story portrayed amazingly by bar... More

Character Description {EDITED}
MEET SHRAVAN AND SUMAN [Chapter-1] {EDITED}
More of shravan and suman [chapter 1 contd.] {EDITED}
shraman's affection towards each other [chapter 1 contd.] {EDITED}
terrace romance [Chapter -2] {EDITED}
hospital rush [chapter 2 contd.] {EDITED}
Flower of Love Blossoms [chapter 2 contd.] {EDITED}
what's hidden [Chapter-3] {EDITED}
The garden surprise [chapter 3 contd.]
sometimes its good to fight [chapter-4]
suman's past story [chapter 4 contd.]
Shravan to rescue [chapter 4 contd.]
namik's question
new cover!!!
Is that a new danger??[chapter 5]
Misha-happening [chapter 5 contd.]
misha's unveiled [chapter 5 contd.]
Together Forever?? [Chapter---6]
MIS-UNDERSTANDINGS!! [CHAPTER 6 Contd.]
BREAKING DOWN!! [CHAPTER-6 Contd.]
IS THIS IT??! [Chapter 6 contd.]
THE UNKNOWN THREE MONTHS [CHAPTER 7]
DEV BANERJEE?? [Chapter 7 contd.]
RECONCILING!!! [Chapter 7 contd.]
FACE TO FACE [Chapter 7 contd.]
TUG OF WAR!💢! OR LOVE?♥? [Chapter 8]
REAL IDENTITY??[CHAPTER 8 CONTD.]
ENGAGEMENT [Chapter 8 contd.]
ESCAPING UDAIPUR [Chapter 8 Contd.]
OFF TO MUMBAI👋🏼 [Chapter 9]
Sweet Late Night Talks [Chapter 9 Contd.]
Pieces of evidence?-1 [Chapter 9 Contd.]
Guess what!!!
dev in Mumbai? [Chapter 9 Contd.]
HELLO?! [Chapter 10]
Suman's wedding! [Chapter 10 contd.]
ARE WE BREAKING UP? [Chapter 10 contd.]
Giving up?! [chapter 10 contd.]
Re-kindling Relations [chapter 10 contd.]
Mehendi ceremony [Chapter 11]
Where's shanaya? [Chapter 11 contd.]
All well that ends well! [Chapter 11 contd.]
Happy Ending [Epilogue]

A Short Reunion [Chapter 9 Contd.]

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Recap- Pieces of evidence? -1

Shraman were at the restaurant waiting for the ordered breakfast.

Shravan-(placing the order)-thoda jaldi pack kar dijiye

Waiter-yes sir, aap kuch lenge coffee ya aur kuch

Shravan-haan ek cold coffee ma'am ke liye

Waiter-ok sir Abhi lata hun

Shravan-thanks

The waiter left with the order.

Suman-subah subah cold coffee kaun peeta hai bataoge?

Shravan-wahi jo apne boyfriend ke behen ko uski ex samjhe

Suman-baba ho gayi galti ab kya jaan loge meri?

Shravan-jo meri hai usko leke kya fayda? jo nahin hai woh chahiye

Suman-kya nahin hai? kya chahiye tumhe?

Shravan-mujhe jo chahiye woh mujhe jald mil jayega, tum apni coffee enjoy karo

Suman- achha dev ke case ka kya? kahan se shuru karna hai?

Shravan- Ghar Chalke baat karein, it's not preferable to discuss that here

The waiter comes with the order.

Suman-oh okay, chalein phir?

Shravan- yeah, tum chalo, main pay karke aya

Suman- I'm waiting

Shraman were in the parking lot walking towards their car when a car from behind came speeding towards Suman. Shravan saw this and pulled suman to the other side.

Shravan- (shouting at the car)-abey Saale dikhta nahin kya?

Suman- shravan, jane do... lagi tumhe kahin?

Shravan-(hitting suman lightly)- dumbo

Suman- ouch!! yeh, kis liye tha?

Shravan- mujhe puchna chahiye tha woh, lagi toh nahin kahin? hospital chalein?

Suman- no baba im okay, ghar chalein?

Shravan- phir bhi sumo doctor se...

Suman- tum aa rahe ho ya main jaun?

Shravan- aya

The doorbell rang and Rohan went to open the door.

Rohan- aap log ho!

suman-(limping)- kyun? kise expect kar raha tha? ouch!! Shravan aaram se

Shravan- aaram se? doctor tumhe khaa jata na agar check up ho jata toh?

Rohan- kuch hua kya? tu langdi bani kyun ghum rahi hai?

Suman- rohan tu kahan se aise bakwaas ideas lata hai?

Shravan- apni behen se! ab baitho yaha chup chap aur hilna mat, main ointment leke aaya

Shravan makes Suman sit on the sofa and runs inside to get the first aid box

Rohan- yeh shravan itna sada hua kyun hai? aur tujhe lagi kaise?

Suman- ek car wale ne almost mujhe hospitalized kar hi diya tha, usne bacha liya

Rohan- whaat? aur tu doctor ke paas nahin gayi? mujhe tere jaisi namuni kyun mili?

Suman- namuni konsa word hai? kuch bhi Matlab! and it was just an accident

Shravan-(coming in)- no it wasn't. woh clearly harm karne ke iraade se aya tha, aur yeh warning deke gaya

Suman- kya? Shravan over react mat Karo

Shravan- overreact? sumo woh car dev ke office ka hai, it's an official number plate.

Suman- then toh its obvious ki this was an accident. arey woh khudka nuksan karega kya? the official number plate must have been registered and can be found easily

Shravan- jo insaan 3 marital abuse cases ke baad clear image rakh sakta hai, do you even think he fears the police?

Rohan- he has a point sumo. dev koi aera gera insaan nahin hai. uski power ke saamne police kuch nahin kar sakti

Shanaya comes in with shivya.

Shanaya-(handing Shravan the ice pack)-until we have solid proof and witnesses including victims. moreover yeh case Malhotra's se related hai, the accused must not be free. he has to be punished

Shivya- woh toh hoga, but uss se pehle can we like eat something? I'm hungry

Shravan- bhukkad is back

Shivya- bhai...

Shravan- chill, baby ko effect Karega

Suman- uhh.... shivya im sorry subah ke liye

Shivya- arey no no it's alright. breakfast karein? uske baad case pe kaam bhi karna hai

Shravan- guys, I and shivya need to go to get some documents from the court. So Rohan and Shanu you guys go to gather as much info as you can

Suman- and me?

Shravan- I'll send you some numbers later. Stay here and try to get in touch with them. They're Dev's victims. And if possible, try to gather information on how everything started

Suman- fine

Shivya- suman make sure you record all the conversation, just in case they won't be able to make a statement in the court.

Shanaya- di you still have your skills! I was missing the great shivya Malhotra

Shravan- she still does okay, not as much as me

Shivya- hey bhagwan, yeh jalkookda mera hi bhai kyun bana?

Shravan- shivya Malhotra I am being civil given your condition

Shivya- yeah yeah, Mr. Jalkookde Bandar.

Shravan- shivya, I....

Shanaya (mimicking shravan)- bhai, chill baby ko effect karega

Shivya (high fiving)- exactly

Shravan- ganging up against me, huh? Okay. chal bandariya, i mean shivya

Shivya- I swear bhai I'll kill you 😑

Shravan- try your best 😜

After the breakfast,

Suman- no matter how I think of it, I feel like you guys are leaving me out

Rohan- finally, meri behen puri pagal ho gayi

Shravan- I can feel you, bro

Shanaya- shut up people. Bhabhi, we aren't leaving you out.

Suman- but still ill be all alone here

The doorbell rings. Shravan goes to open the door and comes back

Suman- Kaun tha?

Amol- hello bhabhi!

Shanaya- lo aa gaya aapka partner

Shravan- gappe ladane mat lagna, bohot kaam hai

Amol- shanu, usko bol de mujhe pata hai kya karna hai, gyaan dene ki zaroorat nahi

Shravan- toh usko bhi bol de ki sahi se kaam kare, humesha ki Tarah Adha adhura nahin

Shivya- kyun bechari ko pareshan kar rahe ho? Tum dono ka phir jhagda ho gaya?

Amol- shivya di? Aap kab aayi?

Shivya- subah. Tu bata kya hua? Naraz hai bhai se?

Shanaya- meri wajah se, di.

Shivya- ohh. (holding her stomach) ahh ouch...

Shravan- shivya, you okay?

Shivya- Shravan tum Amol ke saath chale jaoge? I don't think I can go with you today, bohot traveling ho Gaya

Amol- I'm not going with that guy

Shravan- I'm not interested too

Shanaya- guys, we need to get to work. Stop behaving like children. We are leaving, bhabhi and di please take care

Shivya- bye bye

Rohan and shanaya left.

Shanaya- di and her antics, god! Dekhna Shaam tak dono ko kaise di theek karti hai, she's the only one who can handle both of them at a time

Rohan- she holds huge power man!

Shanaya- oh yeah

Back in the house,

Shravan (side-eyeing Amol)- chalein?

Amol- I cant believe I'm agreeing to this

Shravan- feelings are mutual

Shivya(holding a bottle)- jaa rahe ho ya nahin tum dono?

Amol (surrendering)- going, going. Chill and take care

Shravan- sumo, iss bandariya ka Dhyan rakhna thoda, she's a handful

Suman- don't worry, now go

Both leave and suman comes back after locking the door

Shivya- finally, kuch toh sukoon milega

Suman- shivya, sorry once again, like mujhe sach mein idea nahin tha

Shivya- chill bhabhi, I don't mind. Like Shravan and mera bond bohot hi strong hai, and isiliye we have been through the same misunderstanding too many times in school too

Suman- school mein?

Shivya- shravan ne nahin bataya? We were super close in school, same academic year, same class. Shravan pehle se bohot popular tha, and I was a total nerd. I had no friends except him, so he pretended to be my boyfriend to chase the girls away

Suman- what?

Shivya- yeah, in fact, ek baar toh humare parents tak Khabar aa gayi, our parents were like what? You guys are cousins, you know that right?! Uske baad Shravan studies ke liye London and main US chali gayi, phir I got married and eventually, till here.

Suman- toh tumhari aur dev ki shaadi kaise? If you don't mind

Shivya- it's fine! Waise bhi woh dev kisike saath bhi serious nahin hota

Suman- phir yeh baby, i mean kab?

Shivya- This for me was our six-month anniversary memory whereas, for him, this was just the last night of our relationship.

Suman- sorry shivya, I shouldn't have...

Shivya- arey no it's fine. Btw, tum dono ke jhagde se thoda fayda mujhe hua ki Shravan ke ranting se mujhe negative thoughts nahin aate the

Suman- usne tumhe bataya tha yeh sab? I thought he isolated himself from everyone

Shivya- tum usey jitna strong samajhti ho na woh utna hai nahin, he's quite vulnerable. Dikhata nahin hai but still he cares way too much. And gets hurt quite soon. Jab tum dono ka jhagda hua the first thing he did was to contact me and just cry, I was like "isey hua kya hai? He wasn't the person to cry so much" phir puri baat pata chali. And it was obvious ki galti usiki thi but then usko samjhana bhi easy nahin hai. Moreover, maasi ke baad chacha, Chachi, Amol, and shanaya were the only people he used to listen to. But yeh baat who kisiko batana bhi nahin chahta tha

Suman- I didn't knew yeh sab bhi hua tha. I mean he never mentioned you

Shivya- he never does. Uske liye main uski pehli girlfriend hi hun. Pata hai bachpan mein he used to say to maasi ki hum shivya ko apne paas rakh lete hai. Pagal tha ladka. Mumma aur maasi itna haste the ispe pucho mat

Suman- I can sense his possessiveness over you and shanaya. Bohot pyaar karta hai tum dono se. I need to be careful of you guys

Shivya- don't worry, uske liye hum dono aur tum completely alag hai. And yeh jo amol aur uska jhagda dekh rahi ho na, dekhna sham tak kaise thik hote hai yeh log. Baatein bohot ho gayi, thoda kaam kar lein?

Suman- haan let's get started

Shivya and suman start contacting the numbers one by one

TO BE CONTINUED..........................................................................................................

Hey people!!!

I'm back here with a new chapter

so let's await the next chapter, which may come sooner than expected

till then

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I would appreciate some comments though💖

Love

Priya

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