fifty shades of minsung~

By mInMiNcutieguy

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Jisung is in his last year of college, looking for a job so that he can begin his life on the right track. He... More

intro
chapter one
chapter two
chapter three
chapter four
chapter five
chapter six
chapter seven
chapter nine
chapter ten
chapter eleven
chapter twelve
chapter thirteen
chapter four-teen
chapter fifteen
chapter six-teen
chapter seven-teen
chapter eight-teen
chapter nine-teen
chapter twenty
chapter twenty-one
chapter twenty-two
chapter twenty-three
chapter twenty-four
chapter twenty-five
chapter twenty-six
chapter twenty-seven
chapter twenty-eight
chapter twenty-nine
chapter thirty
hiii 😋
summary

chapter eight

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By mInMiNcutieguy

*i recommend playing this song at the smut scene.. it makes it cliche asf*

third person pov;

it was already the next day, and jisung was beyond nervous. he just casually went to work so he could get the day over with.

and surprisingly, the rest of the day went by a lot quicker than either of them thought. they basically just buried themselves in work till lunch, had their lunch together while talking casually, and then went back to being engulfed into their papers and documents.

it was now time to pack up. jisung quickly pulled out a mirror from his bag to check himself. he brushed his hair around to make it more presentable, and patted some grease off his face with a tissue. he fixed his glasses and applied a light pink tinted chapstick. he popped his lips to blend out the chapstick and put all his things away into his bag.

he walked out to find minho waiting for him on his phone. but the sound of the younger entering the room pulled him away from it, he gave a sweet smile, "ready?"

"as ever." jisung smiled back.

"great! let's get going then." minho walked with the younger to the door and held it for them to exit.

they were now sitting in minho's car, driving to who knows where.

"so where are you taking us?" jisung asked.

"you'll see." minho smiled before speeding up his car and going down the open roads toward the city boarder.

jisung watched as the city lights started to fade into forestry and wooden areas. watching how the setting sun made the woods dance it pretty shades of green and brown. he wasn't paying attention to where they were going till minho turned onto a dirty road, leading into the woods.

not gonna lie, jisung thought he was going to be murdered for a second, till he saw a huge house come into view. it was built with dark wood trim and black walls, there were windows that spread out across the second floor as walls for the rooms behind them. they were tinted so no one could look inside but you could see outside when inside.

"what is this place?" jisung asked.

"it's my house." minho said after parking his car and getting out to come open the door for jisung.

"whoa.. it's really nice.. heh." jisung nervously stepped out of the car after minho opened it for him.

"thank you." minho smiled and took jisungs hand, leading him inside.

they entered in threw the front door, and were greeted by three little cats rubbing against their legs.

minho bent down and picked up one that was grey, "this is dori." minho turned to show jisung the cat, "and those two are soonie and doongie." he pointed to the two cats that were circling between jisung and minho's legs.

"they're adorable." jisung smiled brightly at the cats, "can i pick one of them up? or will they bite me?"

minho laughed at jisungs worried tone, "don't worry, they don't bite."

"okay." jisung bent down and picked up soonie, who nuzzled his head into jisungs chest and purred at the warmth.

jisung giggled at the cat snuggling into him, they were already besties.

"do you wanna play with them as i make dinner?" minho asked as he set dori onto the ground.

"you're making dinner?" jisung asked sounding shocked.

"don't sound so surprised. don't think i can cook?" minho teased as he raised his eyebrows.

"no no, im not saying that.. i-i just was surprised, that's all." jisung shook his head and laughed nervously.

minho let out a laugh, "don't worry sung, i was just messing with you." minho tickled under the youngers chin along with soonies.

"wait! i wanna help you." jisung set the cat down and ran after minho to the kitchen.

"no no, i am making dinner for us. you can either play with the cats or sit and watch." minho pointed towards the cats and then to a chair by the counter.

jisung huffed out with a pout, "fine. i'll sit and supervise."

...

minho quickly finished making their food. (a/n; idk what food to put here so like use your imagination lol) he set their plates on the counter and handed jisung eating utensils. "enjoy."

jisung hummed and took a quick sniff of the food, taking in how good it smelled, "mm, it smells good! i bet it tastes just as good!" jisung giggled as he dug into the food. he chewed and moaned at the taste, "it's so good!" his words were muffled from his full mouth.

minho couldn't help but chuckled at the younger being so cute, "your cheeks are so cute." minho poked one of the full cheeks, "it makes you look like a chipmunk or a squirrel." (a/n; whats a minsung book without this line?)

jisung pouted and quickly swallowed his food, "shut up." he mumbled.

"excuse me?" minho said with a teasing tone. "did you just tell me to shut up?"

jisung gulped at how minho was now starting inch closer to him, "n-no.."

(a/n; idk how tf im supposed to transition into smut so go w it, okay? im still working on my transitions🥴)

minho raised an eyebrow and observed the youngers flustered state, "you sure about that? do i maybe have to punish you?" minho was fully leaned into jisung and his mouth was by the smaller ear.

jisung let out a small whine as he could feel minho graze his lips against jisungs ear.

"do you want me to punish you?" he asked into the boys ear as he placed his hand on jisungs upper inner thigh.

jisung shook his head and let it fall by minho's shoulder as he used the olders thighs to keep himself from falling, "wan' you to be gentle.. m' virgin..." he was barely able to mumble out, as he felt embarrassed in the situation he was in.

minho pulled away, he wasn't shocked or anything. it was obvious that jisung was a virgin. but it was just new for minho, he hadn't ever been with a virgin before. all he knew was he needed to be extra gentle and take their time.

"do you want this?" minho asked with genuine concern. he wanted to have this experience with jisung and give him the best first time ever, but he needed to make sure that's what jisung wanted.

jisung nodded his head and looked up with his innocent eyes, "i want it to be you.."

⚠️sw⚠️

minho didn't need anything more from the younger, and connected their lips into a passionate kiss. it was filled with lust and sincerity. jisung let his arms wander up to wrap around minho's neck and pulled him in to deepen the kiss. but when he pulled minho in, minho stood up and hooked his arms under jisungs legs, lifting him without disconnecting their lips.

he took him into one of the bedrooms in his house. it wasn't his bedroom but it was the closest room with a bed. and luckily, it was the bedroom he had everything he needed to make jisungs first time enjoyable.

he laid jisung onto the bed, and crawled on-top of him. minho was now hovering over the younger who looked up to him with sparkly eyes. minho caressed jisungs cheek and looked deep into his beautiful eyes, "you're so beautiful.."

this comment sent fireworks threw jisungs body. he wrapped his arms around minho's neck and pulled him back in, to kiss again.

this time, it was more hungry. minho was quick to slide his tongue into jisungs mouth and explore the wet structure, earning a moan from the youngers mouth. their teeth were clashing together as the kiss started to become more intense.

minho pulled away for only a second to remove his shirt, then dove back into jisungs lips.

minho wanted to test the waters and made a sudden movement with his hips, grinding his clothed member against jisungs. this caused the younger to release a breathy moan and buck his hips up to chase after the feeling.

it was a good enough reaction for minho to continue doing it at a slow pace. slowly rocking his hips back and forth against jisung. he also began to trail kisses down jisungs face to his jaw and then landed onto his neck. minho thought about marking him but they technically still weren't together and he doesn't want anyone finding out, not until he has jisungs permission to move further.

he ignored his desire to mark jisung and just continued to give his neck wet kisses as he grinned down on him.

"ah~ i-it feels like s-somethings about to c-come out.. ah~" jisung moaned out.

"let it out baby." minho groaned as he continued to grind.

jisung felt his back arch as something spilled out into his pants. he let out a high pitched moan that sent shivers down minho's spine.

minho pulled away and looked down to jisung who had half lidded eyes and red cheeks. his lips were parted as he let out heavy breaths and whimpers. minho's eyes traveled down to the boys lower area, seeing the wet stain threw his light blue jeans.

"may i?" minho looked up to jisung as he hooked his fingers onto the hem of jisungs jeans.

jisung only nodded his head in reply.

minho unbutton the youngers jeans and undid the zipper before slowly taking them off and throwing them to the ground. when he looked back to jisung, the younger was taking off his shirt, leaving him in only pale blue panties.

minho trailed his hands over the youngers lower stomach and then across the material of the wet panties. "you look so pretty in these.."

minho lowered his head in between the boys thighs and began to leave light kisses against the silky skin. also dragging his tongue along the panty line to tease jisung and make sure he would get hard again, which he did, quickly.

the panties were starting to feel uncomfortable, as jisung was hard again and felt even more sensitivity. "please~ take'm off.." jisung whined.

minho replied by hooking his fingers along the hem of the blue panties and pulled them down jisungs smooth legs. once they were off, minho started down at jisungs ankle, leaving wet kisses up his calves, knees, and thighs. stopping at the boys now exposed member. the older left a light kiss on the tip making jisung moan out softly.

minho looked up to the younger who only looked back with innocent eyes and heavy breaths. minho briefly got up from the bed to grab a bottle of lube and a condom.

minho stood at the end of the bed and set the things down besides them on the bed. he grabbed jisung by the thighs and swiftly, with little effort, pulled him to lay on the edge of the bed. minho took jisungs legs and guided them on either side of him.

jisung looked up to minho, he hadn't realized that minho was shirtless till now. the youngers eyes trailed down minho's body, taking in the broad chest that was accompanied by nicely carved abs on his torso. like hyunjin, he wasn't bulky, nor was he skinny. but he was closer to being bulky rather than skinny.

jisung watched as minho grabbed something from off the bed beside him. it was a clear bottle with a pink lid. "w-what's that?"

"it's lube.. it'll help make you feel good." minho smirked to the boy as he opened the bottle and squirted some of the liquid onto his fingers. "this might hurt. just tell me if you need me to stop, okay baby?"

jisung nodded and bit down on his lip as he saw minho lower his hand towards his entrance. him and minho held eye contact as he felt a finger slip in. "ah~" jisung let out a small moan from the new feeling. it didn't necessarily hurt, but it was uncomfortable.

minho watched the younger only squirm around but he didn't see any pain so he slid in his second finger, now making a bigger stretch. "ahh.. ngh~" jisung's back arched at the new stretch. it was only a little painful, but it felt really good.

the older didn't want to add another finger quite yet, so he continued to slowly thrust the two fingers in and out of the younger.

"are you okay?" he asked after a few minutes.

"mhm~ i wan' more.." jisung moaned out as his eyes were slightly closed.

minho added more lube and brought out his two fingers enough to slide in four fingers now. "this is going to hurt." minho warned with a soft voice and a concerned face.

"j-just do it.." jisung grabbed onto the bed, grabbing a fist of the bed sheets while his other hand was searching for something else.

minho noticed and hesitantly moved his hand to intertwine their fingers. this was all so new to him. what was this gentleness?

he brushed off the thoughts and focused back on slowly thrusting the four fingers into jisungs tight hole.

he continued to do this and watch how jisungs groaning turned into moans from pleasure, and his body was starting to relax. "does it feel good?"

"yes~ ah.. i want more.." jisung opened his eyes, and looked at minho with pleading eyes.

minho nodded and began to unbuckle his pants and threw them off along with his boxers. he grabbed the condom from the side of the bed and began to open it.

"w-wait!" jisung held his hand out, "c-can we do without?" he asked shyly.

minho looked at the boy with shock in his eyes. "are you sure? im clean if you do."

"y-yes.. i want to feel all of you~" jisung subconsciously started to spread his legs more, exposing his pink bottom area to minho. it was shiny from the left over lube from when minho fingered him.

this made minho loose his mind. the younger was so beautifully innocent, but could be so devilishly sexy. minho threw the forgotten condom onto the ground and grabbed the lube, applying more than needed to jisungs hole and his own dick.

minho lined himself up with the small pink hole, and looked up to jisung for permission. jisung only nodded for him to continue.

"it's going hurt at first but i promise it'll get better, okay?"

"o-okay.."

minho leaned down and began to leave gentle kisses on jisungs neck as he began to press in slowly. jisung let out a scream of pleasure and pain, feeling minho's big member slide into him.

"fuck." minho lowly groaned and grabbed onto the bed sheets where his hand had been resting, "your so fucking tight."

minho finally bottomed out, he pulled away to admire jisung for almost a few minutes. he looked fucked out already, and his face looked so angelic and gorgeous. minho pressed their lips together as he began to slowly roll his hips in and out of jisung, after jisung had told him to start moving.

jisung whined and moaned into the kiss, feeling pain and pleasure mixing together. but he sucked it up because his mama ain't raise no bitch.

he just decided to focus on how good minho tasted, and how nice it felt to kiss his soft lips. he could taste the faint flavor of minho's chapstick and he could smell the scent of minho's cologne. it was intoxicating and euphoric.

"g-go faster~" jisung moaned into minho's lips. he only felt pleasure now, and no sign of pain anywhere.

minho nodded and began to speed up his hips, thrusting into the younger faster and faster as jisungs moans only got louder.

"ah~ yes~ keep going like that.. ah~" jisung gripped down onto minho's shoulders, and dug his nails into the skin of minho's upper back.

minho felt like he must be going crazy. he had never been gentle with someone, he's never been with a virgin, he's never gone raw, and he for sure has NEVER let anyone touch him during. he's always hated being touched and never liked being gentle, but with jisung, it was different.

jisung deserved to have the best experiences in life, and for some reason or another, minho felt comfort from jisungs touch. it was so soft and calming.

"ah~ please, i want it harder~ ah!" jisung screamed out moan after moan, feeling as minho began to speed up even faster, pounding into jisung at an almost inhuman pace.

minho angled his hips upward on his next thrust, causing jisung to moan out loudly, "ah- yes yes~ right there!"

hah, found it.

minho continued thrusting into the exact same spot over and over again, making jisung release pornographic moans. he could see that jisungs dick was beginning to twitch as he was on the verge of cumming.

"ah~ it's coming out again.." jisung shut his eyes tightly and rutted into minho's hip movements.

minho grabbed onto the smallers cock and began to jack him off as he continued to thrust into him, "let it out baby.. i'm close too." minho groaned.

and without another word, jisungs back arched and he let out high pitched moans as he came onto his stomach.

the moans hit minho's ears like music. he sped up even faster, feeling himself about to cum. "im cumming too baby."

he gave a few more deep thrusts before shooting inside of jisung. he slowed down, riding out his high and made sure he got every squirt of cum inside of jisung.

he pulled out slowly and watched as the cum began to dribble out of jisungs fucked out hole.

"you did good baby, now let's get you cleaned up. okay?" minho leaned down and kissed the boys head and nose.

jisung felt like he couldn't talk and only nodded his head.

minho got up from the bed and walked into the bathroom connected to the bedroom and grabbed a wet towel. he cleaned himself off first in the bathroom before going out to jisung and cleaned him up as well. he then proceeded to pick up jisung bridal style and now take him to his room.

he set jisung down on the bed and carefully dressed him in boxers and a button up from his own closet.

jisung hummed in satisfaction, snuggling more into minho's shirt. it was big on his small frame and smelled exactly like minho.

minho quickly slid on some boxers, a black t-shirt and sweats before crawling into the bed with jisung.

he crawled up to jisung and hovered over him so their faces were close. "that was amazing baby." he said quietly and gave a sweet peck to jisungs lips.

"mhm.. i really enjoyed it." jisung smiled with sparkly eyes.

minho smiled back and continued to look into jisungs eyes. "jisung? i have a question.."

jisung hummed, "what is it?" he furrowed his eyebrows.



"will you be my submissive?"





a/n; ouuu look at this book moving along quickly. haha, yeah, it's just gonna move even faster from now on sooo... be prepared!!!

and ya'll omlll! im so excited, i got to choose my classes for next year and i got creative writing!! im so hypedd 😋

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