Chapter 2
John
"B-brother," I asked Collin, I was told he's my brother, "What's it like?" "What's what like?," he responds. "Being in a coma." I replied. "Imagine a Dream you don't remember," he says "You now how it's black?" "Yes" I reluctantly respond "Well," he goes on, "It's like that accept 5 years went by." That sounds horrible! I feel bad for brother. "I-I can't imagine that, thats horrible!' I say, concerned for my brother. "I know it seems scary, but-" collin trails off. "What's wrong?" I ask. "Nothing, it's just my head hurts and i can barely move my arm." Wait, didn't mother say that if i tell Collin, i wont be loved. What was it again? Oh yeah it's- it's oh no. I need to tell him, but I
don't want to be hated, I guess I'll keep my mouth shut.
"Mom" I say to my mother, "yes my dear?" She answers, continue "why. Wh-why can I t-tell brother what actually happened to him before he went into a coma?" I barely manage to say.
My mom looks startled and angry "WHY WOULD YOU ASK THAT DEAR?" She says in a strained voice, "because what happened was horrible" I answer honestly. "I guess you don't want to be loved then" mommy says
"Wh-what I-I still wa-want to be loved!" I manege to say in a scared shaking voice. This isn't right I need to do something but, I- I don't want to be hated.
At the moment as if someone flicked a switch, something happened.
It was getting hard to breath I felt week like I couldn't stand I started gasping for breath crying while doing so. What was this feeling? I hate this! I want it to stop! I asked while crying, "W-w-what's h-happening." My mom and a nurse comes to my aid. The nurse quickly responded, "It's ok dear you just overwhelmed." "You Have nothing to worry about, it's ok, your brother is going to be fine," she said calmly. Then I heard a voice. It sounded like... COLLIN?!
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When It All Went Wrong
Teen FictionAn original story about a teenage boy who got stuck in a coma.
