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Tomorrow :- Rules - 5/5 Reader's interaction - 4/5 Cover - 4/5 Description - 5/5 Title - 3.5/5 Social message - 5/5 Plot - 10/10 Grammar - 19.5/20 Plot twist - 9/10 Chr. Development - 9.5/10 Creativity/writing - 9.5/10 Opinion on book - 10/10

Total - 94/100

REVIEW:

I loved the book. Her writing style was good, not perfect but appreciably good. Her plot sounded a bit cliche but she did her task well with her thought process. It's a good book.. The only places where her marks went down were the cover, title etc. If she could work on cover more , that'd be good cuz the story was really good. :)

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🆆🅸🅽🅽🅴🆁: AT MY DOORSTEP BY Dxyx143

At My Doorstep: Reader interaction 5/5 Rules 5/5 Cover 5/5 Description 4/5 Title 5/5 Social msg 3/5 Plot 10/10 Grammar Vocabulary 19/20 Twist 10/10 Character development 10/10 Creativity way 10/10 My opinion 10/10

اوووه! هذه الصورة لا تتبع إرشادات المحتوى الخاصة بنا. لمتابعة النشر، يرجى إزالتها أو تحميل صورة أخرى.

At My Doorstep: Reader interaction 5/5 Rules 5/5 Cover 5/5 Description 4/5 Title 5/5 Social msg 3/5 Plot 10/10 Grammar Vocabulary 19/20 Twist 10/10 Character development 10/10 Creativity way 10/10 My opinion 10/10

Total 96/100+1 marks= 97/100

REVIEW:

Overall I really enjoyed this story. At my doorstep by Dxyx143. The storyline was amazing and even the way that author represented and described the characters and situation was good enough. Author has good creativity. The response of readers is positive and good. The words chosen were good but still Author needs to update their vocabulary a lil bit . Description was too short and it does not make me want to read more but the story is great. This story does not give any kind of strong social message but if we look at it, it tells us about love and how the life is being popular and etc. Story Plot was amazing . I love it❤❤❤❤❤ I will advise Author to keep an eye in how she writes the description. Description should neither be short Nor too long and Reviling.... In this story the case Is that the description is too short... To make the reader curious to read more about that book....... Overall it's a really great and amazing book....

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