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Name: Justly Freddy
Nicknames: Red, Sed
Fandom/Universes: Eye glitch (me and my sister's made up game)
Aww! Thats cute! At least you guys are doing something together.
Age: looks like 14 but actually 1000
Wow
Sex: Straight
Gender: Neutral
Species: Human (Former)
Glitch (Now)
Ethnicity: Usually white
Occupation:None
Family:Murphy(Little brother)Jimmy(Dead cousin) and 2 dead parents
Appreciates: Art, Food, Emo boy's/girl's
Personality:Emo, Lazy, Silly, Responsibble
Backstory: Has a family, but they divorced, Jimmy Died, Uncle and aunt murdered, Parents suicided
No offense I feel like you are making to much of a tragic backstory for your character. It doesn't have to be extraordinary but they don't have to be like everyone else's OC. Try not to make it super tragic but don't make they're backstory perfect. Unless its a horror story/ homemade creepypasta try not to make it to tragic.
Talent/Skills:Cook, Art, Animating.
That nice. But I feel like you should add more things other than just cooking, art, and animating. Like what do they do on they're spare time? That can't be all that they are good at.
Struggels:Own brother, Tsundere Brian, and other Stepbrothers and sisters.
Fears: None
Hates:Emotion, Bully's
Likes:Peace(Not the Peace eye glitch) , Own Bro
Fashion Style:Tomboy
Residence:Their home is under a volcano ._.
Thats a first! I'm impressed!
Love life: NOPE
I haven't seen to many OCs without a love interest. They either do or the creators haven't decided who to pair them with.
Other:Just don't annoy him kay
Fav food: Mac'n chesse, Tea
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I think that this OC is very interesting overall just a few more details could be added in. Other than that great job!
Also your mac'n cheese is at the top! Enjoy!
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