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Hello, Strange Place

Hello, Strange Place
by: primeeeeya

Description:

>A CIX inspired story<

How much does friendship cost?

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Past.
Present.
Future.

How connected can our lives be?

Paris Montereal found herself in a strange place when a mysterious diary and letters from the future came into her school desk... telling her to save a friend.

Doubts and uncertainty began to unfold when the things written became reality.

Will she change their future?

Feedbacks of the story:

poisonous_hearts:

Wala akong masabi grabe! Sa title mo, ayos lang. Nakakacurious siya tapos as in connected as story.

Prologue, is most likely an introduction, right?Yung sayo pagkabasa ko palang nacurious na ako. Wala akong masabing negative kasi puro positive. Maganda prologue mo kaabang-abang siya like as in makakahook ka talaga ng readers.

Punctuation marks and grammars, wala akong nakitang problema. Maayos lahat, maganda pa nga mga term na ginagamit mo.

Sobrang ganda! As in nacurious ako kada chapter like nasasabi ko na ano yung sunod na mangyayare, ganon.

Gusto ko din yung way mo ng pagsusulat, ang formal. Tas pag may pinapaikot ka maayos.

Keep it up girl! Ako na nagsasabi sayo may mararating ka. Magugulat nalang ako na sikat ka na. Maganda yung story mo, nakuha niya loob ko.

" The first draft is just you telling yourself the story. "