Along came A Rival!!!!

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A\N: before we get to the story I wanted to talk with you for a minute I noticed that not many people have read the the last chapter I changed the writing style for that chapter to test something out , there's so much I wanted to do with this story and I'm going to continue each storyline I have now as to this story it will be a blended chapter because i'm going to add extra stuff into this story like social media and other things involved I wanna make sure when your reading this you are fully taken by the story well enjoy ( trust me when I say things are about to go down)

have you ever wondered if you can just run at the speed of light and Change everything well I didn't until i became the flash and tried to save my mother and because of my actions i ruined the best thing to ever happen to me in Caitlin but now that i got a chance to fix it I'm going to take it and i wont let Thawne or anybody take that away from me.

Barry: NO STAY AWAY FROM HER!!!!

the sound of Barry screaming woke Caitlin out of her sleep she jumps at the site of his eyes turning red and his body starting to vibrate she try's to grab him but her hand goes right through him.

Barry: I WONT LET YOU HURT CAITLIN , I WILL KILL YOU BEFORE I LET YOU HURT CAITLIN

Caitlin: Barry wake up its ok

before she could try and comfort him again he grabs her and slams her into the wall Caitlin grunts in pain as her back hits the wall with extreme force

Caitlin: please Barry wake up please

its like the words Caitlin spoke resonated in his mind because he finally would snap out of it with a massive yell

Barry: Caitlin is that you ..what was going on........are you ok what happened?

a tear streamed down Barry's eyes at the horror that he seen

Barry: I'm so sorry Caitlin I don't know what happened I was so angry i thought thawne was gonna kill you i cant lose you to Cait

as a tear started to stream down Barry's face Caitlin Grabs Barry and pulled him into a hug squeezing him so he can feel her warmth

Caitlin: Barry don't worry about it you where having a nightmare i know you would never mean to physical hurt I'm starting to truly believe what you said was true that my life was altered because you changed the timeline and the pain I felt was not truly your fault I love you Barry Allen and I don't wanna lose you in this life or any life.

Without a second thought Caitlin pulls Barry in for a kiss when there lips touched Barry jumped in shock that she even kissed him again but kisses her back anyway as he puts his arms around her waist and holds her tight and explosion ensues that rattles building.

Barry: what was that ?

Caitlin: that was a explosion Barry you should probably go handle that

Barry: but but

Caitlin: no buts Barry I will be here when I get back

*Barry zooms off heading towards the explosion*

Caitlin's eyes start to turn snow white and her hands start to produce a cold smoke

Caitlin: *distorted voice*  There is something I need help with and I really don't know how to control this

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Joe: make sure the fire department has a opening to get thru no blockade

A gust of wind erupts as the flash appears

Joe: flash there's a couple inside you have to get to them

Flash: no problem

*speeds off into the fire*

Flash: if u can here me please scream so I can get to you

* A scream erupts as Barry runs towards it*

Once Barry gets there all he sees is a bulky black demon like person eating a lady

???: Hello flash your world will change I will kill you and eat your speed force to feed my appetite

Flash: what the fuck is that and is it eating someone

???: I am your worst nightmare I am the darkness that will keep you awake at night I am the rival you wish I didn't have Thawne isn't your only threat

Barry runs towards this evil being and punches him in the face but it doesn't faze him at all he just laughs as Barry backs up

???:  That doesn't faze me flash I am death itself your countdown to your death begins now

* This demonic individual stabs Barry in his chest with his hand then grab him by the neck and ran him through the city bashing his head they concrete and glass*

A dark gust of wind erupts in Caitlin's apartment

???: This is your hero your weak hero

Caitlin looks in horror as she sees the love of her life battered and bruised just about half dead

???: Build him up so I can kill him later I will make sure he suffers for all eternity

*drops Barry's lifeless body*

Caitlin:  Barry!!!!!!!!

She runs over to Barry with fear in her eyes as if the love of her died in front of her eyes

Barry: cait...I love you even if this is my last time being able to say it to you I love you you are my light.........
*Barry passes out*

Caitlin: no I can't lose you I can't lose somebody I love again not again

Caitlin's eyes turn snow white again and her hands grow cold and she placed her hands where the demonic figure impale Barry

*in Barry's head*   where am I ?

You shouldn't be here my son it's not your time.

Mom how, am I dead?

Your close to it but don't worry my son your strong your speed will save you but it will be up to you to get back to the strength you need to be in order to stop this new threat your up against.

How am I suppose to beat death itself ?

You can do so much more than you realize my son
*hugs him*
Trust me your the flash now do what you best at

RUN HARRY RUN!!!!!!

A\N: WELL THAT IS A ENDING WHAT DO YOU THINK WILL HAPPEN TO BARRY WHAT DO YOU THINK OF DEATH ITSELF GOING AFTER BARRY HOW WILL BARRY SURVIVE KNOWING SOMETHING THIS DANGEROUS IS AFTER HIM ALSO KILLER FROST IS COMING I WAS HESITANT TO BRINGING KILLER FROST INTO THE STORY BUT I FELT IT WOULD BE A GOOD IDEA FOR CAITLIN TO START GETTING HER POWERS SO GET ARC IN THE STORY CAN GROW AND GET TO THE PROPER CLIMAX I WANT IT TO GO DO YOU THINK SNOWBARRY WILL SURVIVE THIS CRAZINESS.



















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