REVIEW BY THE JUDGE:- The story itself is well written and interesting but the chapter titles and lengthiness of the blurb draw away from it. I’d recommend shortening the blurb and polishing the chapter titles a bit but the story is definitely an interesting one.
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REVIEW:-This story is clearly well-researched and handled with care. The prose is nice but the spacing of the paragraph spacing makes the story feel like it drags on. The story itself is great, the only thing in your way is formatting.
REVIEW:- This story was well done, but the blurb was too long and info dump-y which made it less appealing from jump. Once I got past the blurb, the story was well written and well-paced.
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AND THE WINNER OF THE SCIENCE/HISTORIC FICTION SECTION, THE FIRST-PLACE GOES TO....
REVIEW:-This story is very poignant for this time in history, which is why it scored so high. I found it to be touching, fascinating, and well-written. This story is going places and I strongly believe it deserves a lot more attention than it’s gotten!
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