The Little Girl

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It was a sunny day today. Everything was so green. I had decided to go outside to play on my tire

swing. I got on and swing back and forth then started slowly moving in circles. I leaned my head back

and looked at the sky. As I did so, I saw dark clouds rolling in at a fast pace. What seemed to be a

mater of seconds the sky was covered with the gloomy rain clouds. I stopped swinging and went to

stand up, when I came face to face with a smaller child then I. She had long black hair that went

down to the middle of her back. Her hair had been covering her face so her facial features were

unknown to me. She had a white nightgown that had dirt stains covering it so it seems not to be

white. It also had tears and rips all over. She was wet, like she had just ran through a rainstorm.

"Are you lost?" I ask, my voice laced with concern.

She raised her arm up to point at the forest behind my house. I tilt my head in confusion. She then

turn toward the trees and started to walk into the forest.

"Hey wait!" I shout chasing after her. I ran and ran till I had finally was cot up with her. "wholly crap

she's a fast walker" I thought. Out of breath a walk slowly behind. Breathing heavily I ask, "were are

we going?" She suddenly stops in the middle of an open field. A perfect circle was being made by the

trees around the field. The little girl stood right in the middle. As I stood there I started to feel

dreadful. I turn my head back to look at my house to see nothing but trees. I turn my head back

around and the green grass, starting from the middle, where she was standing, started dying. She

turns towards me and raises her hand towards me as a black hole slowly forms. "Come with me I don't

like being alone." I wanted to run but I couldn't I could fell my feet moving to her my mind hazy. I

reached my hand out to grab hers. the moment I touched her skin everything went black.

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I would really like some feed back on this to whom ever reads this. I notice it needs work but I'm not

sure where. Feel free to comment how ever you feel.

Thankyou For Reading!! I really appreciate it.