Gloss 'Word'-Your 'Drabble'

Results of Week-2

💜 All in her head by keywrites

Title 4
Cover 3
Blurb 10
Content 9
Narration 10
Grammar 7
Total 43/50

Review - The story is narrated well and I loved the concept. It is focussing on the social norms and ethics of leaving an ailing mother in an old-age home without deviating from the meaning of the word "hypochondriac".
Nice blurb and apt title but I felt the cover could have been made more attractive. The dialogues were written well right from the beginning but have got deviated at the end where I found quite a few typos and grammatical errors.

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💜 Beholden by spaciries

Title-(5/5)

The title Beholden, I found it unique. It is an attractive name, which made me want to scroll down and read it as soon as I can.

Cover-(3/5)

The cover was simple with a girl's pic and book name. The name of the book was clearly visible. It was a very simple cover yet attractive. Yet I believe it could be made a bit more creative, I personally love creative covers. But yes as it was going with them of your writing, that was writing about a girl, which I guessed first by the cover. One thing I would like to point out is you could have added writers name in the cover along with the title. I found that missing.

Blurb (10/10)

The blurb was very good, just couldn't find any faults. It was perfect, it described what I was to read in the drabble very well, had used simple and understandable language which anyone would easily get.

WORD-(9/10)

Here you have done a good job, you have used the word very well in your writing, it is used properly. A new beginning of a girl with her siblings.

Grammar-(9/10)

There were not many grammatical errors, it was perfect, but yes I would suggest that you can improve your vocabulary a bit, but on the good side, it was written in a simple and understandable way, so I won't go on that much. All over it was good.

Narration-(9/10)

The narration of the drabble was something I really liked a lot. The meaning of the word given was used perfectly, the narration was done in simple and understanding words yet was creative too which I liked a lot.

Total-45/50

💜 HAUSLA by GS_Stella

Title-(5/5)

The title HAUSLA- the whisper of courage, It is an attractive and meaningful name. If understood and thought deeply, it can say many things.

Cover-(5/5)

The cover was very creative with ever details in it. Name of the book, authors name, both was there. I got very attracted to it, couldn't wait to scroll down and read after seeing it.

Blurb (10/10)

The blurb was very good, just couldn't find any faults. It was perfect, it described what I was to read in the drabble very well, had used simple and understandable language with an amazing vocabulary.

WORD-(9/10)

Here you have done a good job, you have used the word very well in your writing, it is used properly. Also, I really liked how it was plotted according to the word.

Grammar-(9/10)

There were not many grammatical errors, it was perfect how it was, was able to understand everything too, and also vocabulary was nice.

Narration-(10/10)

The narration of the drabble was something I really liked a lot. The meaning of the word given was used perfectly, the narration was done perfectly and also it was nice reading it, loved to read it.

Total-48/50

And now, the Winner is GS_Stella

Congratulations to you, dear. 💜

And Participants, don't be disheartened, you will win for sure. Just try. You'd get enough support and motivation from us. All of you have done a great job with your Creativity. Hats off to all of you! 💜

Will meet at week-3.

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Dear Winner, please PM your word to me or the_gloss_club as it is a part of the Reward.