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Results of Week-2

Hi! Here's your Host(polymath_land) with this Week Results.

First of all, Pardon me for the late Results. I was stuck up with some personal issues.

And now, let us go to the Reviews of this week Participants.

Before that,

Respect our Judges and their views.

Review

💜 DAIRY MILK 💜

💜 Trepidation by RehanaSiraj

Title - 4/5
Cover - 4/5
Blurb - 9/10
Content with creativity relatable to the WORD- 8/10
Grammar - 6/10
Narration - 8/10
Total- 39/50

Review - The blurb is nicely written giving a sneak peek of the story. Khushi's fear is well described and as a reader, I could connect with her. The word given is also nicely used, though I feel, it could be extended more in Khushi's thoughts. Nevertheless, this is a nice try. But, there are many grammatical errors, which shouldn't occur as it disturbs the Reader while reading the story. It's okay, each one of us makes mistakes, but minor grammatical errors should be taken care of. I'll advise the writer to re-read your work before you post. That will help you to find mistakes yourself. Good job with the story, though. :) keep writing. Good luck.

💜 I'm proud of him - A sister's fight by NikkithaKJ

Title - 5/5
Cover - 4/5
Blurb - 9/10
Content with creativity relatable to the WORD- 10/10
Grammar - 8/10
Narration - 9/10
Total- 45/50

Review - An emotional tale of a brother and sister depicting their love. The blurb was simple yet it caught my attention. I loved the way Uttara answered the people who were bullying Sanskar. Uttara never left Sanskaar and was by his side, and that's the best part of the story. A few mistakes here and there, but the flow and emotion of the story, covered it all. Good attempt.

💜 5 STAR 💜

💜 Amelioration by ImaginaryPagal

Cover 3
Title 1
Blurb 9
Content 5
Grammar 5
Narration 6
Total - 29/50

Review - The meaning of the word "Amelioration" has been explained to some extent but then I felt the story was focussing more on the discussion between a mother and daughter about what society thinks of a single mother who is a divorcee rather than trying to make a change in their mindset.
The title must have been more creative and related to the story.
Have to work more on grammar, tense and dialogue construction.

💜 Let It Ring By WitchWithAQuill

Title 4
Cover 5
Content 8
Blurb 8
Narration 6
Grammar 7
Total - 38/50

Review - The meaning of the word is well maintained and I liked the change that Evan could get Chase to learn piano in spite of her weakness.
As the author chose to narrate the story in five parts I felt the flow missing as there was too much information to take in.
Dialogue construction needs to be better and engaging while the cover and title are really very good and apt for the story.