Gloss 'Word'-Your 'Drabble'

Results of Week-1

Must work more on grammar and punctuations as they could make and break sentences. I found few typos and wrong usage of was instead of were to say in simple terms.

The blurb, title and cover related to the story are missing.

💜 KIT-KAT💜

★ CHOCOLATE by WitchWithAQuill

Title- 4/5

Cover-4/5

Blurb-8/10

Content with Creativity related to the WORD - 9/10

Grammar-6/10

Narration -8/10

Total-30/50

Review- The title CHOCOLATE, I found it unique and something different. If I saw it first I would be like what is in the book and open it to read for sure. The second thing in your title you have mentioned both the characters of your book, so I already knew whom the book is about. I really like that idea. But yes on a second note if I see if, with the topic given, I think the name can be something related to that. But all over I really liked it it was good.

The cover was simple yet elegant. The name of the book was clearly visible along with writers name. It was a very simple cover yet attractive. Just can't find any fault with it. Loved it a lot.

The blurb was very attractive and the words used were also great. But here I think it could have been something also related to the word given to you. But yes the blurb matched the drabble you wrote and also the title.

Here he has done a good job, you have used the word very well in your written, it was used. Not at a single point, I felt that it's getting out of track.

Your vocabulary was very good, but yes the book had grammatical errors. You could have done better with it. Like this sentence "He was expecting have been treated like the prince he had been treated his whole life" it took me a while to get what it exactly meant that was he was expecting to be treated like the prince he had been treated like. So yes I really think grammar was a point where the drabble was backing off. You can improve a lot on it. But another side of your vocabulary is just amazing, I really liked the words you used.

The narration of the drabble was something I really liked a lot. It was kind of an on the debate going on. Two points at the same time. Also throughout, there was not a single place I got bored or but the narration was such amazing that it made me think why did the drabble end. And plus point that the word given to you was used fairly throughout the drabble.

💜 SNICKERS💜

★ RESILENCE by RehanaSiraj

Title- 2/5

Cover- 1/5

Blurb- 0/10

Contents- 6/10

Grammar- 8/10

Narration- 6/10

Total- 23/50

Review-

Title- The title did match a bit with the story but you could have made it better.

Cover- If you're writing a story on Arnav and Khushi then please use them in the cover too.

Blurb- There was no blurb to the story.

Contents- The plot that you took up was good but it needed emphasis.

Grammar- Grammar was good, you missed punctuations here and there but otherwise, it was okay.

Narration- Again, narration could have been much much better especially the mentioning of past instances would have made the story much more appealing.

★ ANTARDVAND by GS_Stella

Title- 5/5

Cover-5/5

Blurb-10/10

Contents-10/10

Grammar -9/10

Narration - 8/10

Total - 47/50

Review-

The title was completely apt for the story and made it beautiful. Amazing cover. It depicted the feelings or maybe the story amazingly. The tag line was the cherry on the take it blew me off and made me have more excited to read the story. No words but simply I am amazed it was wow!!!! I am speechless and the way you spun the story, it had exactly the right amount to thrill, spin and fun to it. I loved it!!! But, slight errors were there with punctuations. The narration was Amazing. The way you explained the feelings were of the father was simply great, but you could have mentioned past instances to make it more appealing.

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Time to know who are the Winners?

Well, as it is a Women's Day, our Participants showed us their talent with their beautiful passion for writing. We are very happy with the way everyone tried to decipher the word in a Creative way.

And at last, we've only one Winner.

But, Week-1 brought two Winners among the participants.

And those two are

1) GS_Stella

2) Shivani_SwaSan

It's a tie between you both. And I - your host decided to declare you both as Winners for Week-1.

Congratulations to both of you!💜

Rest of the participants, don't be sad. You are best at your work, at your passion to write something, to create something Creative. You have done the best. I just want to say, try and try until you get perfect. Perfection leads you to Success, I swear.

Meet you at the Week-2 Contest!

Winners, please PM me/the_gloss_club for Prizes.

Waiting for your WORD.

Your host,
polymath_land

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