My Review On Starkit's Prophecy

ALLIANCES

A/N: This is supposed to be a joke, and please, do not hate on this author

ok so like i said this iks my first story be nice plz (ok... sure)

btw its set afte rsunset so

ThunderClan

Leader: Firestar - ginger tom with a flame-colored pelt

Deputy: Brambleclaw - dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes

Medicine Cat: JayFeather-gray tom

Warriors:

Squirrelflight - dark ginger she-cat with green eyes

Apprentice, Foxpaw

Dustpelt - dark brown tabby tom

Sandstorm - pale ginger she-ca

Cloudtail - long-haired white tom

Apprentice DaisyPaw - cream long-furred cat from the horseplace (wait... Daisy is an apprentice?)

Brackenfur - golden brown tabby tom

Sorreltail - tortoiseshell-and-white she-cat with amber eyes

Thornclaw - golden brown tabby tom

Brightheart - white she-cat with ginger patches

Spiderleg - long-limbed black tom with brown underbelly and amber eyes

Whitewing - white she-cat with green eyes

Apprentice, Icepaw

Birchfall - light brown tabby tom

Graystripe - long-haired gray tom

Berrynose - cream-colored tom (how can 'Daisypaw' have kits when she is an apprentice?)

Hazeltail - small gray-and-white she-cat

Mousewhisker - gray-and-white tom

Cinderheart - gray tabby she-cat

Poppyfrost - tortoiseshell she-cat

Honeyfern- light brown tabby she-cat

Lionblaze - golden tabby tom

Hollyleaf - black she-cat

FoxHeart-reddish tabby tom (hmmm... weren't you an apprentice?)

IceFire-white she cat (wut...)

ToadRibbit-black—and-white tom (yeah, 'Toadribbit' is a 'very good' name)

RoseFlame-dark cream she cat (Rosepetal?)

BriarStorm-dark brown she cat (Briarlight?)

BumbleFlower-very pale gray tom with black stipes (Bumblestripe? And he totally has black 'stipes')

BlossomWind-pale brown she cat iwth a dark stripe along her spine (Blossomfall?)

Apprentices:

Fox DaisyPaw - cream long-furred cat from the horseplace (Fox... Daisypaw is totally a fox)

FlamePaw-firecolored she cat with one grnee eye one blue eye

LakePaw-bright blue (gonna stop right there) gray she cat with blue eyes

The last 2 r starKits siters (Sisters or babysitters?)

JazzPaw-red she cat with blue eyes and a black tail