new details about my story

details on my book

hi im keelyn but you may know me as kiki. I am the author of Celaena Sardothien. I have gotten an email about my work not sound like a book so I decided to delete it and make my book more interesting. this was onluy the first chapter and ive already messed up. if you enjoyed my chapter then thank you. but I need to fix the story but the characters will stay the same. I also have the second chapter started and my friend is helping me on the third chapter I hope u all have a good night 

work email: Keelynhand666