hey y'all

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So I'm working on a new book because I want to try writing something different

Please don't be mad at me, I'm not giving up on the other ones, I'm just stepping away from the love genre.

Here's a sneak peek at the first paragraph I wrote

"Adira Malou Bohr. Clever, right? It means, “Strong warrior.” My mother always had an affinity for names. My brother's name was Blair Huxley Bohr. His name meant something along the lines of “Plain or battlefield” and “from Hugh's meadow.” I don't really know what she was thinking there, but it doesn't really matter. I remember his name, his face, his last words, his killer. Their killer. I remember the man who left me to die, surrounded by the bodies of who I once called my friends and family. My home. It was left to burn."

So that's the first paragraph, please tell me what you think and constructive criticism is appreciated

Now I'm also trying to figure out a title and a cover. I just have one title idea and that's "What Do They Know Of War?"

And here's some stuff I found that could be a good cover. Please tell me which one you like, and if you have a better idea of what the title should be, please don't be afraid to tell me! I'm bad with names. And titles. And covers. I'm not fit to be a writer, lol.

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