Pride VS Pack

Prologue

Please note that this is a work of fiction and all of this came from my imagination and it's not to offend anyone of anything. I researched some stuff to come up with some of the legends and used google translate for some language so if there is a problem please let me know and I will fix it .
Do not copy any part of this story as all of it belongs to me. This is like my real actual first book that I'm actually trying on so please give me constructive criticism I need it.
If your just going to say my book is trash and not give any pointers then keep it too yourself.
Since that's done let's get to the story.

Prologue
Aitan woke up abruptly. He listened closely to see what was going on ,and quickly jumped out of bed.  He felt extreme worry in his chest as he rounded the hall way to get to his eldest daughters room.
He could hear the others in his house getting out of their own beds to see who the hell was screaming bloody murder in the dead of night.
He rushed quickly to his 9 year olds bed and grabbed her shoulders and shook her abruptly to wake her up. Her eyes shot open just as her older brother walked in, followed close behind by her mother carrying her 3 year old sister. "Hey Klein ster, shhhh calm down baby what is it? What did you see?" He asked as he held her in his arms.
She was sweating bullets and shaking so bad her teeth were chattering. They knew she was showing signs of being the prophetess but they didn't know it would be giving her visions to make her terrified. At least not yet.
He was still rubbing her hair and whispering sweet things in her ear when her brother bent down and grabbed her hand.
"What did you see little cub. You have to tell us it's the only way we can make it better."
Everyone looked at her expectantly. Her mother trying to hush the now crying toddler.
She looked into her brothers eyes, and then her fathers. She took a deep breath. Then took two more.
She stared up at her  father and said in a raspy voice, "I saw them papa I saw the duiwelhonde," she breathed some more and said again slowly as if It'd hurt her to speak. "I saw the wolves."
Her father stared at her in shock and kissed her on her forehead and handed her to her brother.
His wife looked at him for answers." I have to tell you after I call my brother."
He ran to his room and grabbed his phone. He pressed his little brothers name and of course he answered on the second ring. "What is it Aitan? What's happened."
"She saw wolves Tyrese. My Klein ster saw wolves."
There was a pause on the phone, then his brother said in a commanding tone, "Come home tomorrow, we will talk."  He answered his brother with a quick okay, and hung up.
After he finished he went straight to his daughters room to rock her to sleep. He still didn't think it's fair for her powers to come in so young, before she had even shifted. She was still his little cub. His Klein ster. His little star.