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Hi this is my first one so please be nice
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Naruto's POV

I was walking down the street.The test was over I had finally passed I could finally move on I was so happy that I didn't care about what the villagers said I was so happy that I didn't notice someone coming behind me. Until I felt something hit me on the head then I blacked out.

When I woke up the first thing I noticed was I was in a room. It was dark,damp,and smelly I felt fear coming up my spine then I heard laughing. Deep,cold,cruel laughter then some villagers started to come in they had whips,hammers,knives,and more i knew I was going to get hurt much worse than usual thats when the pain started.

_________*Time skip weeks later*______

'Where are you naruto' thought the third hokage(i don't know his name) "Hokage-sama we found naruto but he's not the same" "What let me see him" I rushed to the hospital to see naruto-kun he seemed fine that was until I saw his eyes they were so dull it was like looking into the eyes of a dead person so so empty I grabbed the nearest garbage can and puked
That when he noticed me

Sorry if it sucked please tell me if i made any mistakes or some advice
Also here's what he's going to where in the future

Sorry if it sucked please tell me if i made any mistakes or some advice Also here's what he's going to where in the future

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