Irreplaceable

"I'm sorry marlene " her boyfriend wayne told her .
The only thing that crossed her mind was how many times the guy had hurt her even without her noticing it
She couldn't change him even when she tried . It was  as if her hands were tied even though they were not .  She looked at him and the only thing she could say was " I'm sorry too " ..
She left the room with no other word , even though it was so clear in her heart that she wanted to hug him for the last time .
So practically they were in their last year doing their A level but in different schools doing different sets of subjects . How they met is just a different story , but to be honest how can she survive all this drama thats going on in her life ?

Practically this is my first book to write.If its good enough just let me know but if as Terrible also let me know . Let's be honest . thanks.