Black,Its cruelty strings free.
Wild,as an run away animal.
Its darkness swallows you into a nightmare that never ends.
Black the color that Shields me from the light.
Its a veil that protects me form the wrong path.
Its taste is stale as an raw onion.
Its sight knock you out.
Its sound makes you shiver,
as if you were haunted.
Its touch turns you into a whole new person.
A Person of no kindness or friendliness.
Is a color you cant make friend with.
Its a color that has no life.
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I wrote this is 6th grade. I will be doing a before and after.
This is before, after is how i improved it from now.Ill do this later