Avneil ff:one shots

will u forgive me-3

Neela:avni ek minute...

Neela turns to neil...

Neela:neil..kal kya hua tha...

Neil(confused):aap kehna kya chahti hai neela maa...

Neela(shouts):neil kal tumne aisa kya kiya ki aaj meri bacchi yeh ghar chodke jaane ki baat kar rahi hai...kal aisa kya kiya tumne jiske vajah se aaj meri avni itna royi hai....kya kiya tumne neil...jiski vajah se use lag raha hai ki tum usse chod doge aur juhi ko apnaoge....

All were shocked by sudden outburst of neela including avni while neil was shockingly looking at avni....

Others were too much stunned seeing neela like this as she was always a silent person...

But she had enough now...from childhood avni has suffered so much and now because of neil...she is breaking from inside....the way avni asked neela about her wish to go ayesha maa..it gave her goosebumps...she knows that there is definately something wrong....

Here her daughter is crying and breaking like anything and these people are chilling here...

Though they are doing this unintentionally...as they don't know that how avni is emotionally traumatized....

Neil:maa...aap yeh kya keh rahi hai...avni...

He turns to avni who was ignoring him...

Neil:avni...neela maa yeh kya keh rahi hai...tum...tum ghar chodkar..i mean..kyun....

Avni ignores him and starts walking out of house...

Neil immediately stops her holding her hand...

Neil:nahi avni..tum aise nahi jaa sakti...answer me....tumhe aisa kyun lagta hai ki main tumhe chod dunga....

Avni jerks his hand and stares at him with so much anger in her eyes ..

Avni:toh tum batao neil..mujhe kaisa lagna chahiye..tell me....mujhe kaisa lagna chahiye jab mera pati raat main mujhe chodke uske ex ke saath time spend kar raha ho...mujhe kaisa lagna chahiye jab mera pati subah uthke apne patni ke paas na hoke apni ex ke room main uske saath maze se gappe lada raha ho...tell me....hai koi javaab tumhare paas....do u have any answer for this.....

Neil is standing there numb after listening her accusations....yes...he actually ignored her from last 2 days..though it was unintentionally..still he ignored her...

Realisation hits him like anything...suddenly he was feeling guilty....

But he was just trying to make juhi comfortable as she has almost spend 5 years of her life in that hell...

But in this process he was actually making avni uncomfortable....

A tear escape his eye which he immediately wipe...

Neil:av..avni..plz...mujhe...mujhe galat mat samjho...its..its just that..ki...ki juhi uss rangmahal main almost 5 saal thi...so..so i was just trying to make her comfortable here...but...but i never realise that u will be insecure....i ..i m sorry....

Juhi:haa avni...neil sach keh raha hai...humare beech aisa kuch nahi hai...

Avni(yells):stay out of it juhi....don't u dare to interfere here...yeh hum husband wife ke beech ki baath hai..so just stay out of it....

Juhi:i...i m sorry ..i...i was just justifying...

Avni cuts her off...

Avni:why..why are u justifying him...lawyer ho uski...joh use defend karogi yaa justify karogi....who are u.....

Juhi looks down as she was on verge of crying....

Even neil was feeling ashamed of his actions....

Avni:haa neil...kya keh rahe the tum....voh 5 saal tak vaha kaid thi that's the reason u were making her comfortable right...but shaayad tum bhul gaye ki tumhari ek biwi bhi hai..right...

Neil was all time nodding negatively and was silently sobbing....

Neela comes forward and looks at neil...

Neela:I know neil..ki juhi ne bahot kuch saha hai inn 5 saalon main.....but iska matlab yeh nahi ki tum apni patni ko aise ignore karoge....juhi ne pichle 5 saal main bahot kuch saha lekin avni toh bachpan se sehti aa rahi hai..uska kya haa....

Avni:chodiye na maa...aap bhi kis insaan se yeh keh rahi hai...voh insaan joh apni wife ko insecure karke apni ex ko comfortable feel kara raha tha....

Neil is only looking at avni with so much hurt....

Obviously her words were hurting him like anything....

Suddenly avni felt dizzy and next second she collapsed on floor with thud falling unconscious....

Neil(shouts):avniiii....

He take her in his arms and starts patting her cheeks...

Neil:avni..avni utho....avni...

And next second his breath got stuck in his throat seeing something horrible....

Neil(scared):khoon(blood)

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