harmless date gone horribley wrong

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It was late one night and a teenage couple decided to take a drive. The couple have been dating for two months and were happy. The guy, who's name was

Luke decided he wanted to give his girlfriend (Marissa) a little scare just for fun. He didnt mean for it to be harmful just a little something so marissa would

be crawling into his arms. he decides to go off road and into this deserted area with forest surrounding it. the couple was just sitting in the car staring at their

surroundings listening to music and cuddling. Finally Luke had to go to the bathroom so he told marissa he would be right back. Marissa was worried

about being alone but she just told him to hurry back soon. Ten minutes passed and she was getting kind of worried. Now it has been fifteen minutes and she

decides to yell out the window "Luke if you are trying to scare me its not funny just come back! " Marissa waited five more minutes and then yelled out " Luke

i am giving you five more minutes then im driving away without you! This is NOT funny! I am serious! " Marissa waits five more minutes and there was no return

of Luke. She turns the key and tried to back out but the car wouldnt budge. She tried again but the car wouldn't budge. Marissa finally decided she was stuck

in mud but she was too afraid to look and make shure. She decides to give up and Marissa crawls in the back of Luke's car and bundles up in a blanket and

tries to fall asleep. Marissa could not fall asleep in fact she was wide awake in fear. There was a strange scratching noise on the top part of the car but she

figured it to just be a low branch scratching the car. Marissa cloesd her eyes and tried to fall asleep but then again the scratching noise would not go away.

Finally she falls asleep and the next thing she knows it is light outside (morning) and a police car is pulling up to the side of Luke's car. Marissa rolls

down the window as she see's a police officer get out of his car and walk towards her. As the police officer approaches he has a horror strook look on his

face. He calmly tells Marissa in a shakey voice to step out of the car and don't look back. Marissa steps out of the car and cant resist looking back. There she

see's her boyfriend Luke hung by his feet over the car from a tree. His finger tips were barley touching the car roof. His finger nails were completley

gone from scratching. He was scratching the top of the roof trying to tell Marissa he needed help.

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⏰ Last updated: Oct 28, 2010 ⏰

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