This is my first real(??) story, so this is an experiment of sorts. It's no surprise that I want to be a successful, published author one day. I've been working towards this goal for awhile. That being said, I need helpful feedback. I want to know if this is something that you guys want more of, because this is as much for all of you reading this as it is for me.
I'm trying to get even better at writing, there is always room for improvement. If you see any accidental errors in my writing, please let me know so I can fix it and know in the future. If you like this, there may be more coming soon. Like I said, this is just an experiment.
Also, I added this to the humor category because it is funny, but it is also a mystery, and kind of teen fiction, but you can only add one category and humor fits best. Have to make what you have work you feel me?
To make sure while you read I don't confuse you; there are 2 different narrators, both Andy and Sebastian. They both speak in first person, and it switches points of view between the two every chapter. Chapter one starts with Sebastian, and chapter two begins Andy's perspective. It will say which point of view in the chapter title to try to avoid confusion.
So please, have fun reading this train wreck of an investigation, led by two stoners outcasted by their entire graduating class. Thank you for reading, from the bottom of my heart.
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Solving the Murder of Mr. O'Connor
Humor(Warnings: Vulgar language, drugs, alcohol, bullying, death. Read at your own risk) (Spring 2006) High school seniors Sebastian Mendel and Andy Johnson are outcasts. When their racist teacher is found dead in his classroom, and the star of the varsi...
