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Dhari's POV
She looks at and says "why did you miss that shot? You usually don't miss"
Damn I'm too overwhelmed.. She makes me nervous, especially when she looks at me with those big brown eyes. There's a force pulling me to her I just want to hold her here, in the backyard where the moon and stars are present, she looks even more beautiful than ever under this light.
I don't take my eyes off her, and I won't.
I finally decide to walk and stand right in front of her. "Because of you. "
"What? "
I just look at her and I know she knows what I mean.
"Dhari.. "
"I know. I know you're confused, too confused that you don't want to say anything, I know you, and I know how you think. I'm confused too, so let me just tell you something, let me hold you. You don't have to do if you don't want me to." she doesn't reply but she doesn't look angry either. So I do it. I get closer, and when she doesn't step back, I just wrap my arms around her gently and pull her to my chest.
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The girl with the black cap
RomanceThis is a story about a Kuwaiti girl who moves to the US to study, she moves in with her aunt. She has developed a crush on a guy who plays basketball for her school in Kuwait but he has moved two years ago to the US because of his dad's business p...
