- The best ang scene 32!! Although hindi deep kiss ang nangyari, still kiniliti 'yong sistema ko. And of course the following chapters wherein we get to know Steve, ramdam ko sakit niya teh.
- I also want to say na sobrang laman ng flashback chapters, nasagot niya halos lahat ng question ko.
⏺ Technical Issues
• Grammar
- Hindi sumakit ang ulo ko sa pagbabasa, I really enjoyed it. Halatang mahilig ka magbasa which is your advantage because we can only learn how to write if we know how to read.
• Punctuations
- About your dialogue tags and action beats, I noticed na madalas mong mapagpalit 'yong commas and periods for each. I know you are very much aware of the differences between the two, but I just want to share what I've read. According sa mga nababasa kong guidelines, a dialogue tag refers to which character is speaking while an action beat is what the character does (Gerth, 2016) *ayern may pag-cite na lol*.
- In dialogue tags, it is always followed by a comma except for one case. I'll elaborate these different cases. While in action tags it will always be followed by a period.
FIRST CASE: Dialogue + Dialogue Tag
example: "Pero, marami kang maaabalang sasakyan," she said(lowercase if pronouns ang gamit such as she and he pero syempre capital kapag proper nouns)
SECOND CASE: Dialogue Tag + Dialogue
example: She said, "Pero marami kang maaabalang sasakyan." (always use a comma after the dialogue tag and before the opening quotation mark)
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THIRD CASE: Dialogue + Dialogue tag w/ a comma+ Dialogue (meaning na sa gitna siya ng isang buong sentence/dialogue)
example: "What?" bulalas ni Steve, " kaibigan mo na siya?" (ang hirap i-explain basta ganto format hehe)
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