Romance gone action

chapter 1: anuther earth

Tom hollands(Peter parker) point of view:
Earth 1

    Tom blinked his  eyes hurt and he can't see a thing around himself, all of a sudden he remembered what happened at dinner. The portal in the kitchen...makayla screaming...It came back in a rush, "wares makayla??!! We're am i??!! What's going on??!!" he started  freaking out. There was silence for a few minutes ,then a scream. Tom  stood up his head hurting, heart racing.

   "Malayla?!" He  yelled. There was a soft whimper . over  to his my left there was a woman she looked so similar to Natasha in the avenger movies. As If she could hear Tom she stood up, "I'm Natalie." She frowned cradling her arm, her leg bent. " what have you done to makayla??!! " toms voice cracked and he cringed his voice hasn't cracked for years.

    "You mean what haven't she done to me! She was trained harder then even my mother I think she's okay!" Natalie hissed threw  her teeth. "Tom!" Makayla ran out from the shadows. Makayla's hands were slashed from the landing, he   realised there was a long cut on his arm, it stung out of place from the rest of him.

    Makayla ran over but as soon as she was about to put her arm over toms head, Natalie took out her fist smiling and reached to punch makayla. Makayla surprisingly twirled around and grabbed the woman's fist, remembrance flashed Makaylas face "what? Did I ruin you moment?" Makayla said in a smart alike( sassy, funny) voice (like funny spiderman) .  Natalie screeched in pain, " you need to remember who you are before you do something stupid. " Natalie gasped. Makayla right away let shocked that she had done such thing.

   This was the first time since we got here that I even really looked at makayla. Her dress looked lose and was barely staying on, like my clothes. She looked....younger.

   "What's going on here?!" A loud booming voice from behind said. Natalie smiled, "Nothing just letting are spiders from earth 3 having  there fun." Me and makayla turned around and was surprised to be faced by the.....avenger's.

( Like they were real they were all suited up but instead of iron man there was iron woman instead of Natasha there was natalie, natasha's daughter.)

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Authors note
I may reword this chapter but for now here it is.
I would love it if you have me ideas even though I probably won't use them right now because I have a few ideas.
You should read the first book: but your you
That book is going over major editing and rewording right now.  But thank you for reading I probably won't update for a few days because I need this book to be somewhat good. And if your confused feel free to comment about it to clarify and plz don't cuss in my comments.
Goal for me to update next chapter : 2 reads (I may do it before the goal though)
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