-I entered this in a local short story competition, and I just wanted to ask your opinion. THANKS. you guys RAAAWWK(: -
I looked at the river below, and the tree holding me in place. I couldn’t think or breathe. I watched him circle around my little sister, deciding her fate. I wanted to scream, run away, but couldn’t. His fingers snapped at his assistant, and my sister entered the deep river.
