Title: 7-E. Quisumbing Outing
Genre: Mystery / Thriller
Username: ImMattyXXZ
➡Title:
Parang hindi bagay yung title sa genre, hindi rin clear kung bakit 7-E. Quisumbing Outing.
➡Blurb/Story Description:
Maganda yung description thrilling talaga, at maganda rin yung story idea.
➡Book Cover:
Ang masasabi ko sa cover is it's very nice kaso mas maganda kung nag add ka ng subtitles at nag add ka pa ng konting effects pa, pero overall maganda.
➡Prologue:
(no prologue)
Sana nilagyan mo ng prologue para mas maganda kasi prologues give a lot more details for the readers para rin alam namin kung ano ang mangyayari bago ito mangyari.
➡ Chapter 1-3:
Maganda naman at feel ko talaga yung story.
➡ Epilogue:
(wala pang epilogue)
➡ Characterization:
Maganda talaga yung pag characterize and I'm speechless.
➡ Plot:
Since wala pa yung chapter 3, chapter 2 palang ako and so far maganda naman.
➡ Lesson:
Overall maganda yung story pero kung gagawa ka po ng mystery/ thriller po, at the end of the chapters add a question to be more thrilling.
➡Message:
Remember to add prologues next time so it would be better.
➡ Hearts
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